A thirteen-year-old pegasister that's using MLP to stabilize her aggression.
This story is a sequel to What is Love?
Fluttershy is acting... Strange. Weird cravings, constant barfing, mood swings, and is getting stomach pains and cramps. What's going on?! One day, at the spa with Rarity, Rarity notices Fluttershy's stomach is... is getting bigger! Rarity asks her why, and the answer is shocking.
Now, Discord is going to be a father because is Fluttershy is pregnant. Oh no. What's the kid gonna look like!?
WARNING: Chapter 2 and 4 are extremely short!
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OHHH Raspberries!!!!!!
This is an excellent piece of work! Love the whole thing!
Gonna.
Oh and chapter 1... I AM SO SORRY!!!
It's so short!
What's 'gapping'? Did you mean 'gaping'?
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Oh. Did I make a mistake.
Whoops...
Chapter 1 is done.
Swag.
And a few moustaches.
Wait, Sonic the Hedgehog is on Fluttershy's payroll? Sweet.
Nice, I'm liking it (please let it be a girl!!!!)
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Maybe
... MAYBE NOT!
But maybe 
... Or maybe not.
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...
What?
while i LOVE pregnancy stories (they're so touching) this one needs alot of work in the writing department. the characters are out of character half the time, the pacing of the story is way too fast, and alot of the story plot is all over the place. also, abit of it was vague. *sighs* it got me curious...but not my attention.
cool it with the cravings bro! i know from knowledge (not experience) that pregnancy comes with that sort of thing but chill out! you’re taking it way too far. otherwise, maybe slow the pace a little bit.
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This is DISCORD'S kid. Go all or go home!
I love Fluttershy in this. She's just as crazy as her baby daddy. Okay, maybe that's a stretch.
The way that the sentence is written states that he recommends that fluttershy carries heavy things
Also I know the gender
the gender is OTHER
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Thanks for telling me the mistake!
And what's 'other?'
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yea but still, it’s almost as if you’re putting in the cravings to add more words to the story....
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Nah... I'm doing it to make the story stupid!
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eh. otherwise it’s good.
SQUEEEEE! The FEELS! DAWWWWW! The FLUFF!
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Are you talking about chpt. 3?
5537866 Um... Yeah!?!
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Just wanted to make sure!
5537880 Geez, you don't have to be such a drama queen!
I really gotta say "eh" so far. Always on the lookout for nice pregnancy stories, but right now this is Fluttershy screaming and having cravings every five seconds (which isn't accurate at all and is frankly degrading the quality of writing). It needs a lot of work. The latest chapter is better, and I want to give this fic a chance. I'll put it in my shortlist "Liked" bookshelf for the sole purpose of tracking it.
If you need a proofreader and/or editor, I'd be willing to lend a hand.
5533337 your welcome and it is the third option that comes up on forms that ask for gender some times.
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Thanks! Uh, but one question... How do you edit it before it's published 'cause I don't understand the whole editor thing YET since I'm new at this.
5540884 I assume you don't draft the story on the website itself, correct? You would use Microsoft Word or Google Docs or some such similar. The editing happens off-site. You would send the editor a copy of the chapter to be looked over and corrected for grammar and spelling, and if the person would have any suggestions to make it better outside of normal errors, then the writer would go back and make changes or get the story ready to submit.
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Oh... Uh, well...
I write my stories on an IPad Mini so... yeah...
Woah, my brother purposed to his girl friend the exact same way
but a dog instead of a platypus...
Nice chapter! keep up the good work!
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Really?! That's kinda weird considering I thought up the proposal in the shower...
Squee
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And now you know who I like to (mostly) ship!
The suspense!
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The suspense over!
5552867 or has it ?
*mind explosion*
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True...
5552973 true...
DiscordFan what happen to Chapter 5: The Baby's (Very Chaotic) Birthday for this sequel
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Oh, uh... Well, somehow (I really don't know) it was no longer finished. So instead of 1000 and some words it was, like, 500.
The kids seem great maybe making a picture could help.
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I'll see what I can do! And which kid?
5557532 both
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...
Okay, I have the perfect picture-idea-thing.
The pic is cute!
Thanks man
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SPOLIER FOR PICTURE
Isn't Disarray adorable eating Teal Fang's tail!?
5567939 yes!