When Spitfire starts rooming with Rainbow Dash she finds out what the filly is really like.
-Disclaimer-
This story was first posted on the 30th of December in 2011, and the last chapter was posted on the 30th of April 2012. That means it has been four years since this story was started, and 3 years since the last update. A lot has happened to me in the last 4 years, and I am reminded of that by how awful this story is (Not that my writing has gotten any better). I'm headed on a new journey in life, but found this on an old hard drive and thought I'd re-upload it. I've kept all the authors notes, and terrible writing in tact, your welcome. I was such a chuckle-fuck ;A;
Chapters (17)
DASHFIRE, DASH FIRE!!!!!!!!!
The problem is: bad spelling
Moar.
what sonicbrony said
i agree with everypony above me :)
not a bad start.
Uh… not a bad start, but there are several things that needs to be changed:
1. Name's Soarin' not Sorin'
2. Work on your sentences.
Clean it up a bit and you've got a solid story here. Tracking, but I won't rate till it's been tidied up and there's more to it.
Also, DASHFIRE.
'Nuff said.
well I think Soaring would have tried harder to help his lo g time friend.
But over all I like this idea a lot, just slow down a bit when you write and have fun with it!
Oh and make longer chapters too
cant wait for more!
Wow I feel like a jack ass! I wrote this yesterday, thought I posted it, but I didn't!
minor spelling error it's "sexist" godd story keep it up.
Hate my grammer!
Ug, I feel terrible.
My vacation kept me really busy, and I didn't get to this very quickly at all. I'm sorry. All three chapters are proofread now, and in your inbox. And you really shouldn't thank me until I, you know, actually proofread them? 
Er, wait, you don't have to thank me at all! 
Spelling error. Company, not compony. Unless you planned a little pun in there..
Follow, not fallow.
Yes thank you every one for your nonstop attack on my grammar.
My editor was on vacation but is back now andnthings will look better in chapters to come, thank you - Dropbeat
YAY ANOTHER UPDATE :D
keep up the good chapters, also the asshole on tumbler is obviously not a bronie.
"Jimmys? They're called sprinkles!"
Sorry, In Maine we call them "Jimmys"
123633
you only get away with calling them jimmy because you live in Mane 
o.o ...
wow.....
i dont know what to say
So....
(....wait WHY THE BUCK IS THERE NO SPITFIRE EMOTICON?!?!)
Sweet!!!
Is "Skyfire" related to Spitfire?
And what was with the quotation marks?
The're not related, I was just using the quotation marks to display her name.
126239
1. you dont use quotations make to make a name aparent in a scentince. you use caps
2. why is it that in almost every fic ive read with Dash as a mane charicter, her parrents have died in her past?
(3. did u c wut i did thar?)
hmm.. I dunno it seems like you wanted to get over with this chapter asap, I think you maybe could have shown more of their emotions and how they fell asleep was a bit fast in my opinion.
Maybe you should think about taking more time to write the chapters.
but other than that good chapter, keep them coming.
>>demonoid47
But yeah I did see what you did there.
Yeah well......you spelt sentence wrong!
>>Moonwolf
I completely agree with on this. I'm not particularly happy with that chapter but it was my first time doing a big emotional sene. I might do a rewright of it.....
98596 Pfft She said Soarin "The boss. He never thought you would leave, It hurts him more than you think," Soarin' explained.
FAILURE!!
This Is very interesting
Hoping there will be FireDash
101677 SHE SAID COMPANY!!! WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP DOING THIS SAYING THERES A SPELLING MISTAKE WHEN THERES NOT!!!!
Good Story
im reading it to fast Longer chapters please?
on to the next chapter
101680 Seriously it says Follow!
I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!
Ohhh SpitFires Got a Crush!
Hehehe
But seriously this is a good fanfic
Awwww
SpitFire and RainbowDash Sitting in a tree K I S S I N G
First comes Love then comes Marriage then comes Spitfire with a baby Carriage (ADOPTED!)
yeah, this chapter was pretty good. im not saying it was th best. but i can see you tried hard. The part where spitfire just comes out and says it was kinda unrealistic. It was kinda like a "Guess what! Its like this! Done!" kinda moment. There wasn't any lead up. it kind of felt like she just spontaniosly decided it right there on the spot. The chapter felt a little rushed and short. But apart from that, it was good. Im tracking this story. :)
>> Vinyl-Scratch
-Theengineerbrony
Again, totally see where your coming from with this. Need to do I bit of rewriting on all the chapters!
Also, No Spitfire emoticon? I am dissapoint :(
REWROTE, HISTORY UNVEILED! AGAIN! BLARGH!
I hunger for fics. You are STARVING ME!!!
lol i couldnt put it better :D
123633
No we don't... The only Mainers I've EVER heard call sprinkles 'Jimmys' are my grandparents! And before you ask, yes, I DO live in Maine. I've lived in Turner, Subbattus, Mechanic Falls, Livermore Falls, Lisbon, Lewiston, Auburn and Bowdoinham.
But good story so far! A little too rushed IMO, but that's just my AP English side kicking in...
132428
I guess I wrote that with the wrong tone...
I wasn't trying to be condescending, it was meant to be just an offhand remark. My apologies if I wasn't clear on that... 
There's no need for you to be sorry for anything, I was the one who came off as a jerk.
CONFESS CONFESS CONFESS CONFESS AND DONT SLOW DOWN I WANT TO READ MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS IS MY LIKE FAVE FANFIC EVER!!!!!
>> Fluttershys at my house :)
Thank you! I love your enthusiasm
133503 No Problem
your first chapter is the name of my fic
my reaction :3
You had to say that title. My soul is burning again.
So, is there relationship becoming more mother daughter? cause that what it seems like.