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This was a very interesting fic. I wonder if Twilight ever discovered the "evidence" that Rainbow Dash left in the trash can?
It was okay up until that point. Your choice in language is not exactly what I would say in a diaper clop fic, and over all was an extreme turn off.
6205023 I had my own concerns about that as well. I edited out much of the language, especially the parts I thought sounded rather out of place. I hope you think this sounds a bit better, or do you think I should cut out more?
Very good story, might be better with less scat though, but otherwise awesome.
6205224 Thanks. Yeah, scat isn't for everyone, and I didn't even have that part in mind when I was originally planning this story in my mind, but there is so little graphic scat work out there, and most of it is either terrible or a trollfic, that I decided to try to help out that little niche community of sick freaks like myself who are into that sort of thing.
One of my favorite diaper fics. From the wearing to the using to the fantasies, I enjoyed every detail. Would love to see more stories like this!
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Oh come on! If one person complains, it doesn't automatically mean they're right.
Raibow Dash is exploring a new fetish, it's perfectly fine to experiment with the language. It doesn't have to be tame. Who knows, maybe she'll find out she's into even weirder things.
6206137 Well, I wasn't really a big fan of the wording there myself. It sort of reminded me of the dialog in a bad porno.
6205636 Thanks
6205005 It's sort of brief and maybe easy to overlook, but Rainbow hid the bag with the diaper in her saddlebag to sneak it home with her without getting caught.
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When I'm clopping, especially when I'm closer to climax, my fantasies are bad porno... So it isn't out of place.
Mmmf, love this story, it was great all round for me. I do hope you write more in the future, whether related to this or just diapers in general. Keep up the good work.
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Reading this original part, I feel both ways were acceptable. Its her first time, she's exploring, etc.
I really like the role of Pinkie in this story.
Overall, I like the story of the story if that makes sense. You had an actual plot that made sense and seemed plausible. There were very few spelling and grammar errors. This is one of my favorite stories on the subject so far, good work! 
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Thank you both. I probably will end up doing more stories, although it will probably take me a long time since I have a tendency to write a little, then stop, then write a little, then stop.
i like that hint , that's a good hint XD .....
mmm k so i'd say this is like 4k words to long , the middle spacing practically stopped and despite the high word count there was only 1 diapering instance , minimal character interaction , and 1 quick clop scene not even involving diapers.......
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The story is nice, so I'm not complaining it isn't heavily fetishistic, but yeah, I agree that a clop scene involving diapers would be great. Dash disposed of her dirty diaper too quickly.
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I was debating with myself on whether I should let the clop scene take place in the shower or while she was sitting in a messy diaper, and opted for the former. Perhaps next time, though.
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That would be great!
Friggin' awesome, if I do say so myself. The characters all feel in character, even Pinkie Pie (who, speaking from experience, is really easy to screw up,) the padded content was well written, and overall it's quite good.
It could use some very minor editing on a few small grammatical errors, and the middle but could be trimmed a bit, (As much as I like padded Twilight, the Truth or Dare segment felt like it should either have been extended and played out further or else cut for pacing,) but otherwise it's quite good.
(As a few other people have said, moving the clop to before she gets cleaned up would have been nice too, but that's personal preference.)
Keep writing!
6211102 Thanks for the feedback. The truth or dare/padded Twilight segment was mostly done to help develop Rainbow's sense of comfort in being diapered. With Twilight sharing the experience and explaining how there is nothing wrong with it Rainbow was able to feel more at ease and get rid of many of her negative feelings, ultimately making her more willing to wet later. That said, in retrospect I can see how putting Twilight in a diaper could be seen as a major tease since she never uses it.
lol only Pinkie Pie...
Wow, this was really good! It was good diaper smut, AND it was actually really well written! You almost never see that! Your characterization was totally spot on, and even apart from the fetish content it was quite fun to read. There are very few stories I feel that way about, but this is one of them.
I really hope you write a sequel! I would read it in a heartbeat. This particular interest is severely lacking fiction of the quality that you've demonstrated here.
I realy enjoyed reading this.
Wonder what happened to Twilight that night
6223718 Maybe that could be made into a fanfic?
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6206137 Complaining? It's called constructive criticism.
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"Ew, poop""over all was an extreme turn off" isn't constructive criticism.6205271 So true. It's very hard to find stories about ABDL themes that are well written and not troll fics. I'm also very glad I found this and will come back to it.
Thank you for making this!
100% loved it hope to see more
Very great story, i liked it all around. Even the more graphic lines.
I hope to see more from you in this kind of manner. It would definetly get a follow :)
Very well written, didn't spot 1 mistake.
