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The Dazzling's are now defeated, in shambles and now they have to live their life as normal teenage girls. So what can happen, well when your have a trio of people who everyone hates, what normally happens. Wacky shenanigans, over the top situations and various schemes to try and get back on top. These are The Dazzling adventures of The Dazzlings
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You need to fix that wall of text.
Press the Enter key when you're done with a paragraph. It's not that hard to do.
Not trying to be rude, but this could REALLY use some editing, and maybe a little bit of formatting, as well. Paragraphs are always nice.
I for one liked it and hope to see more
I think you got their characters perfectly! I can't wait to see more!
The story has some decent points, but it really needs some editing.
Funny. Nice
Really great dialogue in this. Made me a laugh quite a bit. And you had the characters down to a tee!
Please continue writing this. I wanna see how the whole jobs thing goes.
Very funny, very in-character, and I'm very excited as to where this is going!
I'll say it has!
Who are you and what have you done with Sonata?
5451422 I took a cue from a comic of the Dazzling's I was reading and decided to make Sonata a complete psychopath. I'm tired of her being "The Good One". I think she's just as evil as the other.
5451443 I thought I was the only one...
Doesn't seem that insane to me
Good chapter, but my God, the spelling and grammar errors!
I'm unfamiliar with comics but this is still hilarious
Lol this was gold very nice.
Lol this was gold very nice.
5451443
Being sadistic isn't evil. It's an illness.
They could handle any human my ass. Whether siren or former siren, facing the equivalent-possible reincarnation-of a norse berserker in a fight would probably result in at least one of them getting killed. While both sides have/gain unnatural strength, unlike the sirens' opponent, they're still self-aware enough to feel pain and get slowed down by any injuries they receive. Mind control also probably wouldn't work on the handful of people in the world like us because, again, mindless to the point of not even being self-aware anymore when we go berserk. Not really much left for mind control to latch onto. Sirens or physically enhanced ex-sirens, that fight would still be extremely dangerous for them. I'm actually insulted by your assumption that they can handle any human and thus, quite cross with you.