Yay! 'Prince' Celestia gets a sex scene! There wasn't enough Celestia clop in this story.

Though I'm still waiting for an update to 'Tales of the Shopkeeper'.

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Actually, I'm working on a chapter right now. Gonna be a very romantic one... I hope.

Read the whole thing. And, just like I said for "Four of Two": HOW the HELL did you got me reading that much words so fast ? Oo (I swear I read every single chapter in barely two hours!)

It was fun, cute, smexy and frankly well-written even if there's quite a few words popping out of nowhere or missing^^
Honestly, even if you're not much into clopfics, the last chapter with everypony's foals was worth reading the whole thing. So. Damn. ADOR(k)ABLE!

Like we say here, Chapeau bas, mon bon monsieur.

Oh damn i saw this over on Inkbunny but no download link so I came here to read comment on this and I must say its damn hot read in my books

Oooo very very hot

762652 Makes me wanna write more when people enjoy my writing, thank you

dear god man i wanted to read a short fic and hit the sack......that was 6 hours ago and for the loss of sleep i hate you

that being said i loved this story and i thank you for coming up with this master piece it was indeed one of the best/funny/da fuq? fics ive ever read and for that thank you and easily made up for the lack of sleep not so much for the work i have in three hours but hey thats my fault

807772 Amazing how often I get that. People hate me, but love the story.

I hope your day does not cause you any undue stress, but remains interesting enough you do not start acting like a victim of the zompony aponyclypse.

807950 meh was a fine day and thank you for your concern i wrote that a 9 in the morning running of 3 hours of sleep total for the past 2 days so i wanna apologize if i offend you and i really did love the read

810205 lol, no offense was taken. *Points at the laughing Rainbow Dash.* It was all in good fun.

I just find it funny when ppl say they hate me but love my stories because they stayed up WAY past their usual bedtimes reading them.

You're like... a genius.

Don't ever stop.

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Several times from what I read thus far, I thought that if Quagmire from Family Guy saw what Rainbow Dash and Pinkie did, his head would explode or melt. I am strongly hoping that the Crusaders will get their fair share of fun. They are tagged and therefore must be included. This story doesn't feature my kink or anything, but the humor is VERY funny and more then makes up for it. Thus far, the only mention of a Crusader was in passing. THERE BETTER BE CRUSADER ACTION OR THERE WILL BE HELL TO PAY

2100065 Oh, there is 'Screw'cader action, so don't worry

2141151 I don't make a habit of reading other's fanfics for the most part. I like to write my own style and reading others tends to throw me off. Still, I may take a look at it.

OK so I read the whole thing and it was a good story. Although I have a few questions. 1) what is a Ki'rin? 2) Did Scoots ever get a Foal of her own? And 3) are there any other stories with Pegasus Pinkie in them? I think she never got enough page time .

2340376 Ki'Rin are asian unicorns, and Pinkie Pie becomes a Pegasus in Pink Pegasus http://www.fimfiction.net/story/24825/pink-pegasus. That little short story happens before Dominant Species and kinda explains how she became a Pegasus

@AnnoyMouse what is the difference between an Asian Unicorn and a normal unicorn? I'm definitely reading more of your work. I like the idea of a Pegasus Pinkie. So freaking adorable.

2647180 Here's the story on InkBunny, with a 'family tree' and Pony Generator pics. They're not perfect, but they'll do.

https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=184183

Aside from some misused words (wrong forms of peek/peak, to/too, hansom instead of handsome etc.) it was an enjoyable read. I like the thought of a Japanese unicorn hybrid, and those magical sex toys were certainly advanced!

just a note for AnnonyMouse, Cloven does not mean what you think it means.
a cloven hoof means that the foot divides into multiple toes, like a pig or goat. Real life horses have uncloven hooves (one toe), while the ponies on the show, as far as I can see, might not even have that so much as just a stump.

I showed this to my friends over Xbox meaning I was reading it to them and they had to stop me when it was describing how fluttershy walked ~_~ yes they thought it was weird when it was describing walking naturally i ingorned them and when it got to the corn 2 people left the party (there were 7 people 3 of them I didn't know 1 of them I showed part of the story already) they all wanted to hear it

2648621 So far I like this story. It's really good.

2648621 I officially now have a problem with it. It's a small one though. I disagree with Spike getting two marefriends. I don't like Spike at all, and because of that I don't ship him with anyone, so it's my own opinion thus no one else needs to feel that way. It's still a good story, and I do enjoy it thoroughly. Except for the one part, involving Spike.

5499670 Deal with it, it happened in my story, so tough shit.
And yea, I normally abuse the HELL out of Spike, but I felt like doing something nice for him, for once. Don't count on that being a reoccurring event in my writing.

5500228 I'm not complaining. Im just saying, I don't like him. It's still a great story