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Horale guey ESO so me gusto muchisimo no ubico que te falta es mas clopping por favor.
Love the story man this one is going to the favorite section...for later night literature.
Not bad at all the story never felt rushed unlike some others i have seen to be honest not the biggest fan of clopfics but this one is pretty good good job on it.
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Thank you. :)
This warrants a follow up where Rarity tells everypony the news. Though, I do have to wonder why she and Spike haven't said anything about them being an item.
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I'll consider it. :) I think it's more fun if I don't make everything clean cut. It allows you guys to come to your own conclusions. :)
Good story, I give it a good 7.1/10
Not bad, you put a lot of focus on the physical instead of the mental during the sex scene so that would help improve your writing.
Remove the Sweetie Belle tag though. The story isn't' about her, she's just barely in it. The story's about Spike and Rarity; they're you're main characters.
wow, that was pretty good read
; i mean sure it was tamed compared to other clopfics i've read 
but, still enjoyable 
I love the little dude. Spike is the best. anyway good story I liked it.
yay
das good
I don't know why, but when I listened to Brad's reading of this story on YouTube, I envisioned Spike as being a dragon who was about Rarity's size, while she and Sweetie Belle were their current sizes.
Whether that was intended or not, this was still an excellent story. Sparity is probably my most favorite shipping couple in the entire show.