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I've noticed that Spike hasn't appeared in this story?
5866697 Earlier it said he was in Canterlot.
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I thought he was doing some dragon quest thing with Zecora?
This is very good! My favorite part so far has been where Twilight brought AJ to orgasm without AJ noticing. Super hot. Is there a chance of any more of that sort of mind-control?
I CANNOT MASH THE LIKE BUTTON FAST ENOUGH!!! X_X
Seriously, though. WOW. I am immensely enjoying Twilight dominating her friends' minds as though they belonged to her to begin with, especially the parts where she is working out the details of how the charm works and patching up the holes in her process as she goes along. This entire fic is the perfect blend of realism and straight-up clop, and I LOVE IT. More!
this story is getting better and better
Oh boy. Um, when Twilight says she's going to speak to them unenchanted, does that mean she's going to (temporarily) undo everything she's done to them? If so, Rarity is going to be pissed.
5866797 dragon quest? yes. With Zecora? no he is forbidden to go to the Everfree forest.
What are the inspirations images DX I want to see dem. At least who is the artist? (dat way you dun have to link nsfw)
5867945 Well the artist on Deviantart is called ScorpDK, the first picture is called "121109 - Unresolved Issues..." and I'm guessing the second is "130315 - Oh, hello".
Also this was another awesome chapter, thanks for keeping it rolling!
H-holy shit. Honestly this story just keeps one-upping itself.
Supervillain Twilight with a mutherfucking CAPE. It's really fucking happening now. At this point I fully expect to see her monologue-ing at her next victim.
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I love love LOVE all the little ways that Twilight toys with her pets. I cannot get enough of this.
Made some tweaks to the grammar and fixed a couple of typos. Thanks Setokaiva!
As soon as you started describing RD's outfit, I knew exactly what image inspired it. It happens to be one of my favorites as well.
Still loving everything about this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
5867945 5868019 Half right! The first is indeed ScorpDK's 'Unresolved Issues' but the second seems to have been taken down from DeviantArt, it was by Kloudmutt and called 'Rainbow Tamed'. If someone was to poke around derpibooru however, and look for 273764, they might stumble over a mid-res version of Rainbow bound and gagged.
5869027 Fooound iiiiiit~
^~^
I don't know why this meme came to mind.
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I thought it was really cute the way Twilight sent AJ and Rarity off to bed together.
This may sound like a strange comparison, but something my buddy who's into IT said came to mind:
Every programme leaves traces. Twilight thinks she can simply rewrite, overwrite, and restore her friends' personalities with no lingering issues. But what if that's not the case?
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I knew Rainbow Doll sounded familiar! The hypnohub manip of that picture. One of my favorites.
Great new chapter. Twi really needs to follow her own advice more!
This was a very good latex and S&M chapter, but I hope it goes back into the mind control themed chapters. I was hoping to see sensation triggers explored more, like turning mundane actions into something sexually pleasurable.
This is probably the best mind control story I've ever read, on top of sexiness you have actually made me wonder about the dangers of changing someone via mind control. That's something I've never thought of before, fantastic job. By the way are the other mane two going to get stuck in Twilight's web? I'd love to see who else she plans to charm. Keep up the good work.
Methinks Twilight is slipping deeper and deeper into a state of power inebriation.
Hmmm. How much control does Twilight have over their perceptions?
I wonder because it might be possible to give Applejack her fantasy of being used by stallions without involving anypony else. If Twilight can implant a complete hallucination in AJ's mind, she and anypony with her can then lean back and watch as Applejack performs a one-mare porno, fully convinced what's happening is real until Twilight snaps her out of it.
Pre-chapter comment!
5866809 This is a good day for you
5867620 She implied she would. As to whether she really will...
5868147 5874085 It's a lovely image, she's really cute tied up like that.
5869886 There really, really was a point Twilight should have stopped. It's well behind her now.
5872000 Twilight's already found that emotional and physical reactions caused contagion to Applejack's usual state of mind. She really should think about that some more.
5882995 How could I turn down a request for more mind control?
5885138 5916714 Did someone say Fluttershy?
5885830 Oh, she totally is. How could you not be drunk on the power she has?
5898269 She hasn't tried it yet, but based on Applejack's reaction when told to experience her missing memories, it seems possible...
5867158 5867185 5868019 5868027 5878711 Thank you so much! I'm really delighted you're enjoying it, it keeps me writing!
Once again I find myself loving how well the characters are done. That was a -perfect- representation of Rainbow Dash. Also, I'd never realized before how hot a well done orgasm-denial could be.
I also remember thinking on my first read through that Twilight was just getting funny with her commands now. Seriously, Rainbow Doll.
5924623 where can i find these inspiration images?
They're like Trixie, the way they start referring to themselves in third person. I mean, if Trixie's name was actually "Fucktoy" or "Obedient Slut".
Obedient Slut!!! ... Needs peanut butter crackers.
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Yeah, she's pretty much plastered on power at this point.
I can't wait to see if/how this explodes in Twilights face.
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6729823 yes well if and or when the it happens i hope she takes this metaphor to heart
It took me like, five minutes to get this
>>Wintermist
i KNOW IM A little L8 2 theparty on commenting on this story ESPECIALLY in SUCH a L8 Chapter in the LINE-UP but..
Is there a name 4 the AU this ALL takes place in cause...
wait 4 it
(pause 4dramatic effect)
THE "FiM-C verse" has a nice ring to it...dontcha think???
That feeling when everything is going pretty well, but there's still 200k words left.
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You think? I think she's full blown off the cliff into the abyss of unstoppable disaster.
Love that Super Villainness outfit.
It’s important that you know that I paused reading this chapter to contemplate the position Twilight is in, and involuntarily burst into evil laughter. I have never had that happen before.