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I wish to see more of this!

Would Kira's hand obsession translate to hooves?

OH MY GOD,A JOJO'S BIZARRE ADVENTURE STORY,I'M IN LOVE!

You do realize you are now obligated to include a fabulous posing scene?

Oh sweet! A Yoshikage Kira stor -- wait a minute!

See, he's an aspiring actor, and a good one, but sometimes he gets lost in the role. Now that wouldn't be so bad except that his last role is a serial killer with a hand-fetish.

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WELL NEVER-FUCKING-MIND! Ya know the whole scene where he was whisked away by the hands of the afterlife?! That coulda been a more plausible reason/explanation for Kira winding up in Equestria rather than another poorly executed and half-assedly explained premise that resulted in an over-glorified attempt at yet another uninspired and asinine cosplay story.

Yes, it sounds dickish of me to say, but I absolutely love JoJo's Bizarre Adventure and the idea of THE REAL YOSHIKAGE KIRA winding up in Equestria was a concept I would have loved to seen executed properly, but here we are, blindly following a retarded fad that should have died as soon as it was conceived.

5395731 Not sure. I definitely know it's not going to happen yet, but it might develop as the story goes. Need to decide on that.

5396334 I'm not sure how I could do that with Kira. He's pretty reserved compared to the rest of them. However, some fabulous poses will be coming eventually.

5396552 I understand your frustration, but this was kind of a waste of both our times. Just as you don't like the LoHAV/H stories, there are many who don't like HiE or Ponified stories or several others, which I feel is a shame to ignore something just because it doesn't fit your category. Personally I don't think there was any point to write this message, could've simply just turned away.

That being said, if you want to write a Kira in Equestrian story, why don't you do it? I myself have written some stories just because I felt I wanted to see it exist, and considering your work on "Brotherhood is Magic", which I am quite the fan of by the way, I think you'd be able to pull it off.

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I really apologize dude, but the big problem is that, while I love JoJo's and know the story inside and out, I don't feel I can do it justice. While I spent most of my youth with Capcom heroes like Dante, Megama, and Strider Hiryu, I learned to write them through constant gameplay.
JoJo's, like DMC, has a ridiculous amount of detail that if I so much as miss one mannerism, I'll be crucified.

Still, I'll follow this story of yours in the faith that you know what you're doing.

5421029 You know, I wouldn't mind having a co-author. Also, though it might not go up for a while, the next chapter (or maybe the one after that) will explain the lore I'm going for. I suppose you can make a final judgement based off that.

TGM

Interesting. Never watched JoJo's bizarre adventure but I'll check this out.

>Joetaro
Ouch.
>Jotaro is the one, who is evil
>while Dio saves everyone
"Good people, bad powers" just rolls here.

Personally, MASSIVE JoJo fan. Fave Stands are Gold Experience, Silver Chariot, and Star Platinum.

Second, awesome. One Dio got too into his role, and the other stayed true to himself...

Now all we need is a Giorno Giovanna. "Gold Experience!"

Personally, I like the IDEA of these Displaced stories... believe me, I've seen worse... It's just that a lot of time, speaking from experience, one joins a bandwagon and it doesn't always work out. One story on this site I wrote down, I took it away out of shame.

It's just so many rehash the general origin... Sure, go ahead with the mystical merchant of moral ambiguity giving people their magical props, but don't -not referring to you, because so far you've avoided it- have every Displaced be Petrified because 'scary stranger'. XD For example, I consider the idea of a more... benevolent reason, like the being sustained heavy wounds and being a statue still kept him or her ALIVE in a sense...

... Or the idea that 1,000 Years In Stone is not good for the mental health, like the Twilight Zone pilot whom was doing some isolation test and his mind fabricated and forgot so much.

Just general food for thought with no real relevance to the story. XD Sorry.

You have earned my favourite!

WHOO-HOO! Kira Yoshikage is BACK! This is really「great!」And I love the contrast you make between Kira and Jonathan. It's actually quite fascinating.

Though, for the long run, I can't imagine Kira actually wanting to do anything bad. In case you haven't noticed, he doesn't like hooves. By your own admission, there's no reason for him to kill anyone. I suspect you'll find a way around that.

But not the minotaurs. Please, God, not the minotaurs.

Luckily I read part 4 about 8 months ago so I SHOULD be okay. Probably have forgotten some stuff, but hey! Still read it through, and ready to read on!

