Roses are red, Violets are blue, i suck at rhyming so fuck you. orange
I was at a rave last night only to wake up in the middle of the woods and find myself befriending bunch of wooden wolves and mutated lions. Also to find out that i was some type of king to something called a "Everfree" Whatever that was.
I though of this story during class one day and wrote it down. This is just a quick work in progress to see if it works or not and to see if anyone likes it. There will also be new characters added new and or old.
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Besides a few grammatical errors. The first chapter seemed a little rushed or fast past. But besides that great story so for can't wait to read more!
Kewl. Seems like something I would keep on reading.
MOAR!!!
This is cool Hope U make more and just a little bit longer
lol reacts as celestia and luna
a human king Everfree very nice
Nice www.youtube.com/watch?v=kIfOjkB17BA I will need to see another chapters to favorite it
this idea needs to be written more its good thumbs up for good idea and ill wait for the next chapter
please this story MOST be updated regularly because I want to see what happens next
and please I want to see this creature
be shown who's THE BOSS 
i wonder when his brain will reach the point of non caring. like a sorta euphoria of "i just dont give a fuck anymore"
Moar Please
4327389 Read the story, 'No Bucks.'
I'll be an editor!
4328005 alright
4328010 I'll be on sporadically though, but I'll edit what I can. I'm already editing three other stories, so I might be busy, but I'll get to everyone. Especially yours. I like this story and chapter.
Yo my negros wanna eat some salad cake with the cheese turtles
An ok premise, a short start.
Damn though. How many "I" did you use? I lost count after 120. I get it, it's a 1st story point of view. Work on that, and you won't seem lazy and unimaginative.
4328022 ok nevermind your a bit busy with the other three i will just find someone else you don't have to do it anymore.
4328604 Nah. They're still updating and stuff, so i actually have a lot of free time,
OW! My head, where am I
OW! My head! Where am I?
I opened my eyes and looked around to see that I was surrounded by trees from every angle there was. Hell I think there was a tree growing on a tree. I stood up and looked around me again just to be sure and found the trees still there in all directions. I looked down to see I was wearing a black leather jacket with a black polo shirt with a pocket. I was also wearing blue pants and black hiking boots. I looked through my pockets and found a hiking knife (a big one) and a pocket watch. In my coat pockets I found a flash light and matches with small medic kit, along with my IPod and solar powered charger. I looked around again to see if I missed anything but I guess I found everything the first time.
Hell, I think there was a tree growing on a tree.
I stood up and looked around again, just to be sure, and found the trees were still there.
I looked around to see if I missed anything, but I guess I found everything the first time.
“DRINK, DRINK, DRINK!” screamed the crowd as I drank my fifteenth beer. By the time I finished my tenth I was buzzed and by my fifteenth I was out of there. As soon as I finished the crowd cheered throwing their hands in the air and grabbing on to me throwing me above them. “PUT… ME DOWN…MOTHERFUCKERS!” I said trying not to puke on them while above them. They finally put me down and I head to the closest thing to me that I could puke in, which was a tree about twenty feet away. I ran to it and tried to put my hand on it to steady myself but I must have missed it because I kept moving forward head first in to a tree. I looked up at the last second to see that my hand did come in contact with the tree it just that the tree did not come in contact with me. Let me put that in simpler terms my hand went straight through the bark of the tree like it was not even there; it was something you would see in Harry Potter when he went through the wall to get to the train to Hogwarts. My last words before my face was engulfed by tree were “FUCKING TREES!!!” then a bright white flash knocking me out.
"DRINK! DRINK! DRINK!" Screamed the crowd as I drank my fifteenth beer.
By the time I had finished by tenth I was buzzed, and by the fifteenth, I was out of there.
That's all the corrections I'll be doing. My eyes are burning, and I had to much sugar. I'll return to this tomorrow!
This is one of the best chapter I have ever read in a story! Liked and Faved!
This was good can't wait till the next chapter comes out.
Oh so is it in the your human and you universe?
yea this is going to end really really badly
. oh well at least it will be hilarious. 
4381758 What?
4381780 LET THE TROLLING BEGIN!!!
even if they are big,mean,and mute and possibly dumb hes still going to go after the ponies with a vengence because slavery is wrong
4381844 Or is he?!!?!?!?!?!!?
4381852 i believe he might but your the writer and im no mind reader there may be a twist somewhere
4381887 or will there!?!?!?!
So, are the reverts changelings or..?
...wild ponies maybe?
4381892 you will find out in next chapter
4381892 Also look. it say anthro
ANTHRO
4381841 OK so is isn't just asking because there is series of stores people made that there are humans that can't talk and unintelligent in equestria :)
4381895 *says
Also, why can't ponies/changelings be anthro too?
4381998 Did i once say they were changelings?
4381998 and ponies and changelings are anthro
4381991 oh ok
Frickin called it,The ending I mean.XD
4381887 HEY!Forrest!Hi!
4382306 hey lucky fancy seeing you here
4382313
4382302
you friends?
4382344 he replied to some of my comments on another story like an hour or two ago
4382347 weird... but still cool
4382254 You didn't say they were.
You also didn't say they weren't.
Thanks for explaining the anthro thing tho :]
4382344 possibly :D
Odd, seeing alot of these 'humans are slaves' fics popping up lately.
4384668 ya i thought of going with the flow and maybe changing it up a bit.
A nice start to the story. You have it going in a direction that should make it interesting. I look forward to seeing how this story plays out. So keep up the good work you are doing.
Dragonfox
This is looking good so far! Hes not gonna be very happy when with the awnser on what humans are used for...
And here's moon