I've been doing a bit of thinking and I think I should rewrite most of the story. I'm beginning to think I've dragged out the story a bit too much and it sorta makes it a little dull. So I'm probably going to have to rewrite a lot of the chapters mostly to redo some grammar. That and to try to make it more along the line of a novel instead of an episodic tumblr type thingy.
I could leave it the way it is except for the grammar and removed segments
Or
I could rewrite it only from Joe's perspective focusing only on what the main character is doing. Typically this could remove the scenes that have a pony's point of view
Or
I could entirely rewrite the story with shortened and less detailed chapters
Based on what you guys chose I will take action. Just give me your opinions and suggestions.