Sometimes movies don't end the way we think they should. This is how Equestia Girls should have ended. A selection of Equestria Girls Parody shorts, done in the style of Howitshouldhaveended.com's "How it should have ended" shorts.
Chapters (1)
SkyeSilverwing
Joined 15th Jan, 2012 ·
Offline
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.133 seconds
Total duration
768 users online
690,073 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
This was written by a nine year old.
Too logical for this group, Like the animals don't bite in their petting zoo.Funny like BLAZING SADDLES
I
(Scene)
Don't
(Scene)
Think
(Scene)
This
(Scene)
Was
(scene)
Written
(Scene)
Well.
This is the best thing I've read all day! And I've been reading... all day! Flash getting beat up by all Twilights FanFic boyfriends was the best part, right after demon fluttershy! Congratulations, you've earned a spot on my tiny favorites shelf! (I still wouldn't change a thing in the movie, all the OC's are fine too, I hear trans-dimensional relationships are pretty hard to keep up.)
The hell did I just read?!
5215699 Of course it isn't written well. I got it in my head and wrote it out with about the same intellect level and style as any of the HISHE shorts. Low sleep, too much Caffeine and too many plot holes to riff on, with no narrative structure at all. Frankly, I wrote it more to get it out of my head than to add a brilliant fiction to my list. It would have worked better in video form, but I don't do videos, so this will have to do until someone who does know videos contacts me and asks to make it a video.
5215465 No, this fic was written by a sleep deprived caffeine addled writer just trying to get it out of his head after a long day of work and maybe one too many beers. The bad writing is also a bit of a riff on the HISHE style.
5216159 I apprectiate your appreciation. I would only change the movie to fix plot holes and give Sunset and Flash more character and things to do. Aside from that, I actually loved it, and Rainbow Rocks is even better. I just hate things that give those who dislike it all their ammo. Take Sunset Shimmer knowing not only what the Element looked like, but exactly where it was in the castle. It bothers me when the writers can't give us even a passing "Why" for something as simple as how Sunset knew this stuff.
5215555 Of course it is. I did not put this out here for the likes. It was fun to write, and for some, fun to read. That is why it exists.
5216685 You just read a written version of a Howitshouldhaveended.com "How it should have ended" short, if I were to write one for EQG. Those are normally in video form, and are meant to be funny and Satirical.
Hishe is a masterpiece of comedy.
This is a masterpiece of shit.
5216703
If you don't care about your writing why should we?
As a person who has done stuff like this before on his blog and is familiar with HISHE, I can see what you were going for. I think it would be best if you would keep yourself limited to one or two of the best ones, or try to sum up multiple ones in "a big finale". If you only do a snippet for each individual scene, it doesn't really work out.
Also, comedy really works better "on paper" if you do it in script format, because then it comes out "faster", like comedy is supposed to be. My own "prose comedy" that I've done has to be "dry" because that's the only way it works when you aren't trying to get it out one after another. At the bare minimum, try to make characters speak in individual paragraphs with curt descriptions and isolated text, because that will at least give the "idea" of a script.
I suggest a blog just in case the site doesn't allow script format. I know some people think that's "tacky", but it really works well for certain comedy.
Don't get discouraged. Your scenes that I looked are genuine things to point out. You just need to work on your "presentation" for a prose format.
5217504 Actually, my first idea *was* to put it in script format. Unfortunately, Fimfiction specifically denies such script-form, so it was a no go. As for sticking with the best ones, I had trouble getting it over the Thousand word minimum as it was. Make no mistake, this would have been a heck of a lot better if I could done it in the form it needed, or with less restrictions. As it stands, I am content so say that I enjoyed writing it, even if it did not come out as good as it might have elsewhere.
5218090
In that case, I repeat my idea of leaving it as a blog post. No restrictions on the format of those.
I do that from time to time.
Why does this story have so many downvotes? It's f*&%$£! hilarious!
Nice HISHE
Best part was Brad getting his butt and his plot beaten up
Wat?
5216977
and you think you could do better...? 
I for one, thought it was funny as Hell!
holy crap these are hilarious... the last one was my least favorite so I guess I'm glad that you put the AU skits in chronological order... I had considered suggesting backwards, to keep chipping away as the movie scene by scene, but whatever, this was lots of fun
Common Sense is definitely a factor here.
Friendship may be magic but common sense is better.
The title of this should have been 'How Common Sense Would Have Affected Equestria Girls'.
Have a like.
I'm not gonna lie, I would only like to see that..
This scene is not possible.
Twilight was in the other world and the news about Flurry heart haven’t been said, let alone her birth.
This is pretty funny