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MonkeyNinja
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Proceed. You have my curiosity and interest cautiously invested in your tale.
Not bad. Chapters could use a little more meat but not bad. I thumbs up.
She's not her faithful student
I give a thump up and a fav. Hope to see more in the near (VERY near) future
5298732
Will do!
My thoughts:
"So long as you don't know you're dreaming you're safe"
Kudos to whoever gets that reference!
5300175
Deep sleep reference?
You have my attention for the moment for a believable character, but you are treading a fine line with the whole 'already knows about them' angle as it is one huge turn off for me. The other that kills many stories is that there is no language barrier involved. If they all turn out to speak the same language I'll leave the story alone and not look back, but for now I'll wait and see. Hoping for good reading material here.
5300175the deeper sleep?
5300901
You were close on the first part, but I was going to use writing as the language barrier, as it's often unreadable in the show, yet perfectly understandable by the characters. Hope it's not too much of a turn off! ^_^
OK, my interest is peaked at this point.
And we would like to see more.
And you should know that we particularly dont like that whole 'language barrier' thing. It kinda makes it awkward/
And we don't like awkward things!!!!
Very much true.
5301265
Noted
5301265 That's 'piqued' you mean. Anyway, I'm allowed to have my own opinions and preferences. I like the writing and I like the way it's written. I was not trying to be rude but honest so please do not think I am bashing the story or the author. I do tend to stick to my preferences though and I have a lot of trouble comprehending ANY two cultures magically speaking the same language if there has never been any prior contact. Now if there was a good, logical explanation as to why it is the case, I would be more inclined to read on. For example, if Luna's use of Ye Olde English was because of some ancient contact with the wizard Merlin, that would be enough for me.
5301492 Who said you're bashing it?
Yes, we are not those simple-minded readers.
Yep
YEAH!!
5301813 That is a relief to hear. I dislike such sorts. I'm going to go ahead and fav this story so I can see updates, but I'll reserve the like till later.
5301900 Same
*Thumbs up*
5301031 Yes!
You read that and EVERYTHING goes to shit! :D
5300455 DeepER sleep, close, but not quite!
Oh dear.
5323618
Thanks for the tip!
this is kinda a nit-pick but he kinda forgot about his sister. i know how a lot just happened and hes most likely in shock but would someone just forget something like there sister was missing? i have no idea but a thumbs up and tracking for you so far
5324442
Thanks! I have a plan for that!
5333767 works for me. looking foreward to it
"Good hooves"? If she means she's in a lab or in a cage going to be studied on then I can see where this is going.
Pinkie Pie has three sisters, and your French is abominable.
Emily is obvious in Canterlot with the princesses. That's what in that letter Twilight got. That's also how Twilight knew Emily's name. The big bad probably has send the 2 humans to the 2 biggest threats (for him) to distract them. While the princesses and elements are busy with the humans the big bad can do big bads.
Oh does sunbut have his sister? Who knows?
Really though anyone else think somepony else has her?
5347360
O.o ... Wow. Just, Wow.
5348614
I know my tropes. And that doesn't mean the story is bad. Cause the way to it and how it's written is just as important.
Them feels
5348614 I know right! Ive seen other comments of his! He's like a fucking fortune teller!
ohhhh snap shizzle, shiz just got serious doge
So, that guy he fought with was a bully?
If yes, there's no shame in what he did and he has a right to defend himself/attack the bully.
A bully won't listen to your words, the only think that gets through their skull is force.
Twilight is FAR too bipolar in this.
Who the fuck let Purple showcase his memories for everyone?! This is such a disgusting invasion of privacy, I can't stand it.
Aaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd... We're back. *Gulps*
5299062
Yes she is
5868996
Fixed that!
:)
5869007
Fixed that too!
:)
Question...
Why is there a Haunter on the cover?
6697745
It was the best related pic I could find. I don't know any artists. :(
6697920 I know a really good one. Want me to recommend you to her?
6698114
Are you serious?! Yes please! That would be amazing!
6698184 Here she is. She did my profile pic, and I can vouch for her.
6698222
Thank you so much! :)
6698337 Not a problem. She's always pretty busy, but, she's been gone for two days, so she should be back on soon. I sent her a message saying you were headed your way.
Oh, and if her art style doesn't suit you, or her prices are too high, there's a group for writers looking for coverart. Search for it long enough, and you'll find it.
6698502
Got it. Thanks again!