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That last line. Best flat "What."
I spotted a couple errors.
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.... o///o
[Maximum Boner Achieved]
YES!
Oh right. I should read it too. Bbiab.
...
This is hot.
Jesus Christ. Each chapter of this is such perfection
Well I'm happy. Is any one else happy?
Oh my gosh I'm featured, I'm featured, I'm on the front page!
YAYS Mind controlled Luna~ oh this will be good!!! Also
I want to see this happen. along with Trixie obeying her...
5924751 Thanks for the catches! Fixed those now.
5924853
As you should be!
You can practically feel the cut to black followed by the credits.
What a preposterous notion.
This chapter was epic. And adorable. This story just continues to amaze!
5924957 I was totally thinking of your fic as I wrote that.
5924982
Squeeeeeeeee, awesome! I did wonder!
Couple of grammar fixes courtesy of Setokaiva, thanks for the proof read!
HAHAHAHAHA!! *evil laugh*
Oh gosh, I did NOT see that coming. Twilight actually Awakened LUNA?! In her DREAMS?! I mean, I fully expect to hear an explanation as to how this is possible later, but holy crap. This is perfect. Too perfect. With Luna under the spell along with all but one of her friends, there's almost no one left who can stop Twilight. Luna picked up on it via dreamwalking, but now that she's Twilight's servant... Yeeeessssss. Oh, sweet candied Celestia, YES.
The possibilities with this are endless. Luna is hers. All her power, her knowledge, it's hers. Her body, hers. If I were her right now, I'd dearly hope my house was soundproofed, 'cause I'd be laughing like a right proper maniac about now. I am so glad you didn't stop Twilight or give her a "Samus ability loss" effect. And I am dearly, DEARLY looking forward to further chapters, especially now. Many, many kudos, and congrats for the feature -- you deserve it!
*runs off to a corner to laugh maniacally*
5924875 You know in hindsight Twilight did ask her friends albeit the fact she made slight alterations before asking. In Rarities case she was forced to accept that she was fine with Twilight controlling her friend AppleJack. She However was not forced to submit herself to Twilight in any form or fashion. She, again was forced to accept that Twilight was controlling AJ but under no verbal intentions or implications was she to willingly give herself to Twilight. Rarity made this choice on her own. Twilight was content with Applejack. Luna needed to look into this a little more carefully. She was partially at fault here. Even more so with stripping Twilight of her powers and friendship is like ripping their imagination or heart out. That is cruel.
10/10 downloading into Kindle.
I have to serve jury duty next month, can next chapter be ready by then? I fear it's going to be a long day there.
I forget but where is spike for all this?
Oh geeze, this chapter was so good. Excellent job with Fluttershy, making her a puppy is one of the most adorably, sexy, ironic, sensible things Twilight could have done with her. The chair scene was extremely hot and watching Twi using her powers so creatively is fantastic. The scene where Flutters was a mindless puppy was adorable, and using that imagery to make Fluttershy "willingly" choose to be Twilight's pet was simply conniving. Twilight has really come a long way to now be treating her friends like furniture and pets.
And of course the pièce de résistance with Luna was everything I could have asked for! I'm wondering why Luna apparently wasn't mindless until she reached Twilight, I'm guessing if the victim is far away it makes them conscious enough to act normal and attempt to reach the caster for orders. As well I wonder what was up with Luna's elaborate "I'm awakened" bit, I'm again guessing maybe the massive amount of energy Twilight put into the spell changed it somehow? Maybe since it was the dream world Twilight's subconscious enforced its will on Luna instantly? Whatever it was it made a fantastic cliffhanger and I loved every second of it and I'm so hyped for how Twilight is going to react to this ridiculous situation!
5925223 He's on a dragon quest I believe, which I'm guessing is like a form of native american vision quest to find your inner self and purpose.
5924871 Well, now that she's got Luna, she can get into Trixie's dreams and nab her there.
5925228
It may be another failsafe. There were several new facets to this casting, like you noted.
Perhaps it was even the fact that Twilight layered several castings of the spell on top of each other and repeated the 'awaken' command several times.
There's an episode of Disney's Gummi Bears where one of the characters is put under a spell that makes him nice when you say 'please' and evil when he hears 'thank you'. At one point, another character—fully unaware of his condition—says 'thank you' several times in a row; at which point the enchanted character goes on an unstoppable rampage and ignores any further trigger commands.
Perhaps the whole thing activated what Luna subconsciously thinks a submissive, brainwashed slave should say and do.
It was inevitable that one or another of the Princesses was going to find out, somehow. I had a few ideas of how the scene might go down when they did. But that, I did not expect AT ALL, and as a result I now have absolutely no ideas left. Still totally buckled in, though.
I... I cannot properly describe how exactly I feel about this. Suffice to say, I was suspicious when I saw the chapter's title along with the addition of Luna's portrait in the summary but I did not expect this.
This behavior from Twilight has officially gotten out of hand and the only discouragement left is Twilight's own doubts and hesitation; and even those have worn thin. Every new person under her control only encourages her further; literally giving her encouraging words and being under command to be accepting of Twilight's actions regardless. I won't say Twilight has gone past the point of no return just yet, but now I cannot see a traditionally "Good" ending coming about from this.
Of course, Evil Overlord Twilight here is incredibly sexy so I won't feel all that bad if she wins out in the end.
Always great to see a new chapter of this. Can't wait to read tonight!
OH, Sweet Celestia, An increidible chapter, and hope to know why
Luna had such thoughts since Twilight ever told her what to do.
So, outstanding threats to the Twilight mind-rape rampage:
Celestia. But with Luna right there in Canterlot to assist, Celestia's at a serious disadvantage when Twilight comes for her.
