Precious Honesty

There are times the truth is the hardest thing to hear, and the worse thing you could say. That is when the it needs to be said the most. What truth?
I don't think we should see each other anymore.

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scuba12

scuba12 #1 · Feb 16th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I noticed a surprising lack of comments here, so I decided to change that myself.

When I saw "One that breaks them up," honestly I didn't expect much. However, you pleasantly surprised me with the quality of this story. I really liked how you portrayed the two characters as well. Great, great job. Keep up the great work.

A'h wouldn't mind a sequel, either

LegionPothIX

LegionPothIX #2 · Feb 16th, 2015 · 1 · ·

5633182 I appreciate it. It is always my goal to deliver quality, especially for under represented audiences. But, with this story specifically, I wanted there to be no "bad guy"-- no clearly wrong party in this fight, and I feel like I delivered on that.

I'll be honest (for the reasons stated in the story ) I don't just have a sequel in me for this one.

Trickilee

Trickilee #3 · May 14th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I see your point. Thanks for the writing tip regarding AJ's dialect.

CommisarSilver

CommisarSilver #4 · Jun 28th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Well written and balanced. Through I find the actuall reason for the breakup a little hard to understand, is it that rarity is making a liar out of applejack by overcommiting? Or not allocating enough time that Aj needs for the farm?

TheSillyDuck

TheSillyDuck #5 · Jun 28th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Woh.... just.... woh.... why are the feels so strong after a single chapter story? Sequel! Or continue, I feel like this could be SO much more but it's limiting itself in such a short context.

Twilight Guardian

Twilight Guardian #6 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · 1 · ·

Wow that was sad to read But as the saying for true love "if you love her...let her go" is very true. Thank you for writing this. Even though they separated at the end