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"When the dust has cleared, and victory denied; a summit too lofty, river a little too wide. If we keep our pride, though paradise is lost, we will pay the price, but we will not count the cost."

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The Dazzlings had been spending a relaxing vacation at a ski resort. However, after a horrible day trapped on the ski-lifts, they finally returned to the hotel to just forget about their experience.

After Adagio leaves to register a complaint with the management, Aria readies herself for a peaceful evening. But when Sonata finishes her food that she got from room service and decides to "borrow" a cake that was delivered to a neighboring room, she gets dragged along to help Sonata with the heist.

Should be no problem, right?


Disclaimer: there is a bit of suggestive (at least by my standards) humor in this story.

Story based on and set in thegreatcat14's A Dazzling Winter continuity. This adapts, combines and amalgamates a few of her pictures together and uses her interpretations of the Dazzlings. I give a massive thanks to her for allowing me to write this.

Thanks to AShadowOfCygnus for pre-reading, and generally putting up with my twisted and completely Dazzlings-addicted mind.

Cover art is Partners in Crime. Made for this story by greatcat herself.

Now with a reading by AShadowOfCygnus, too.

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Comments ( 23 )

That was hilarious. Sonata really shouldn't be aloud to plan... anything ever again. You've really captured thegreatcat14's sirens down to a T so good show there. Overall, good story with really funny moments so 10/10.

Seen the comics. Can't wait to read.

This was hilariously awesome. I've seen the comics and I have to say this was amazing. I hope to see more awesome writing like this in the future!:pinkiehappy:

Holding up a hand, Adagio said, "Can it! It doesn't matter. After today, we deserve a special treat, even it was 'borrowed'."

even if it...

I chuckled a lot with this.

I like the idea of Sonata leading Aria into one crazy situation after another, Adagio playing den-mother to the two of them when she's not just sitting back with a camera and a youtube profile. :pinkiesmile:
The Dazzlings' Patreon may or may not be how they've been getting by since the BotB, methinks.

5650747 5651122 I'm glad you both enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun writing it. If greatcat leaves an idea hanging in the future, expect to see more adaptations take place.

5651446 Woops!:twilightoops: Thanks for catching that. I'm glad you liked though. :twilightsmile:

5652238 Hmm... Patreon would explain a lot. :pinkiecrazy: Now I feel I might have to do something related to that.

5650906 Hopefully you enjoy it when you read it.

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

Loved it.
Just like the comics, adorable,psychotic,and funny.

5652450 Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it. :twilightsmile:

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

5653934 Glad you liked it.:twilightsmile:

Yes... Psychonata. I couldn't really think of a way to fit her in, although I did hint at it with "It won't hurt... much" and the description following that set of dialogue. Sadly I can't fit everything in.

If greatcat comes up with something interesting in the ADW storyline and doesn't follow that plotpoint any further, I'll be sure to make something for it: I had a lot of fun writing this, and she was great to work with too (keep your eyes peeled for a reading from Wubcake down the line too:raritywink:).

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

I was not disappointed. After the week I had this cheered me up. Faved.

5657975 I'm glad that I was able to lift your mood a bit. :twilightsmile: It's always a blessing to hear something like that.

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

5695955 If I actually knew how to write Luthor, I would so do something like that.:rainbowlaugh: Glad you liked the story, and thanks for the pirate seal of approval.:twilightsmile:

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LOLOLOL!:rainbowlaugh: I loved it! When they fell off the roof I was laughing my head off!:trollestia:

5865462 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :twilightsmile: I'll let you in on a secret: there's a semi-sequel in the works, although, it isn't nearly as long. :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

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This was fun! Poor Luna, though.

(Also, I need to catch up with that comic!)

6004374 To paraphrase greatcat herself, it's like she wrote it rather than me. Maybe that's why I've become her editor?

Anyways, speculation aside, I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I had a lot of fun writing it and there is a quick semi-sequel in the works that should be coming out shortly. And yes! Catch up on the comic -- you're missing out on some great pages (not that I'm biased or anything :scootangel:).

Rush and Pony on!
T4E

6007918 That's some pretty high praise! :D

Ooh, I look forward to that!
And I did catch up just yesterday - it's pretty great. :pinkiehappy:

I rember reading this on DA I had no idea it was on fimfiction this is still one of my most fav stories

6163361 I'm glad that this is one of your favourite stories. This was the first story that I dual-posted on dA and Fimfic, although I'm a bit surprised that you found this on here. It's a small internet world after all. :applejackconfused:

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T4E

6168141 I found it when looking at stories with the Dazzlings in it I was actually surprised I found the story myself

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