Author's Note:

Oh, Twilight. You have a good heart. But more pertinently, you've got a taste for this now.

Like a fetish?

5437952 maybe, or an addiction

Twilight being a freaky dom? I like that.

Whoa, that's scary... But I can't help thinking the solution to breaking the charm could be... simple... Well, I'll keep reading, and see where this goes. Very intriguing story.

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Mmm... Not a whole lot to say about this chapter. A good build up from the first, of course. I mostly remember on my first read thinking, "What the hay, Twilight?" Well, that and how hot it was picturing Applejack touching herself. Kinda left me frustrated in fact, since it didn't go any farther at this point.

Obviously my patience was rewarded later.

Oh, Twilight. You have a good heart. But more pertinently, you've got a taste for this now.

To be fair, she does seem to like order in her life, and, with that spell, it's hard to get much more order than basically mind controlling your friends. Or people in general really. Wonder what Discord would say if he found out, seeing as he's got experience with mind control.

6652207 Kind of late for a response here, but why not. Two ways Discord could react to that: one he mocks Twilight for using it while claiming to be "Good" or, alternatively, he's disgusted with her. Keep in mind Discord is incredibly anarchic and hates the idea of control and general order, which is very much what this is. Now, he did hypnotize the mane 6 before, but he did that for his personal amusement, which trumphs all and he was doing it to stop a potential rainbow laser of doom from turning him to stone. Furthermore, consider that his mind control boiled down to inverting everyone's key attribute (loyalty to selfishness, kindness to cruelty, honesty to lies, etc.). Here, this is straight up Twilight controlling other people for any reason she wants and I don't think he'd approve even as a villain: his at least was "amusing".

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Considering her control freak issues, I wouldn't be surprised.

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Definitely the second one I would say. Discord used mind control to promote chaos, twilight wants to use it to create order, the exact opposite. Although if this story goes where I think it will (twilight hypnotizing all her friends into a wierd orgy) that will be pretty chaotic so maybe he wouldn't mind so much.

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Then don't read what is CLEARLY hypnosis fetish work; find something else to occupy your time, like a job or actual sex with your partner/a hooker/your coworker/a kidnapped girl or videogames or whatever.

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A kidnapped girl.

So chapter 1 seems very much like Twilight, wanting to investigate a new spell.

And now this:

She shouldn't be feeling this. She shouldn't. It shouldn't set her on fire to have Applejack obey her, to have her adore her. It shouldn't. But it did. Could the charm have affected her? Could she be as much under its spell as Applejack was?

Why do I think this is going to be the case?

I’m loving the Death Note parallels- especially because Twilight is a protagonist who’s actually likable!

Obviously this is a porn story first and foremost, but it’s really sweet that Twilight makes sure to compliment AJ in detail while she believes Twilight is so important. Who wouldn’t want to make your friends actually take the kind things you say to heart?