Soo Applejack will be the one whose going to have a baby...again? I tough it will be Rarity the pregnant one.
This fanfiction is full of surprises.

Soo is there any info about what will be the next side story or fanfiction before the squel of the "To findig a Rainbow"?

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Weeeeeeell... I'm actually going to be jumping straight to the sequel after this.

I originally had two other side stories planned. One was a short fic from Scoots's Dad's perspective on the day that Scoots moved out of their house and into Will's. It was going to be sort of a little introspective on the circumstances around her birth and her mother leaving. This might still happen, because it's a story I'd kinda like to tell, but it'll happen later. Maybe in between TFaR sequel updates.

The other was going to be a clopfic starring Rainbow's mom and dad. I LOVED those two and thought it would be a ton of fun, but I've kind of fallen out of love with writing clop lately, and there's going to be more than enough of that in the sequel to deal with as it is. So this one probably won't happen.

That being said, I'm also on my off-time working on an alternate universe fic where Rumble joins Scoots and Will in a herd. Just because I really, really wanted to write some m/m, since I haven't done it in forever. This one probably also won't get posted, unless a lot of people really want it, I guess.

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Those ones sounds really interesting I can't wait to see what's going to happening since there are some things you left hanging in the TFaR like the pegasus show Scootaloo mentioned to Will when they were hanging together before Rainbow Dash's Wonderbolt trial oh and the double date with Sweetie Belle and Spike.

A Bisexual herd with two male and a female way? Sounds interesting and unusual.

Oh and could you please post a time line some way for this fanfiction because I could barely put the events on the time line of of the TFaR because of how much you zoomed on just the Applefamily and RariJack.

I could only guess that AJ was in her 4th month around the event of Rainbow Dash's trial because of Rarity's comment about the right member to make a photo from AJ's stomach.

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Well, most herds are inherently bisexual in nature, unless everypony involved is the same gender. Which does happen in the TFaRverse, but I can't remember if I've mentioned any of such a composition before or not.

And the timeline's fairly straightforward. Only the first two chapters of Apple From a Seed took place roughly during (though perhaps a little before) the events of To Find a Rainbow. Starting from Chapter Three, where Rarity noticed Applejack was starting to show, everything takes place after TFaR has finished.

As for Will and Scoots going to a show or the double date, I can't really say what will or will not happen in the sequel, but I'll admit the double date was more of a throwaway joke. I don't really have any plans to include it at the moment, but if I can find a good place to put it, who knows?

Such a lovely story, keep up the great work!!!!

Now that was, dare I say, romantic.
Or, well, the entire story; the feelings between AJ and Rares. They were so genuine. Two ponies which really cared for one another and yet stayed true to their personalities.

Actually...
This might be the first RariJack fic I've read.
Huh.

Whichever way.
This was very enjoyable.
Liked and fav'd.

6304801 If you write that Rumble, Will, and Scoots fic, you need to show me. There's not enough good M/M stuff on this site.

But I'm glad to see this epilogue. I wondered what you were going to do when you said you were going to do one, and this delivered sooooo, sooooooooooo well. I honestly didn't know what I was expecting, but I'm glad it was this. Somehow I always imagined Applejack being the proposing one, but I loved the circumstances behind it this way as well. Color me one happy customer.

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Well awesome, I'm really glad you liked it! This was probably one of the easiest things I've ever written somehow. Did it all in one sitting this morning, but I think it capped things off rather nicely.

And alright, when the Rumble thing's done I'll absolutely let you know!

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Thank you both so very much!

this was a really good fic! Well written characters, great emotions, overall just adorable and moving. Also it had some great SoarBurn in it, so that is always an extra plus! :D

Would that Scootaloo x Will x Rumble clopfiction nwould be an AU Squel or an own Au story?
Any chanche fore some M/M/F action too in it?

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Mate, I'm pretty sure I've told you in enough ways how much I have adored this story.
I've never read a story which has caused me to become, at the very least a little glassy eyed in each chapter. This one had me in the third paragraph. I opened it when I first sat down at work but had to stop until the crew headed off underground. And crikey am I glad I did.

Not because the story is inherently sad, it's not. It's just... strewth, how do I put this? (I suck at words) Here goes;

The way you are able to express the simple, yet raw emotions of your characters is brilliant. I find it amusing when I take a step back and realise what it is and (more importantly) who it is I'm empathising with. I just shake my head, uttering the filthiest insults and the sincerest words of praise to you in the same breath.

I want to meet you, shake your hand, pull you into a bro hug, and slap you heartily on the back. (nuffin suss.)

Then knee you in the plums.

You have mates,
PhucknuckL

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Also it had some great SoarBurn in it, so that is always an extra plus! :D

I agree completely! It's my fave m/m ship. Also thank you very much, I'm really glad you liked it!
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The way I see it at the moment would be a sequel to TFaR, but not canon to the actual sequel when it comes out. And sure, it'd have some m/m/f in it. Scoots couldn't watch that happening and not want to join in the fun!
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Jeez man, don't be gay. Hahaha, nah, like I've said before, you're really awesome. I'd love to shake your hand someday, too. Never change, buddy!

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Well I guess it was only my own odd idea to Rumble and Will would only find out that they are bisexual and fall in love with each other too after they would start to share Scootaloo in a herd. So yea at first Scootaloo would had a crash on both Will and Rumble while the boys would had only had a crush on Scootaloo.

I would say that this was a very fitting ending to this lovely story.
Great job

Also, cheeky AB is cheeky!

This was indeed a cute and lovely little story. ^^

Looking forward for the next one.

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Thank you both so much! Also I've very happy someone mentioned Apple Bloom. She was as fun to write as Carrot Top was back in TFaR!

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Well that's the general idea I'm working with. Will's about to discover how fun having another stallion around can be.

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Well Sweetie Belle would be so mutch surprised if she found out that while she was only teasing Scootaloo in front of Will with Rumble and how she turned him down,now they are together in a herd.

I was actually Hoping Rarity would bear their foal. Maybe inseminated by Breaburn, so that the story could come full circle.
Oh well, not my story.

I wanted Rarity to be inseminated by Braeburn so the story goes on but it's your story. Wonder how Sweetie Bell will react?

Omg yes!!! It's my favorite ship from one of my favorite authors !!!!!

This was absolutely brilliant (I don't cry) and I almost stared tearing up good job man too bad there isn't a sequel.

well now darn if I don't have a tear in my eye.
I am really hoping for a sequel in the same story ark.

Beautiful story, but I must ask, are there plans for a sequel to this? I truly wish to see their wedding, and their plans for foals! I also feel that Rarity should also carry a foal for them as well... I'm assuming Applejack will at first anyways because of unicorn magic caused pregnancy?

I just found this to be a beautiful story and am craving for more naturally. Thank you for writing this, truly.