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Coming along nicely, thanks!

Please learn the difference between its and it's. You've made that error so many times.

Comment posted by Formerly Committed deleted Mar 20th, 2015

I'm not much of a fan of sexual diaper storys but I love scrible feathers storys which is why I like this story

5759979 it's not a big deal,

Grammar nazi

Theyir'er

5821374 You kidding? It is a big deal. It's common sense, and it is holding this author back.

5821419 it's only a big deal to those who make a big deal out of it

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"Nothing in all the world is more dangerous than sincere ignorance and conscientious stupidity."

Martin Luther King, Jr.

5822960 while I respect Mr. King and every thing he said, I'm fairly certain he was referring to the athourities ignoring black peoples justice. Not a website for making my little pony fanfiction for entertainment

5822972 Perhaps, but his words ring true even today. We cannot live on in ignorance. Nobody else stepped up to let the author know he was making simple mistakes in his story, so I felt it necessary to do so.

The supermarket was a large building standing roughly two stories tall. It contained a large, open expanse inside, providing plenty of space for shelves and a multitude of products all lined up in neatly organized aisles. Quiet muzak played away on the market's overhead speakers as ponies did their shopping. The numerous aisle contained a wide variety of ITEMS that attracted shoppers with their trusted brand names and vibrant PACKAGING. Ponies pushed along metal carts as they journeyed through the store, piling in the items they came for.

Quiet muzak played away

muzak should be music

5904233 'Muzak' was the intended word.

'Muzak' is synonymous with 'elevator music' and is the term used to describe a genre of light, jazzy music that is typically played overhead in shops, supermarkets, and elevators.

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"Muzak" is a term used to describe the type of ambient music played in places such as supermarkets, doctor's offices, and elevators.

seriously? that's the bullshit excuse that celestia came up with? the fucking country has ran just fine without having all of it's rulers there before, and i'm confident it would continue to do so. she's just a bitch.

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The keep up apparency is a ligit reason, how would it look in are world if the precedent or vice president suddly disappear for a few days or weeks without any real explanation. The media would go wile with it.

5913149 compared to what they'd do if they catch her in her current position? yeah, that's so much better.

YES

Although why didn't she just ask Celestia for a cure? Surely she could think of something.

My jaw DROPED through the floor when I realized how embarrassing that must have been

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It was a good

comment of the year

But seriously, I agree. This was a good chapter, and I'm really liking the story so far.

Oh, scribe... You never fail to turn me on.

Huh. For some reason FiM didn't tell me there were new chapters.

I wish you went into a bit more detail on the changings. Stuff like that would be a lovely addition.

A bit better this chapter, although I'd still love more detail. In addition to the changing, more detail on Twilight, uh... letting loose, so to speak.


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Same

No comments? Guess I'll fix that!

don't even know if I'd be good at it," Dash added. "I mean...I can't even change a diaper..."

"Never learned how?"

"I don't see how I could have. I mean it's not exactly a skill everypony picks up."

I've learned how. I've a little sister.

I'm liking this. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Cute end. I liked it, good job!

Sweet, thanks That was a fun ride!

Dash smirked at the teasing, feeling her cheeks flare up just a tiny bit. Maybe wearing diapers wasn’t so bad.

Don't jynx it! Next thing you know, this'll turn into Rainbows Curse all over again.

Aw! It ended more abruptly then I wanted it to, but I really enjoyed it. Have a fav and like!

I wish there was more detail on the changings.

So, I guess they found the counterspell "off-screen"?

Seeeequeeeeeel...?? :pinkiecrazy:

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