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My name is CassandraMyOCisBestpony. I chose that name after I invented the OC named Cassandra. She is long lost sister to the princess, and the seventh element of harmony. My OC, don't steal.



Colgate needs to brush her teeth, but something very important is not there. In her quest to reclaim what was taken from her, she embarks on an adventure of tragedy, loss, and ultimately redemption.

10/18/15; Top of the "Popular Stories" list! Thanks, guys!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 19 )

No way! NOT THE TOOTHPASTE! *dies*

That was......... strange.

But It was funny, have a like.

Oh man, that ending... You know it ends with Colgate running her tongue over Fleetfoot's teeth and moaning to herself over how clean they are. Now the question is, is Fleetfoot into it or not?

Congrats on hitting the popular box. I look forward to a penitential sequel with mouth hygiene obsessed Colgate .

I love it! :twilightsmile: So hilarious!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Great job!:twilightsmile:

Colgate kisses Fleetfoot and her dirty mouth. I wasn't expecting that. Funny story though.

Heh. Nice little distraction.

In doctor phills opinion colgate needs to get real.

Did not predict that Fleetfoot was just as crazy, just in her own way.

Awesome sauce. :pinkiehappy:

Nooooooooooooo! No! This can't be happening! not to Colgate! The toothpaste!

Haha! lol:derpyderp2:

Comment posted by crazypony300 deleted Oct 30th, 2014

You can actually write serious stories? Good to know.

This was really well done. I enjoyed it a little more than I think I should've. The first chapter gave me the feels: mouthwash and baking soda. That's one heck of a combination to get your teeth cleaned.

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