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HunterBraxton


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What happens when three best friends and a truck get dumped in to an Equestria that wants to kill them? What if their only hope is to escape with no actual plan?
First Fanfic. Criticism is appreciated.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 26 )

Not bad. :moustache:

I gotta see where this goes.

also I caught the fresh prince joke.

4976919 Thanks for feedback. I took out a few of them.

I continue to be interested.

I'm a fav to continue to abserv

I could only think of one thing... WHAT THE FUCK, CELESTIA!?!?!?!

Celestia's absolutely irredeemable.

Rainbow's traumatized.

and Brain's a fucking cock.

:rainbowlaugh:

...Millimeter Peter...that's fuck hilarious

Brian you done fuck up

or Celestia will have you banished to the moon.”

Too bad she's unable to do that

Your most faithful student, Princess Twilight Sparkle.”

She's not her faithful student, and Celestia is way too OOC here

5 cylinder engine? no V-8? What the heck kinda truck is this? a Hyundai?

:P

So far not bad


Creepy Celestia is Creepy

I added some important stuff to the beginning of Chapter 1, you might want to go read it.

5292801 FINALY someone who agrees!

This is a very good story so far, and i can't wait to read more of it. :pinkiehappy:

A post ninja ?

We had four ARs, three SMGs, one sniper, one LMG, six pistols, seven sticks of C4, twelve frags, sixteen smokes, and ten flashbangs

Wut ? They want to build an army or something ? They want to be ready for the Zs or the Aliens ?! Seriously ?

m.memegen.com/nn9wnh.jpg

they sure ransacked the castle armory

5581781
Once it's all distributed it's a bit more even, plus it has to last.

Bitch stole my brother, ima kill her.

That last sentence, WTF! Im gonna watch this, do me a favor and get Gdocs, if you don't already have it, add this to some groups and space out your paragraphs, long streams of words can lost readers.

When is the next chapter coming out?

Celestia looked at her with a classic areyoufuckingserious.jpg face. “Nooo. What we do is we HANG THEM WITH THE HUMANS! GUARDS! THROW HER IN THE DUNGEON! In fact, throw her with the humans, maybe they’ll save her a humiliating public execution.”

Cause killing one of the element barriers is a great idea

Imma slap a large "Made in China" sticker on the statue's forehead to confuse the fuck out of Sunbutt

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