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6863186 It's happened a few times now, I'm just hoping to stay up there for more than a few minutes
Any Questions? Love it.
AHAHAHAHAHAH OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!!!!!
I desperately want to see Jack fight another dude wearing power armor in an ultimate brawl of titanium clad badassery!
10/10.
6864505 Well shit, now it needs to happen.
Love the new cover!
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Because that idea is...
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Ok. Bitchiness first. I felt like there was something more to this fic than what I saw during the Corvellan war flashbacks than there was for me and I was right. Seriously the fic took a mega x giga fuckton of notches after that. Not that the alien war scenes were bad per se. But they didn't seem to fit.
On the second point of this checklist BZ on the fic. Seriously took it up a notch over all.
Always get a grin when I see specific chamberings on firearms.
Hmm... maybe I'm just in a bad mood and hadn't noticed... but this chapter... reeeeaaaallly rubbed me wrong. I wrote a whole diatribe and deleted it, because it wasn't constructive, just vitriol. That said, points for the Fallout reference, it was a bright spot. This was decidedly the worst chapter in awhile for me, for reasons that aren't worth troubling other readers over (they either read it the way I did, or not, which is fine) but the build up towards something big on the horizon is interesting.
“Yes, me space marine, fight mean aliens with big guns. Fight hard. Kill lots. Wow. Such war. Much Semper Fi.”
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HAHA yisssssssssss! That made my day right there!
And now all of the ponies are deaf, because none of them had ear-protection and were exposed to machine gun fire.
7267384 In my opinion, that's the greatest way possible to lose hearing. Although, if you think about it, Equestria's got magic. With magic, you ain't gotta explain shit. Maybe a muffling spell or something was used.
7452561 The 'its magic I ain't gotta explain shit' trope is weak, used to explain weak writing. If magic was used and had an impact on the story, then its effect should be mentioned if not explained - I'm pretty sure a human who doesn't normally have access to such a spell would take notice of it, and that alone could lead to some interesting writing. But on the subject of 'just because it's magic, I still should explain shit', some of the best authors I've ever read in the fandom were ones that explained magic in their setting and made it clear that their characters understood it, even if we humans don't.
Hm, Celestia referred to Jack as a shield, rather than a "titanium weapon" earlier. They are now working on two secret projects, Sword and Shield... Is there a link here?
Tachanka: "Where the hell is my gun?"
Kapkan: "Did you leave it at the last op on accident?
No one got the siege reference except for one guy
OUR LORD AND SAVIOR TACHANKA WILL SAVE YOU ALL!
Vintage memes are a weird hobby for a career soldier to have, but then, he's engineer corps.
Luna has the biggest girl-boner for Jack's overcompensation, huh?
I love how some ponys were " holy shit i do not want to be on the receiving end" and others were " holy fuck i want to fire that thing"
Them darn Friendship lasers.
Project D.O.G.E is online.
As Jack wandered back to his room and his bed, Peytr was busy.
Petyr. Messed up your own characters name.
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It's not my fault, I plead the fifth
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Dude like every media link you've used so far for this story doesn't work, might wan't to fix that.
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They're all dead because youtube wants to be ass. Half the time it's not worth it.
Buttercup! Were are bubbles and blossom!?!
Clever... You have old school weapons offically but ones shit hit the wall you bring out modern guns out of to the brim filled bunkers.
god i cant stop thinking about luna having to see a wet dream about machine guns.
It still doesn't make sense. Field note literally threw a fire ball at him and he's still wasn't effected. How the fuck was Celestia able to grab his ass
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The metal is magic resistant, his ass is not.