Pinkie? More likely to be a REALLY weird addition to Twilight's harem than an existential threat.
Cadance. Not currently a threat due to being too far away to know what's going on. Though I wonder ... even though Twilight is (I'm assuming) a much more accomplished mage than Cadance has ever really shown, this spell seems to be straight out of the dark side of Cadance's playbook. So if Twilight and Cadance end up clashing, this is within Cadance's domain - would be tough for Twilight.
And Discord. Oh dear, Discord. Once again, this kind of mind-fuckery is his bag, and he's terribly fond of Fluttershy. I don't see Twilight winning that fight, so she'd have to convince Discord that Fluttershy wants this.
Lots of fun to come.
5926000 Actually Discord might not be reformed yet in this timeline, this is pre-alicorn Twi and the Discord episode was only 3 episodes before she became a princess.
5925320 Perhaps...who knows, though really she just needs to see Trixie and she could do it.
5925592
I can picture it...
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...Yum-yum...
Rule #1 for stopping people with mind control powers: never confront them directly unless you are 100% damn certain that they can't get you with it too.
5925055
Luna? Do something rash without thinking of possible consequences? Never in a thousand years could such a thing happen!
5926469 To be fair, Luna clearly didn't know what the spell was capable of or the details of how it worked, or was entirely clear on what it was being used for since she assumed Twilight's friends had their memories hid from them. I doubt most spells would have affected her there, so it's clearly leagues above most charms in caliber. Dreams may be a good way of gathering information but that's not to say it's coherent or complete.
5926000 But the fact that Twilight could charm Lun in the dream world is what makes the speel more
powerful than we imagined.
So anypony or draconquees could easely fall for the charm.
Woah.
This story is absolutely fucking intense. Every time I see a new update, I can't help but do a little fist pump of hype.
Your style of MC is just the perfect type for me. The sex scenes and Twilight's "scenarios" hit all the right buttons.
Thank you for another great chapter!
Biggest threat to the harem is Spike. At least assuming dragons have a good amount of magic resistance in this mythos...
...
Oh.
Yeah, unless he conciously disabled his magic resistance every time he's been teleported, made to grow a stache, and any other spells Twilight (and possibly Trixie, Celestia, Luna, Cadance, and Rarity) cast on him he's bucked. Both figuratively and most likely literally as well.
I'm actually looking forwards to focussing Pinkie. I'm curious what will happen. THis is one of my fav fics.
5926000 5926062 Discord at this point is still a statue in the Canterlot gardens, after his season 2 rampage and before Keep Calm and Flutter On.
5925131 Turns out today is next month! That's a bit short notice but I'll see what I can do about a new chapter before June.
I goat say, I saw the puppy coming; But LUNA, that was way past left field and in the next county.
Good show.
You know, I keep making the mistake of thinking "Pfft. This chapter isn't going to be as good as the last one. Wintermist can't keep up this string of amazing work." And then I eat my words so quick I don't even get to taste them.
The part with Fluttershy was nice and cute. I was hoping for more involving her apparently colossal bosom, but I suppose that will probably come later. I also like that droning the word "obey" seems to be becoming more common. That's most certainly one of my buttons.
And then the bit with Luna... I would throw money at you to make more of this happen faster, but now I need to use it on new sheets. So thanks for that.
All in all, this story is good enough to keep me up until 4:00 am on a work night and make me seriously wish there was more to read. You have yet to let me down (#innuendo). I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
OH! I have one question about this part:
Disclaimer: Zecora is my favorite character in the show.
Now to me, this could be one of two things.
A: An upcoming moment in fiction decidedly better than having actual sex.
or B: The single cruelest cocktease you could commit against me.
I only want to know: Is this definitely just a one-off story comment to showcase Twilight's distraction in this chapter? Or is this something you might actually do? Don't divulge future story bits, of course. Just tell me if it's something you are considering.
Also, happy May 1st... *passes out*
I so want Celestia to be the one to have created the spell to begin with.
Luna was stupid, she shouldn't have made that promise of her friends begin away from her, and she was already fragile and her mind cant handle much more stress unless am misreading this.
Hmm, Strange that Luna actually walked up to the door, perhaps she resisting but know for a fact she made a error. The spell itself isn't dark magic it doesn't require particular emotions to be cast nor does it have the smoky stuff, so Luna may also be inflected by the spell. Maybe multiple parts of he- *is bound and gagged and dragged away* (I'll stop now and wait)
Gentle breeze guide your path, a warm smile welcome your return.
5927400 If I said I wasn't considering it, then you wouldn't be kept hoping and dreaming. So yes, let's say it's a possibility
Hm. Maybe I'm overthinking this...
Perhaps Twilight used time-travel to give Luna orders?
Ah dunno, that might be a tad over complicated. Haha.
5927605 you mean .... MOLESTIA!!! :D .... O.O oh god... that makes sense!!! MOLETIA CONFIRMED! MOLESTIA CONFIRMED!!
5926963 That is a good point... Where is spike anyways? I haven't seen him ONCE the ENTIRE story.....
HEY Wintermist! WHERE'S SPIKE AT?
and a single question throws open the door, then out poors a flood...
5926733 Well according to what we know Luna actually PHYSICALLY walks through pony's dreams, that or if she does do it using her mind then the spell would have affected her much more deeply and have been much more effective than it has been previously!
5928255 Thight might be true but the fact Twilight could cast the spell
is the one that surprise me. After all in your dreams you are the god of your own
mind but that doesn't mean that you can use the magic that you apply in the real world
5928221 Completely read this in Applebloom's voice. Applebloom, what are you doing reading this kind of smutty fanfic? This is too old for you.