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thestargrazer


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i read so good today after i broke my arm. can't wait for more.

this is interesting story, i hope to see more of this story soon:pinkiehappy:

well this was a little short even for my taste. Still it was fun to see that the spell is getting more and more out of control. Will it start affecting her mind too.

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I'm not really a fan of AR and MR, so sorry but no. You'll have to wait and see what happens :)

And don't worry, this was the shortest chapter - plus I drew a more detailed picture to compensate for the short entry.

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It can be impossible but the same thing happened to me dude!:pinkiegasp:

I'm afraid that I can't quite seem to find your FA art. I found Day 0 (i.e. the cover art), but when I try to advance, it tells me I don't have permission to see the photo. Do I need an account?

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They're set as mature, so yeah, you do... alternatively you could find them on derpibooru, just check my artist tag "artist:stargrazer".

this is getting intersting

great to see an other chapter so soon. so Twilight is actually liking her situation, i hope this continues for a while.

How does this have so many downvotes and so few upvotes? I know fetish stories often get a lot of flack just for being fetish stories, sure, but this is pretty great and I'm surprised it doesn't have more fans. The journalist writing style is well done, the humorous touches are nice, and while I'm not personally a fan of heavy leaking, it's done pretty well, too.
Keep doing what you're doing!

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I learned not to care about downvotes on derpibooru. I had worse pics with a higher score there. And look at "Just a Peek", it's even fetishier and yet it has a higher score.
Thanks for your kind words though.

well discords in trouble

6750845 Here here Living, this story is awesome

I myself liked this story who cares what other people say

please continue with celestial being incredibly motherly

Hmm... The bit with Discord seemed rushed. Considering his character, it's out of character for him to be so upfront and helpful when Twilight is in such an 'Amusing' predicament.
Overall it's good, but the side characters all seemed like secondary inclusions and not well characterized, possibly falling victim to the unique journal log framing device which hampered real dialogue.

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Can't really defend my case there. The side characters were written as side characters. I didn't put much effort into writing Discord, Pinkie, or Spike. I tried to characterize Celestia though, hope at least that part was good.
It might feel rushed because I wanted to wrap up the story on Day 6.

Eh not sure why I read though it all but eh have a like

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Thanks for the like.
Are you Canadian? :D

And so, Rar Twilight's friend, never got her problem solved, She messed herself in front of Canterlot nobility, her dress career ruined, she sat around eating Ice cream with Twilight for the rest of her days. However, Spike managed to take advantage of her sadness and had Three beautiful children with her, Thus acting as a living peace treaty between Dragons and ponies.

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Lol'd

But actually the anti-bedwetting spell did work, so Twilight's friend's problem got solved ;)

Loving this story Stargazer

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Thank you ^^
It's Stargrazer btw ;)

Lol could only happen to twilight XD good story tho :)

I enjoyed reading that Hope there's a sequel

the friend is Rainbow Dash:rainbowkiss:

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Or Rarity. I actually have an idea for both of them if I ever make a sequel, I just lack the time and determination to start writing.

I liked it. A different story and the ending was sweet and understanding.

And now things have gotten weird. I must continue. For research reasons! Yeah...

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Yep. Say goodbye, Dissy!

Hi dear author,
I am an ABDL fan of brony in China. I would like to translate it and post the translation on Chinese MLP fan fiction websitehttps://tieba.baidu.com/f?kw=%E6%88%91%E7%9A%84%E5%B0%8F%E9%A9%AC%E9%A9%B9%E5%B0%BF%E5%B8%83%E6%98%AF%E9%AD%94%E6%B3%95&ie=utf-8. I promise I'll post the link to this page on it and declare that this is a translation work and you are the original writer. I will appreciate it if you can give me the chance!

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