This is one of my favourite stories about Diapers and Pee desperation. I enjoyed so much some parts when Rainbow woke up desperate in the middle of the night. These are my favourite sentences:
Hehe could you imagine that sensation?
I liked how you described the situation with Rainbow. It makes you understand better how desperate she was.
Another good way to describe how she felt in that moment and even how bad she needed to go.
Hehehe Rainbow silly filly, less cider the next time!
Thanks for write this awesome story. I loved it and I hope you write more soon.
6386652 Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
6387523 You're welcome. I hope you write more stories like this one soon.... and if you include Sweetie Belle you'll make me really happy
6388094 I've got a strictly scat story in the works right now, if that interests you. I doubt I will ever use Sweetie Belle though. I tend not to put the CMC in sexual situations.
6388816 Well... not really. I don't like scat, but thanks for the offer. I know it would be really awesome anyway. Don't mind what you put in it. You're an awesome writer
6389730 Thank you. I'll probably do more diapers and pee at some point.
huoh my god
(this is an amazing fucking fic by the way, in case my last comment didn't make that clear)
6507611 Thank you very much.
In this case in Rainbow's position, I wouldn't care if Twilight was upset about the dare. She and the others deliberately hit Rainbow with a guilt trip on this, so if one of them is made uncomfortable in turn, so be it.
That said, I think she is all the more mature for putting up with it, as opposed to walking out like she would have been largely justified in doing.
A further observation here. I think Rainbow Dash showed a lot more maturity than the others had a right to expect here, given that they...
A). Discussed a very personal issue of hers behind her back.
B). Decided on a course of action that would impact her, without her knowledge or consent.
C). Actively sought to guilt-trip her into compliance when she did not instantly agree.
I would personally suggest Rainbow demand something in return for her "indulgence." Maybe, since it was Twilight's idea, she agrees to wear one to every sleepover, as long as Twilight wears one too.
6685748 Thank you for your comments. You've really given this some thought. I guess the idea behind it was that they suspected she never would have even shown up for the sleepover if they told her ahead of time what they wanted her to do. Plus, it is, after all, intended to be a fetish story, and embarrassment and humiliation is often a big part of this particular fetish. From an objective standpoint though, you definitely have a point.
6686638 I guess it strikes a chord with me, and I think you're right about what Twilight and the others suspected, which does not change what they did, nor that it was wrong of them to do it.
I just feel that Rainbow Dash has a right here to be much angrier than she is. That she did not walk out is better than the others deserved.
Besides, her demanding that one or more or them wear diapers too ("It's not a big deal? Prove it!") has story potential.
6687289 Well, she did get Twilight to put one on during the truth or dare session.
6689212 I meant something long-term, like insisting Twilight wear one every time if she does. Meh, just me spouting thoughts.
Objectively speaking, she should just demand apologies from all of them.
6690093 Yes, probably so.
The lead up in the story was very good. It didn't focus entirely on making Dashie into diapers. It genuinely played through the entire sleepover, provided genuine justification for her to simply continue using the diaper, and lead to what was the 'climax' of the tale.
What could've helped the story is saving the indulging in great detail for another story. However it still works as someone who is first struck with something that tickles their sex drive would have a very hard time not seeing it all the way through. There is always that genuine curiousity that, once released, must be seen through with reckless abandon. Dash clearly had this and was clouded from logic by her mixed feelings that fed her to act upon an unknown fetish that totally went against all she had become known for.
Giving Dashie a liking to diapers in this story's sense works as the fetish can relate with letting go of living up to expectations either self-imposed or expected of by others. Dash was able to totally toss aside all the effort she put into her ego and pride to do something totally opposite of her day-to-day. Sometimes doing actions that feel risky, dangerous, or out-of-character are just what the mind and body need to trigger a self-indulging release.
Overall a great first write. You had lots of details but not too many that it made the story boring. The sleepover, character feelings, and catalyst (Getting drunk) allowed what ended the tale to make sense. Even pointing out how Dash was known for taking in too many drinks at prior sleepovers made everything all the more believable. That incident with Rarity's couch certainly would make friends not want to make a habit of having to clean up after their friend who had a reputation for losing bladder control while mentally inhibited.
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Thanks for the feedback. I suppose the reason for all the detail is that I wanted it to be a fetish story primarily, but also have a backstory worth reading.
I can't believe there still isn't a sequel to this. Was a great fic. I've been here for a while and this was one of the best I've read
Hey, i remember reading this a few years back. Nice to find it again, now that i have an account to save it with.