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NintendoGal55


I'm a Canadian gal who loves to write. :D

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As a filly living in Canterlot Castle, Twilight Sparkle either wakes up from a scary nightmare, as well as missing her family, or a thunderstorm, Princess Celestia comforts her. Just because she was her mentor didn't mean she couldn't offer a motherly touch.

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I enjoy these kinds of stories, brings light onto the mother-daughter relationship Celestia and Twilight share, rather than the sexual one.

Moustache for you :moustache:

579571 The latter type is just plain weird, I agree.

A neat little heartwarming story. Very nicely done.

Well, that was sweet.

Very cute. Filly Twilight!!!! :twilightsmile:

imaclosetbrony has it dead center. This is the type of relationship that would develop

Now here's a story that I wish more fictions would explore, the development of Celestia's relationship with Twilight during her student years. The story you got here is a heart warming one, to be sure.

Perhaps a bit to repetitive in some places. Like how Twilight's reaction seems largely the same to the things she's afraid or saddened by, but that doesn't detract too much from the overall theme and quality of the story itself.

Great Job!

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...Son of a bitch. I never thought I'd have some bloke here mess with my paternal instincts like this. This is disgustingly cute, criminally cute... just. Cute.

That being said, I actually really love you've given Twilight and Celestia the relationship that I've always wanted them to be portrayed as having. No sex, no illogical romance, just a really sweet mother-daughter connection. My only complaint with this story is that Twilight herself isn't always acting like a child of her age would, prodigy or not. That's a small nitpick though, and it all goes down to character interpretation in the end.

Have all my thumbs and favs. You've earned them.

That was adorable. I love how you showed Twilight's first night living in the castle. All of her earlier excitement faded as she became homesick.

I liked the counting trick with the thunder. Reminded me of Poltergeist.

Very sweet and, once again, adorable. :twilightsmile:

I have words for you, sir.
They are, in order, Squee, D'Awww, and Hnnnng.
Well written!

Naww, cute. :3

YES angels bowling holy crap that's exactly what my parents told me when I was little :rainbowkiss:

579571
Aww! Spike's moustache! xD What better rating than that?

Thank you! :D That's exactly what I was going for, to just bring forth a little look on how much of a second mother Celestia can be to Twilight. :twilightsmile:

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I agree! I would love to see more stories like this, that touch on the relationship Celestia and Twilight had over their years together. It really is pretty sweet, and plus as someone who adores both characters, it was definitely fun to do. Thank you very much! :pinkiesmile:

This is such a sweet story, I love it :heart:
I hope there would be more chapters underway :fluttercry:

I've always loved the mother-daughter relationship that exists between Twilight and Celestia.

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Me too! It's very heartwarming. :twilightsmile:

D'awwwww...

D'aaaaw. Thank you for the entertaining and heartwarming read.

Be careful of using the line

It was a dark and stormy night.

For people like me it always makes us add "And the robbers were in the den.":rainbowlaugh:

1091732 :rainbowlaugh: I'll keep that in mind! I can't help it though, the line is just awesome. X'D

Awwwwww. I love fics that show the motherly side of Celestia, not the Trollestia side or the Twilestia side.

1137074 Thanks! Same here, honestly! :pinkiehappy:

:fluttercry: Salty, manly tears.

I love it. Much better when they have a mother-daughter than the.... ugh, sexual kind. That's just plain creepy.
Nice work on this cute story, I grant to you a moustache as a reward: :moustache:

Loved it very cute :moustache: moustache to you :rainbowkiss:

1091732 wrote : "Be careful of using the line

It was a dark and stormy night.

For people like me it always makes us add "And the robbers were in the den.":rainbowlaugh:"

And when I see ""And the robbers were in the den."" I then add "and they were fighting Ranma Saotome, or even Terry Bogard."^_^

What I don't understand is that this story hasn't more likes
It is one of the cutest I've ever read and definitely the cutest Momlestia fic
Have a moustache for this: :moustache:
also, I hope you don't mind me adding this story to my group "Momlestia"

2190083 Awww, thanks! I love Momlestia stories, I definitely want to try to do some more if I can. :pinkiehappy:

Absolutely, you go right ahead! :twilightsmile:

Definitely one of the better Celestia/Twilight stories I've ever read.

Celestia is best mom. :heart:

“Spiders?” Twilight looked at her with surprise. “You're afraid of spiders?”
“Yes. I have been ever since I was a filly...” Celestia admitted, chuckling a bit. “Oh, it is silly, isn't it? I wouldn't say I have a phobia against them, oh no. I just am not fond of them, and would prefer they didn't come near me.”

Uh oh I just hope Celestia never encounters dr smith and his legion of spiders! :rainbowlaugh:

Celestia is best second mom. :twilightsmile:

Omg this story should be made into a movie! Or well a short film I guess.

very sweet, I wish their relationship was explored more in the show, id like to see just how close the two really are.

I may or may not have squee'd and flailed about. :twilightblush:

:raritystarry: This is an instant fav and read later! I also see Celestia as a mother figure for Twilight. :twilightsmile:

So sweet and those lullabies, excuse me.........zzzzzzzzzzz:ajsleepy:

You know what I just realized? Twilight has two mothers, Celestia and Twilight Velvet. Spike has two mothers, his birthmother and Twilight. So Spike has two mothers and one of his mothers has two mothers. This was a nice story. Great writing.

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Spike has two mothers, but neither is his birth mother. His mothers are Celestia and Twilight, though Twilight is somewhere between a mom and a big sister.

3021516 I don`t consider Celestia his mom. Also, I think that Twilight is his mom/sister/BFF/roommate/boss. I still think that she is a mom above the others though.

the only words i have to describe this is D'aawwww

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