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Wandering Pigeon
I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...
Wandering Pigeon
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Oh no, looks like Celly's staff will be in for one stinky surprise
I found the story enjoyable and it ended things on an interesting note. Celestia is no stranger to padding when it comes to ABDL stories, but you handled it in a uniquely simplistic way. No complicated plot, just a princess and her diapers with a hint of public exposure. The addition of the magic suppression horn ring is often a detail overlooked by most authors and I'm happy to see you including it in your story.
I would however would have preferred a bit more descriptive details in the story. Take your time to really flesh out a scene and describe to the reader what you want them to see in their mind's eye. What's the weather like outside? What does Celestia's room look like? What color is her quill feather? You don't have to describe everything, but a few details like that helps the scene play out for the reader. Not everyone knows what you see when you tell your story so it's best to include descriptive details to ensure your message gets through.
Overall, it was a nice short story.
The guards and maids will be in for a stinky surprise when they turn the corner
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Somepony certainly will be.
7625034 Glad you've enjoyed.
I'll keep your advice in mind for the second chapter.
7625156 Enjoying it so far, are we?
7625203 Enjoy is an understatement there are very few fics where the princesses are diapered and the fic has me already in total fan girl(even though I am a guy), but the fact it is Celestia makes it over the top!
it be funny if luna found her first act like she older sister then act like celestia is her daughter.
7626110 Of course that would be great. All babies deserves a mommy.
lol its great
just wanted one more chapter and it would be complete
"Dear: Princess Me."
"Today I learned to never, ever forget to lock the door ever again."
And now Luna has something to blackmail her older sister with forever.
sequel? where luna treat her as little sister or act as if she her mother!?
Really nice.
Where did you get the image for this story from, just curious it looks pretty good.
7631562 I found it on derpibooru. Just added a working link for the source, so that should take you right to it now.
7631576 sequel? where luna treat her as little sister or act as if she her mother!?
7632598 Sorry, but probably not. I'm just too big a fan of the cliffhanger ending here. But on the plus side, that leaves your imagination to run wild with it. If that's the direction you want the story to go then you are more than welcome to think of it like that.
Absolutely fantastic. As others have said, I'd love to see a followup, but even with the cliffhanger left in place, still a great little read.
See, this is the kind of high-quality smut that I come here for.
7638504 Mhm, with perhaps "Big Sister" Luna looking after her little baby sister. Making sure Celly doesn't get her little self in trouble again.
I would think Celestia would have a little more mental discipline and would be able to resist masturbating when in such a risky position.
Outside of that I really love it. I don't know how Celestia is ever going to live this down. I would like to see a sequel to this though and it is possible since only Luna knows of it and the two sisters can make it a secret between the two.
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I don't see why she couldn't have just put her hoof against the door that would've told the maid that she was "indecent" at the moment
7955598 she had on a pacifier gag, she could say anything
8209913 You misunderstood me, the maid would've known if she felt Celestia's hoof against it
8210268 whoops, I guess I did read it wrong.
Silly and a bit awkward at times, but overall good.
fapping to this in quarantine 2020