I don't think I can continue with this story. I kept track of this story because it was one of the only Jojo crossovers that looked decent, but now that the fourth chapter's out, I'm not so sure anymore. I couldn't get through the dream scene because it didn't feel natural. There was too much exposition that was too straight forward. You could've taken this opportunity to flesh out the MC, maybe given some of his backstory. As an author, you need to write with more subtly, be more sneaky with what you're saying. Show, don't tell.

Man, I'm loving this! Great chapter, I do hope you'll update this more, especially with the anime now getting to Kira. Great job, keep goin and stay golden^^

This is a fantastic story. Definitely going to be one of my absolute favorites. Out of curiosity, when can we expect the next chapter to come out?

Sheer heart attack has no weakness.

So I can't help but get mind locked on two things.

If Kira and sanders fight who does killer queen listen too?

Also

Mirror portal. There is no way that can be ignored.

Hey, just a little question out of consistency's sake, then again, talking about consistency and JoJo's in one sentence is already kinda ridiculous.
Anyway, if this guy here, from what we know so far, is actually "just" Yoshikage Kira, shouldn't it be impossible then for him to have Killer Queen Bites the Dust in the first place? I mean, in DiU, he only got it after having become Kosaku Kawajiri, so regular Kira shouldn't have it, right? Maybe you just give him KQBtD for some plot advancement later on but I'm just a wondering little gremlin.

7734162 I'll confirm one thing, Jonathan/Kira does not currently possess Bites the Dust.

7148814 I suppose the minotaurs might be possible targets, then again he desires the "slender digits" of human hands and while minos have hands, I doubt they are as slender as he'd like to have, even on the females.

7677459 I'm not even sure if Jonathan ever came to be the leading party in a battle considering his utter inexperience when it comes to using a Stand (though maybe it comes naturally with changing into Kira since DIO and Jotaro probably used their stands as well) but when push comes to shove, KQ will maybe listen to both? That or Jonathan may develop a whole new stand for himself.

Edit: I redact my statement about Diavolo since Epitaph is just a sub-stand of King Crimson so that statement would not hold true unless you actually think about giving Jonathan control over Sheer Heart Attack while Kira controls Killer Queen, that would be similar to Doppio and Diavolo. But then again, it wouldn't work with Killer Queen because both Sheer Heart Attack and Killer Queen Bites The Dust are automatic stands without any real control over. It'd more be like Jonathan controlling Stray Cat but we haven't even seen a trace of that thing so that might just be some nonsense I'm spouting.

Comment posted by Chaos51268 deleted Jan 3rd, 2017

7734179 If you don't mind, I have a few questions regarding that. For one, are Stand Arrows going to be anywhere in Equestria? Also, is Jonathan/Kira's friend who was cosplaying as Kosaku Kira going to end up in Equestria as well? And if Kosaku Kira DOES show up, is Bites The Dust going to be used at all?

Wow, this is actually REALLY good!

I'll be honest, I have glossed over this story many times because I thought the premise was lame and cringe worthy. But then I considered who you are and how much I enjoy the adventures you write about Gilgamesh, so I decided you deserved the benefit of the doubt and gave it a shot.

I'm very glad I did.

This story completely and utterly exceeded my expectations. Your characterization of Yoshikage Kira is excellent and I look forward to seeing more.

Great story so far, i'm really enjoyng the story.:pinkiehappy:

Why does Yoshikage Kira look like Jedite from Sailor Moon? The guy in the picture is Yoshikage Kira, right?

7849301 7928541 7928365 Glad you all liked it. Moar is now here.

Maybe I should seek some professional help, she thought.

Best piece of advice you can give yourself, Twilight.

Great chapter, I always love seeing character from other series reacting to other characters from other series. All and all I loved the chapter and I cannot wait for more.

Glad this explains things. Now I know why he is dangerous.

8073852 Yeah he's one of the most dangerous villains in the entire series, particularly so since there's no way to not blow up completely once the bomb blows while you're touching it.

Nice to see an update! I can't wait for more.

*click*

Because you don’t appreciate this soup as much as I do.

I have no clue why but this made me laugh more than it probably should have because I feel like that's something Kira would say.

To be honest I would read an entire story of Twilight reading the entire Jojo series. Hope there is more to come, but looking at when this fic started and the frequency of its updates I can assume you have more important stuff to do than writing this fic.

You're not dead?

I assumed an ambulance had run you over.

Still, I hope to see more. And hope you'll upload again soon.

Also;

ike going out on a picnic or reading a book.

Chew.

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Heh, nice! Gott keep those in mind.

Comment posted by DisplacedWriter deleted Sep 1st, 2017
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