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Huntress of Sacred Dream


I've never been on this website before, so forgive me if I'm not the best. I'm a 15 year old girl just trying to find her place in the world of writing - I hope you enjoy my stories!

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Adagio Dazzle has lived a life of hardship after the events of Battle of the Bands; it's forced her to leave the grounds of CHS and move someplace where the people haven't heard of her. Having to start from the ground up, she works hard and eventually becomes a sucessful artist - known all around the world.

On the last night of her trip as the sun goes down, Adagio finds herself wound up on the street without any recollection of how she got there. This time, it's different than the rest - because she found her.

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Comments ( 8 )

Congrats I love it! LOL:trollestia:

I guess this is a really weird spot to start the story since you've apparently got a ton of time (?) between RR and the current timeframe and it's really difficult to for me at least to reconcile the Adagio from the movie with the Fluttershy-esque character you've described in this chapter. I also have no idea what is really happening with really anything after reading the entire chapter...why do I care about Spitfire in the context of Adagio or Equestria Girls in general?

This needs a bit of world-building.

Who is the romance tag for?

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I'm sorry about that... I didn't realize I made Adagio such a Fluttershy. In the aftermath of RR I imagined that Adagio, Aria, and Sonata were kind of outcasts now that they could no longer use their powers... So I guess I was just creating a spin-off to RR, but I guess it's confusing, isn't it? :facehoof: My apologies.

I'm not allowed to tell you whom the romance tag is for - it's part of the story, and if I were to give it away the entire story would kind-of-sort-of be useless to write... But it won't be around for a little bit, but it will come through.

Thank you for reading and giving your opinion. I appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

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May I take a guess about who the romance tag is for?

Aria and Sonata?

Adagio and Sunset?

Both?!

Neither?!

Am I becoming annoying?!?!

You really need to make the scene change between her art studio and the airport more obvious, it was pretty sudden.

Six years is a lot of time. Who knows in how many ways the still evolving canon will turn this into an Alternate Universe fic in the future. Nevertheless I'm interested to see where this is going, if only because I'm a sucker for Equestria Girls. :rainbowkiss:

Adagio as an artist, huh? I'm interested. :pinkiesmile:

Hmm good job for a newby. I understand CONFUZZLEMENT

I like this concept a lot. I can't wait to see where you will take it because it's a different look at Adagio, and considering it's after Rainbow Rocks, I think it makes sense how she's acting.
And I can't wait to see Sunset Shimmer either!
Yes, this story looks promising, so I'm definitely tracking this...:pinkiehappy::heart:

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