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Well the Battle of the Bands is over the good guys won and the Dazzlings lost, big time. Than after a post battle fight Adagio is left with no powers, no minions, and no ride home. But a lonely walk will teach the sinister songstress a valuable lesson about friendship and that maybe just maybe Aria and Sonata are more than just her minions.

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Good story but I think the robot may have missed something

3 magic jams

Now I may be wrong but I think you meant gems

Very nice work. Although some of the wording and pop-culture reference may have been a bit distracting, I got a good chunk of jokes you threw. From one good writer to the next, I would also like to suggest a fanfiction to you. My Little Pony: Rise of Empress Midnight on www.mariohyrulia.weebly.com it's not complete and has a lot more words, but from what I've heard from reviews, it's nice.

Not bad, I spotted a few grammar issues but nothing that big. Just be sure to double check things after using a spelling program. I can point out errors it missed here if you wish.

The story was funny and cute. Adago went thru a nice character arc but it was too short and likely needed ether a longer one-shot or more chapters to be believable. The refs made sense, particularly our protagonist comparing herself to Megatron. I do wish we had seen more of the other Dazzalings's reactions to these events.

I would also like to suggest the best MLP fics I've ever read! : http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14298/petriculture , http://www.fimfiction.net/story/188812/friends-forgiveness-and-magic , http://www.fimfiction.net/story/200912/sowhat-now , http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39192/the-daily-show-presents-equestrian-interviews , http://www.fimfiction.net/story/92137/syncopation , http://www.fimfiction.net/story/32725/the-science-of-magic , http://www.fimfiction.net/story/123873/moonlight , and http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45749/and-the-stars-shine-forth.

I think human Sunset would be a lot more creeped out by some random chick going

"Sunssset Shhhimmer!"

It always feels wrong when authors make ponies out of Dazzlings. Like there is something wrong about being sea being.

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