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Excellent stuff, my man.
imma tell you what i see-
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The combat felt fast which is good in the light of Jack's recent changes. Felt appropriate.
i can already guess how this will be going i can see 2 thing happening either jack and flitter will meet each other as opponents during a mission pointing guns at each other or he finds out of the the equestrians was kidnapped and goes berserk
nice that was totally an 300% upgrade overkill from him and it's allways worth overkilling
Daaaaamn Jack!
The action is on point as always, I wonder how Flitter and the gang are going to react to it. Also, how's Jack going to react to the kidnapping? I can only hope it'll be as glorious as this chapter was. Nice way to kick this off, cheers mate.
Man, sick armor. Kind of sucks that Jack is even more of a freak now. But I guess that's the price you pay :/
Greatest.Chapter.Ever.
This just reminds me of "voice verification: be human" that Halo mech is the closest thing I can compare this to.
Ok, so he's NOT firing laser beams from his hands...
Not that I'm disappointed with him becoming Doomslayer on steroids
It's good to see Jack back to being completely bad badass in combat, as well as some nice new universe lore.
It it me or is humanity's situation slightly inspired by the Old Man's War books? Just with mankind being hyper aggressive against similarly hostile alien races, as well as later on messing with an alien allience?
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I've never read those books, would you recommend?
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I would definitely recommend the Old Man's War series, which was written by a Mr John Scalzi. I think it has an awesome setting and a great overarching plot.
There are also some cool technologies like creative uses of nanotechnology and consciousness transferrence.
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That comment was written two years ago. A bit to late. Also it has become irrelevant as I don't read the story anymore. I read a a lot anymore in general here. I have other things to do.
So...is Celestia gonna get tried for war crimes after Jalgromak gets his shit pushed in by Jack?
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I honestly doubt it. Nobody in Equestria would do it.
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Well, that makes sense since she's basically God Empress to the ponies. But now humans are involved, which Celestia is claiming assistance from, and who are going to win the war for her. I just can't imagine that after the war blows over and humans catch up on how Martyr Kessle, basically Marine Jesus, was treated that people are gonna take it lightly. Plus, she knowingly sent tons of Terran humans to their deaths by sending them back to Earth. And is it just me, or was Jack's psych eval super sketch. Like Celestia just tasked Sable to allow it through no matter how mentally unstable Jack appeared. Seriously, maybe Jack taking Celestia to pound town wasn't the optimal solution, but she has made it clear that she does not value human lives. In fact, I bet if any of this came up in an Equestrian court, the charges would be waived on account of Terran humans having next to no rights (i.e. Poppy raping Jack). But that's beside the point, Celestia would be convicted by the HUMAN RACE. As already demonstrated, human lawyers can tear ass through alien legal systems. Celestia may have just screwed her people. That is not to say I can't understand why she did what she did, but just Luna said, Celestia is going to have to live with the consequences of her actions. Of course, none of it may come to light, and Discord is probably gonna just pop Jack's head if he survives anyway.
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Just imagine if the Xenophobic, Militant, Ernest Blackburn were to discover all of this. He has a bad track record for xeno relations.
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Good gooooood!
9264733 It has so far.
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Ah mein Freund! Wie geht es dir?
Fuck the YHaY series. Love ur story though.
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I'm curious as to why you feel this way
The last several chapters, and particularly this one, I sometimes think we may have jumped the shark all the way into a different fic. Jack was already op as shit when this story started; now he's like the god of 40k, and off fighting on some world that I can't possibly be expected to care about at this late stage. Oh well. The combat stuff was well-written, so I'll assume that was the point. What we have here is a shakedown cruise for this new godmode
Suesuit before it gets put to work against an opponent we give a shit about. In theory.Heh... I guess ole Jack is still... *sunglasses* playing the Martyr...
I do find it amusing that Blackburn is basically that same as Maltenics... just further along in his technique given the tech headstart. And what a surprise Jack's 'noble sacrifice' comes to naught as Blackburn moves against Flitter's group anyway.
Typos will be PMed, and are minor. See ya next go round.
I love how Jack has had a desperately needed updated arsenal. As the war dragged out his armor began to seem like an absolute mess of wires and disrepair that hardly functioned on the battlefield. It gives the refreshed sense of how powerful it was when he first started with it. I love this fic
Jack is literally the DOOM Slayer now, amazing
7ft tall? Check
Doom armor? Check
Ultra fucking badass? Check
BFG? Check
Oh my god, it's the Doom Slayer
Lemme get the song BFG Division playing.
BIG FUCKING GUN MOTHERFUCKERS!!! Demons? What Demons?
I just imagine Jack wearing the black Cerberus armor from The Surge.
I like to imagine he's got that huge suit that you wear in Metal Wolf Chaos. It's a bit bigger than he is, but it has a 'presence' to it where you can almost see The President having a face in the suit as he yells out: "RIIICCCCHHHHAAAAARRRRRRD!!!!"