A very fine addition, I loved it! Hope to see more of Game Day?
I really like the setting.

Man, I freaking love sky captain.

Yep, very pleased with how this went. Believable and heartwarming. Good job.

When I saw the tag for this chapter I was expecting well a dirty thing but not such a heartwarming chapter.. Honestly just reading this chapter made me remember my first time and it was very similar, just enjoying and exploring the one you love. The warm feeling you get, screw the pervy side of it, just the connection you have feels amazing to have them on your arms and reading this made me remember those feelings all over again <3

Very good.

Very, very good.

Although I'm sad we never got to see Twilight meeting Rainbow Dash's parents. Dash's friendship with the cute nerd must have been a surprise, and seeing the shy Twi saying hi would be adorable.

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I think I might populate this with any oneshot that arrives. It has been fun and refreshing to write short stories for cute teen TwiDash. So mutual parent meeting sounds like a good plan. Especially if writing Days carries on being such a slog through writers block.

This, very beautiful.

You write the most AAAMMMAAAZZINNGG Human/TwiDash fics! =D

I can see "Stealth" being a movie the pair of them would enjoy: Dash engrossed in the action-packed dogfighting and combat sequences while Twi points out all of the points (pro and con) of artificial intelligence and how it was portrayed in said movie.

Soon she ventured downward and couldn't help but laugh. “So the carpet matches the curtains does it?” That got a rude noise in reply. Truly, Twilight had not expected to find stripes down there too.

Um...? O_o

Loved it. Skill like this is indeed a

5 stars.