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WOOHOO! THis site needed more yaoi

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Eclipse: That was my thought exactly and Solar agreed with me, so plan on seeing allot more from us in the future! :eeyup:

Such a cute couple. *yaoi-fangirlish sigh* :twilightblush:

Please. You, with the coltcuddling. Proceed..

I'm just reading it for the plot *super cereal face*.

Hon:derpyderp1:estly don't mind yaoi don't read it much... but just ad more stuff and it will be better.:trollestia:

Ahhh, Soarin and Braeburn. The classics are always good.

Dear lord. Printed out the chapter in school...NO REGRETS!:heart:

I full heartedly await the next chapter.

More, more, mooooreeeee :heart: :heart: :heart:

FUCK I AINT READING! MY MIND IS TO STRONG AND I CAN SEE THE STORY COME TO LIFE!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

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Umm... Does this mean you like it or don't like it?? :3

- Solar

650977 Hmmm good point not one for gays but...a like vould be nessasary...

Soooooo... this is brokeback mountain, just ponyfied???

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Eclipse: If by ponified brokeback mountain you mean an m/m romance story where they do it? Then yes.

Can't wait for more :heart::heart::heart:

Arrrug! You're horrible. I was so waiting for this the entire chapter then you cut off... Arrrg! GG :raritycry:

Loving it so far. So little M/M romance about and I tend to miss it.

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Eclipse: :rainbowlaugh: Oh don't worry your in for a treat next chapter!

Dude....
I need the next chapter.

Funny and Cute...I love it!

Silly, fun and adorable~ :] Did I catch the reference that Braeburn crushes on Big Mac correctly? I'm referring to this line: "…passing by framed pictures from past apple family reunions. He stopped for a moment to stare at one in particular…"

Also, I thought I should inform you of a small slip-up you made. You wrote the following:
"…The Wonderbolt managed, taking Braeburn's hat off his head and laying it over the lantern…"
and then a few lines later
"…Braeburn nodded, a look of self accomplishment jokingly across his face as he pulled his hat off of the Wonderbolts head…"
Obviously a minor mistake. You're writing well. :]

Looking forward to more!
-Silver

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*facehoof* how did we miss that?! Ah well, at least it didn't distract from the story too much for you. XD an edit may be in order.

As for the Crushing on Mac ref... What do you think? ;P

Thanks for the kind words.

-Solar

673604 -looks around sheepishly- I <3 :eeyup:
Sooooooooooo...yespls! :D
My top 5 ponies (because I'm weird and unique like this)...:
1 - Big Mac :eeyup:
2 - Derpy :derpytongue2:
3 - Braeburn
4 - Guard Ponies
5 - Soarin'
Runner up/Notable mention/6 - Noteworthy (also known as Blue Note or Blues)
I think y'all can understand the list, if you think on it... >w>
And if there was a guard pony episode where one or two get enough screen time to be part of the main cast for the episode, then guard ponies would jump to #2. :P

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Most epic comment ever. Thank you very much, good sir. X3

-Solar

Thischapterohmygoditwasbeautifulireallyneedtostoptypinglikethis....Sorry. But really great chapter! Next chapter please :rainbowkiss:

The update alert for this has gone haywire. I have four update notifications from today, and there's not one new chapter. And the last chapter caused three update notices to be sent.:derpyderp2: What the smeg is going on?

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There have been some minor edits made to chapter two, could that have caused it?

-Solar

676373 I don't think so. And it wouldn't explain the triple-message for one update.

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Eclipse: I just don't know what went wrong. :derpyderp2:

Soarin' No! Don't think, just love him ajhfasdhfg. Wow I'm taking this a lot more seriously then I ought to.:rainbowkiss:

Finally earned that mature rating.

CLOPCLOPCLOPCLOPCLOP:moustache:

Very nice chapter. Sweet, romantic, hot. Loved it. :rainbowkiss: :heart:

aww, that's sweet and hot at the same time

'Bout time something like this happened.

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50 internets to this feller right here, simply due to his AV.

- Solar

The cover image scares me :unsuresweetie:

This was such a hot chapter. Thanks for writing this

This was fantastic. I'm absolutely in love with this paring now. Is there more to come, or are you leaving it off here?

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Eclipse: There's more to come, Solar just had finals week, and combined with a 6 hour time difference it's just comeing along slower than we had hoped. But do not fret, more is on the way! :scootangel:

Good. Yes good. The plot thickens....

Have a moustache :moustache:

It's developing well, I'm loving the Drama this story's creating. I don't know whether to call Soarin' a gargantuan arse or not:applejackunsure:

poor soar hes bucked up everything

Comment posted by SoarinSkies deleted Dec 14th, 2012

When will the next chapter be out?

Will there ever be a chapter 5?

Oh lord please, please, please i need the 5th chapter! I made a dang profile just to comment on this. It's just so amazing!
I am on edge on how this will end!

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