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Twilight Sparkle and Spike share an almost mother-son relationship. This relationship is reflected in a brief scene as Twilight tucks the young dragon into bed for the night.

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I always thought his mom would be Celestia.

Nice little fanfic, I haven't seen a whole lot of fanfics that focus on the more mother-son element to Twilight and Spike, and I thought you did it quite well for how simple it was. Very nicely done.

The last lines came to pass way too soon...

:twilightangry2: Greedy little lizard!

:raritystarry::rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::fluttercry::ajbemused:

:moustache: I said I was sorry

Daaaawww. So Cute i Love fic's like this great work.

Cute. Could do with some more fleshing out, but nice.

I'm going to quit fabrication I tried making a story followed all the steps and it wasn't summited

so I quit.

7694732 It depends on what you consider canon.
Lauren Faust said her head canon was that Celesita raised Spike before giving him to Twilight, and most fans consider that the case. However Spike being raised by Celesita has never stated or shown in the show itself.
The MLP comic however had a recent issue that showed that Twilight raised Spike from the moment of her first day of school.

Aww, so sweet. I always love mother-son stories between these two.

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Spike does literally say "You're not mommy" at Twilight though, I think in Winter Wrap Up.

Either way, cute little story this.

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Thank you

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Thanks. I had considered expanding the story part a bit, but really it was meant to be quick and simple, so I didn't want the bedtime story to start to overtake the story itself.

Although I already sent you a PM I wanted to make sure I said thank you once more I am so happy the story is getting alot of positive attention ^^

7696445 You're welcome, and once again I'm glad that you are happy with it.

This is a very good one-shot.

Very cute story. I particularly am fond of the Mother / Child bond you created between Spike and twilight. The whole adventure with Obsidian Spark reminded me a lot of how I, as a parent, would help my son get to sleep when he was younger. It really is amazing how a good story, or song, can make getting a restful night sleep a whole lot easier.

If I may share, I have been going blind my whole life and am totally blind now. Over the course I was in the hospital quite a bit and, on one occasion, was stuck in a hospital for over a month 200 miles away from home. However I still was able to call home and sing songs and share stories with my son and it helped him get rest at night.

So, for me, this story reminds me of a time where being a parent was more about ensuring happiness through creativity with a child. My son and I still do it, as he is 10 now, but you really hit home well with the feeling of knowing you only have a few precious years of such simple joys for your kid before they move on. :)

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Thank you again for your feedback. I'm glad that you were able to relate to the story and that you were positively affected by it.

Aw lovey and touching fic here very nice moment between Spike and Twilight

I...I literally have no words. I want more of this. Not from you specifically, as nice as that would be, but just more stories like this.

Incredible job.

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Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write.

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Yes but in Father Knows Beast, it establishes that Twilight is Spike's parent.

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Not to mention that in Father Knows Beast, they kept mentioning how Spike was raised by Twilight.

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That's odd considering they have no interaction in the show.

This is a very sweet story, I especially love the part where Twilight has been telling a bedtime story since he was little. I always thought of Twilight and Spike as mother and son, and seeing how cute their interaction is here is so heartwarming.

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Which aired on October 2018, almost 2 years after I posted that comment....

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Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it.

Out of curiosity, did this story get posted somewhere recently or something? I've seen a big surge in attention for it over the last several days, considering it is several years old.

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Yes, it got posted on the Mother and Son tag for Twilight and Spike.

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Thanks. I suspected something like that.

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