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A young man is thrown into a world full of magic and creatures. Will he ever find a way home or discover something more. Join us as we dive into this world and its strange inhabitants and the mane 6. The ratings may change based on the writers choices. (Story in progress)
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good story!
continue please!
Not a bad start! A few errors here and there, but the main thing you're lacking is some emotion put into the character. I don't know what he feels, yet it being third person shouldn't prevent you from adding any. Anyways, a thumbs up to you.
More please! :3
Because there's no other location than the Everfree Forest where he could've possible appeared
Ok, it's a minor issue, but it's really annoying me. Could you go back and edit these chapters to make sure that the space is after the quotation mark? I have seen it too many times where it is "Bla Bla Bla Bla ha ho hy gen. " instead of "Bla Bla Bla Bla ha ho hy gen."
It is a small issue, but if you could fix it, that'd be great!
4753982 which chapters and lines exactly?
4753982 oh wait I see i'll get on it when I'm free
Weeping pegasi? They're dead.
(Or sent into the past really.)
4545155 in the forest cliché?
Holy shit Black cloak with wings!
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GRIM REAPER!