Sweetie Belle shows Scootaloo and Apple Bloom her new story.
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[01:23:32] <Filler|Requirements> The next sentence that comes up in this chat will have around a thousand words written about it, then sloppily posted on FiMFiction.
[01:23:39] <Nicholas> Nooooooo
[01:23:45] <Filler|Requirements> The next complete sentence*
[01:23:52] <soundslikeponies> That sounds awful.
[01:23:58] <Filler|Requirements> [01:23:52] <soundslikeponies> That sounds awful.
[01:24:00] <Filler|Requirements> There we go
Not sure if bad idea or just not executed as well as it could have been.
I see what you were doing, though.
It's by Filler. 'Nuff said. I'll read when I get home.
I'm sorry Sweetie Belle, I'm afraid you won't be getting your cutie mark in creative writing.
Just don't let Princess Celestia read your story, otherwise you might be getting your cutie mark in moon exploration.
I love how Sweetie Belle didn't even bother mangling Rarity's name.
is u and sweetie belle going to make chapter two
i demand those other 23 chapters!!!!
...
And here I was expecting either Applebloom or Scootaloo to say "I really liked her... mane?" about Sugar Awesome
Oh well.
This is totally the kind of badfic I dig ^^
538767 I theStallion second that motion!
It is so real it is almost scary.
Tricycloo.
538748>>538767>>538880
Please please please.... Not only is this now headcanon for me, I want more Sugar Alarm.... SHE"S THE MOST AWESOME THING EVER!!!!
"Uhhh... Thanks?"
See, Sweetie Belle can write...
"No more please...."
She's even more awesome that one time at band camp!!!!!
TO ALL OF YOU..... SWEETIE WRITE MORE>>> APPLE BLOOM STOP BEING MEAN
And that's how equestria was made....
The only problem with this (well, aside from the things that are supposed to be problems) is that the emphasis on awesomeness makes it sound more like something Scootaloo would write than Sweetie Belle.
This is either the best thing ever or the worst thing ever. I can't decide which.
Ah, the power of giant hats....
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Why decide? Can't it be both?
Cant tell if trollfic
or well executed comedy.
Unfortunately, the comment is correct that the story-within-the-story sounds more like something Scootaloo would write. Also, that story is actually better than most fanfics posted on this site, so it fails the comedy test in that regard. I was amused that Sugar Alarm's sister is Rarity, and she didn't even bother to try to disguise that fact. Anyway, cute overall. +1.
i find this humerus
539055 XD
Wow Sweetie Belle's first story, needs a lot of work if you ask me.
Giant hats!
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I see you're putting IRC to even more good use, Filler. I found this enjoyable; it was absolutely terrible in the way you meant it to be, and it was only 1k words, so it was bearable to read through it. This gets my thumbs up.
I can't imagine how hard this must have been to write, though...
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Sorry, but I've no plans to continue this. Perhaps that's for the best.
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Most probably, but I already had the screencap at the ready, so...
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Not very hard, since I was basically throwing out words as fast as I could to shunt the fic idea out of my head and study for the midterm I had in four hours.
Also, I held back quite a bitThere were a lot of things I didn't think of doing. The grammar is standard, there's no overuse of bold/all-caps/ellipses, and I didn't even think about putting in LUS. No ubiquitous use of in-narrative sound effects, either.543267
Well, then, with your permission, I'd like to refer back to this story in some of mine. My main line of stories, will have references and cameos by the CMC, and maybe, just maybe, they will be talking about this story. It is honestly one of the best fictions I've read in a while.
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I'm not sure why you would want to, but if you wish, then by all means, go for it.
I was thoroughly amused, and regret nothing.
I look forward to the other 23 chapters.
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Since I'm probably not actually going to write the other twenty-three chapters, I leave you with this. While it isn't the inspiration for this, it is related.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/8932/The-Lejendary-Lejend-of-Masterroxxor
i will await the other 23 chapters
must. resist. urge. to. vomit. because. of. so. much. awful. grammar. and. spelling.
You better write the other twenty-three, I gotta know what happens to Sugar Alarm!
What the fuck did I just read
I...*facepalms* Te problem with making fun of terrible fic is you still have to read terrible fic.
This was still pretty funny and did really feel like it fit a child's view of the world.