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CassandraMyOCisBestpony


My name is CassandraMyOCisBestpony. I chose that name after I invented the OC named Cassandra. She is long lost sister to the princess, and the seventh element of harmony. My OC, don't steal.

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In a tribute to "The Three Stooges," Adagio, Aria, and Sonata plot to take over Canterlot with a variety of farcical schemes. They try their very best not to kill each other in the process.

Rated E, with the caveat that that there's gratuitous amounts of Sonata abuse. At the time of writing, I had not seen "Rainbow Rocks," so there may be some slight differences between the canon events and my story.

11/15, top of the popular stories list!

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Comments ( 23 )

Bahahahahahahaha :rainbowlaugh: Oh man that too good.

Oh, my gosh, I love this! I love The Three Stooges and I love the Sirens...Sonata is the perfect Curly!

I WISH TO SEE MORE OF THIS!!!

"Trixie, need your help!"

I think you're missing a word.

Other than that, good show. :moustache:

"We'll murder the white one's cat and pin the blame on the rainbow one." :rainbowlaugh:

Why do I imagine that this is not only accurate to their regular relationship, but this probably happened off screen during Rainbow Rocks?

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Cute. I wasn't overly fond of how you shoehorned in Twilight's Element of Harmony, since it's supposed to be in the recharger Tree, but otherwise an excellent bit of farcical slapstick. Thank you for it. :twilightsmile:

Doesn't work as well in writing, but still an excellent effort. Though I am a bit disappointed that Sonata didn't take on Curly's "indestructible head" running gag.

"Oh...oh...oh...oh look!" That line made me laugh my ass off when I first saw it.

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Found you again, Foamy! Three Stooges fan too? :twilightsmile:

The ending felt... abrupt. I dunno. Maybe having the Dazzling's reaction to the gem crushing to offset that abruptness. Maybe have Sonata end it by saying something so cliche and dumb. Like, "I guess that's the way the cookie crumbles. Hey, it looks like Kool-Aid!"

Needed more eye poking. And tongue grabbing :P

Overall, I'm impressed that there's a pony fic out there that's a homage to the Three Stooges. Fave bit was the mannequin scene :heart:

This is a pretty funny story, but there are some things you may want to edit. There are several times where you're missing punctuation marks like periods and commas, as well as time where you forgot to capitalize certain words. For example:

"don't talk that way about your boss!" She smiled at the customer, "your drink, sir."

"we could be queens if we got our hands on that!"

"we're not gonna kill anyone... are we?"

There's also a couple of times where you forgot to put in quotation marks.

"Grab his legs," instructed Adagio, "we'll hide him in the broom closet."

"Try and stop us," bragged Adagio.

And there are a couple of spelling errors.

"I din't know how to make that." whispered Sonata.

"Cryststals? I don't think so."

5447633 Thanks for those; don't know what I'd do without you.

First time I've seen slapstick in Fimfiction.

"What's the holdup?" demanded Adagio
"Sorry Adi, I was a little horse." said Sonata with a cheeky grin.

That one hurt!

"Wasn't us," said Sonata innocently, "they're fliers, maybe they flew."

This one made me kick my wall.

"I thought I told you do some smashing!" snarled Adagio
"I am. I'm doing a smashing good performance."

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"Twilight's solo is coming up. Now stop horsing around."

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5566654 So who got hurt more, you or Sonata?

5275896 What bit in their show wasn't a T-cell mega factory or a knee and throat terminator?
That's why The Three Stooges is my favorite TV show. Unlike Laurel and Hardy, The Three Stooges has something happening all the time, comedy being at the top of the list.

I only got 1/3 through before I facepalm myself unconscious:applejackconfused:.

10/10 would read again and probably not finish it. :rainbowlaugh:

"I play a little piano" boasted Sonata
"Yeah, but can you play a big one?"
"Certainly." She took a seat at the grand piano and began to play a melodious Beethoven piece.

What kind of Beethoven piece did Sonata play?

Someone needs to make a short animation of this. I laughed so hard xD

Woop woop woop! Nyuck nyuck nyuck!

Lol i hope this this story should be a series but in chapter with title XD love it

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