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MetalBrony823


A brony that loves Heavy Metal, Africa, Rock, and Animals. Not to mention Ponies too. Fluttershy is best pony! \m/

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What of Luna

5156533 I'm gonna put her on a separate story involving her and Spike if that's okay with you.:twilightsmile:

Wow. Never in my time on FiMFiction have I seen something so disgusting. God, it confuses and disturbs me that this fic has more likes than dislikes. Please, if you want to do clopfics, LEAVE PEDOPHILIA OUT OF THE PICTURE, DAMN IT!

And just a revision to my earlier comment, I've discovered that their's an entire group dedicated to this. Wow, this fandom is messed up. I'm probably coming off as shallow and not willing to look at the show a different way, but here's my two cents.

I'll tolerate cloppers. As long as they don't go out, form a group and tell everyone on the streets that all bronies are cloppers, I'm okay with them. What I won't tolerate is this. This isn't me saying that this casts a bad light on the fandom. It doesn't, because no one looks at the fandom long enough to see this. This is me saying that I'm disgusted by pedophilia, period. Whatever, I'll just ignore it. I've got better and more productive things to do.

5156581 It'd be better if you simply continued with a Ch2 instead of a separate story.
I'd be glad to proof-read.

... females don't produce semen..

5157090 Well I'm confused then, what do females reproduce:applejackunsure:

They have ejaculate, yes, but that's mostly just a lubricant. Semen contains sperm, and goes into a female to go to her egg, which is in the womb. It can be called cum, but isn't the same thing

5157150 no when you cum you reach your climax. people just call semen cum, don't know why.

"Dude that's really messed up":moustache:
"He's MY Spikey Wikie you 1000 year old NAG!":raritystarry:
" Celestia's a Democrat?":facehoof:

"You just "f"ed up":derpytongue2:

5157203 Let me help?

Cum is derived from come, specifically from come off which means "to become detached". "Come off" was long ago an English euphemism for male ejaculation, then later for orgasm in general regardless as to the sex or one's ability to ejaculate.

THE MORE YOU KNOW :rainbowhuh:

...I can't believe this is my first comment on this crazy board :pinkiecrazy:

Dude you need an editor I didn't even make it a hundred words in and my inner grammar Nazi is strangling me asking, "Why are you reading this mein fuehrer". I stopped to read this because I literally had nothing better to read that I already haven't and thought "hmm maybe this will be funny". Sorry but I'm gonna tap out, I can't even tell you if its even all that good or bad of a plot. Auf Wiedersehen

BRD

"Yes. It happens when a stallion or a mare is feeling so much pleasure that they release semen when they are satisfied enough."

I don't think mares/females has semen. :applejackunsure:

Stallions/males cum semen, Mares/Females cum "Juices". :applejackunsure:

Ugh, where did you learn about sex? Because females don't produce semen. They priduce a fluid that is like a lubricant and all an orgasm does for a female is make her vagina clench and relax rapidly, sometimes pushing excess fluid out, exactly in the same frequency as a male.

5157123 How old are you? Are you old enough to be writing clop?

Here for the plot.
"It's a clopfic!"
What?
"It's a clopfic, n00b! It doesn't NEED a plot!"
Oh yeah, right, sorry. Okay then, here for the... the... you know what? I'm just gonna leave.

I think most of the clop writers on here need a sex ed class or biology 101 where babies come from

females produce vaginal fluid it acts as a lubricant also the egg floats in this fluid until it is fertilized and looses its shell and implants itself in the wall of the womb until birth

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