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After a student in Canterlot's school for gifted unicorns kicks his teacher in the rump Princess Celestia and Luna hold a mock trial to scare the student away from continuing such obnoxious behavior. Though when mock trial gets under way it turns out that there is much more to the story than it seems.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 18 )
Comment posted by Not Here Anymore deleted Jun 7th, 2015

A cute fic. I would call it a slice-of-life instead of random, because it ended up being a nice little piece.

I was expecting something different, and you didn't deliver, which is good, because my expectation was shit

I really enjoyed this one.

6065584 I think your right. I'll change that, slice-of-life it is.

6069443 I kinda meant that it doesn't really need the Random tag at all, but you're the il authoré!

Loved it!
(teacher totally deserved it :scootangel:)

It is a better ending.

6300637 Alright I'll keep it. Thanks for the feedback.

Heh. I liked it. Such a small fuzzy thing and quiet generic too.

Yo

I don't often like cute fics but you made me like this one.

That was a fun read.

I wish my punishments ended with cake and cookies.
Heck, even cake or cookies would be fine.

6478696 Thank you.
Cookies and cake would be a nice punishment. I love to make them and I love to eat them.

Ask for an editor that can help with grammar.

6756856 I actually am in the process of searching out a proofreader.

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