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That's a hell of a way to end the first act.
Looking forward to Act 2
I....don't remember the russian....
I know it's a whole while away, but I love to imagine jack getting in contact with the Marines and raining hell to the pones
6735899 He's been there, just... sulking, because he can't talk with anyone and he had to tear up his favourite tracksuit to make a kilt.
6735918 Think more along the lines of "To hell with you, I'll make my own Marines, with warthogs, and strippers!"
Only us hardcore Otakus would get that reference.
You have done the Otakus proud on this day, son.
And now I know where you got the inspiration for this character. 'M' name, dark deceptive personality, scientific cruelty, and a sick smile. Now we just need an Eruka and a Free, and the gang's all here.
6735955 I uh... I hate to break it to you, but I got baba yaga from John Wick, and I don't watch anime. I don't know who any of those people are :|
And there we have it, there is NO way that's staying quiet now.
6735965 Well, fuck. Are you sure? Because, hot DAMN. You nailed Medusa's character. Baba Yaga is the name of a fortress from the same anime. Like holy shit, the similarities are unreal.
6735997 Baba yaga is in essence the Russian boogeyman, but hey! If it makes people happy
6735994 Nooope!
6736012 Eh. I was just happy because I thought my favorite writer was an Otaku.
6736021 Sorry to disappoint, but if it makes you feel better I own the Cowboy Bebop dvd. I haven't watched it, but I own it!
6736065 Well, go watch it. Bebop's pretty great.
6736012
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That poor sad russian... he is instantly my favorite charecter. Also, why haven't you mentioned Jack's drug problem yet, I know it's there.
6736118 Trust me, Act Two is gonna be a bad time for him. Long Term withdrawal symptoms are going to be cropping up quite a bit.
6736140 Good, good.
Plot twist, Jack has metal plating on his skull which stopped the bullet.
(Actually, that is the most likely scenario.)
Omg that was intense wow... Just wow ....
Damn now I gotta wait for moar
6736152 It'a been stated several times that he's got a titanium plate in his skull. It's not the first time he's been shot in the head.
6736152
The metal plate was established last chapter:
6736184
6736185 Yeah, I tend to forget things lately.
Honestly, what the fuck is happening at this point. There are jump-cuts fucking everywhere, and things that have never even been mentioned before are popping up and you're talking about them as is they were. (and I don't mean the metal plate.)
6736585 If you can be a bit more specific, maybe I can help walk you through this? I tried to make the chapter as easy to understand as possible, but I have a tendency to make thing difficult.
Maltenics deserved an extremely painful death. Maybe being hung by chains and slowly burnt to death by thermite, with her skin slowly skinned off of her. She was a sick bastard.
6736590 Just off the top of my head-
Who the hell is the Archmage? WHAT is the Archmage?
How did Jack just suddenly start speaking? Did he get his helmet back? Did he magically get his voice back?
Who attacks the facility Jack is in? I'd guess the Archmage, but then why does Maltenics not get stopped by anyone? Who is shooting at who?
Who shot Elissa? The Archmages' followers/bandits/groupies? How did they get GUNS in the first place? Where did Elissa get a human gun- How did she get Jack's revolver?
When Flitter & the gang find Jack, how did he manage to attack them when he was in a straitjacket?
6735965 Yeah! John Wick! Did you also take the brutal knife kill from Wick intentionally?
6736721 That's all explained in the chapters leading up to this.
The Archmage is the supposed overarching villain for the primary story of this universe. His is the supposed head mage in Canterlot's magic muffin school. I'm not using him directly, I'm simply referencing the fact that he exists and his plans are mucho bad. On that, the ponies who attack the facility are under his payroll, but in the main story, nobody is allowed to speak his name or rank, hence calling him 'Boss'. The Archmage's hired goons are preforming a smash and grab raid on the facility with the intent to injure and kill as many inside as possible.
Jack regains his voice via Mark, just at the end of Chapter 21. Elissa and 3901 also get theirs back, but they aren't aware of that until Jack speaks. A lot of people are figuring Mark for Discord, so you can draw from that.
Maltenics was stopped, but she surprised the attackers and injured one of them. She had Jack's revolver (One of the pieces that was recovered when he was tagged & bagged, along with his plate carrier and the nuke.) She fired a shot at the attackers, but missed. That round, the .44 magnum round, was the one that killed Elissa. Hence Jack recognizing the sound of the gun. On top of that, the sound of a .44 magnum would be very distinguishable over muskets.
In the short jump to the Bandit hideout, it's explained that the griffons have rudimentary understanding of gunpowder, on the level of early muskets. Some of these have gone 'missing' from military rosters, and slowly found their way into the criminal underworld
Just prior to the gang's rescue of Jack, he's show using a small section of jutting stone to break the buckles. He's simply hiding it, to fool whoever had come to the door. Elissa took the gun forcibly from Flitter. This is from when they were opening the doors to the enclosure, but were stopped by a security squad. Elissa snuck up on Flitter, and took the gun from her. (The sabot pistol is Jacks)
Anything else?
6736777 Hell yeah! I loved that scene, wanted to do it in writing for awhile.
I am not even kidding when I say I legitimately felt adrenalin in my blood when I read this paragraph. I actually could feel my pulse beat up into my temple. And I swear on my future engineering career if she does not get her jaw r͓̤͓̜̟͂̽ͅȋ̹͖̣̳̘͋ͣ̄̒͒̏pͦͣ̇̋p͙͚̘̦͖̋̋̾ͥ̒ͩe̱͙̱̠͚̙̍̌͐̈́̚d̤̈́͂ͭ͂ͅ ̺̮͖̼̻̎̋f̼̮̬ͯr͉̟̬͈̞͔͂ͧ̌ͧ̃̈ö̦͖́͊̅ͯ̅ͪ̇m̟̪ ̹̟̞͇̺̓ͩͨͩḧͅe͖̱̼̣͍͊ͣͅȓ̮͖ͤͬ ̘͖̟̜̝͉̹̇̊s͂ͧ̋̃ͪͤ̑k̫͍ṵ̥l͎̖͍̖̯̤ͤ͑́l͚͙͇͚͓̖̏ͬ ͍̯̲͕̀ͧȃ̺̗͉͓̹̪̅̐̎̓̅n͇̻̯̟ͧ͋̔͋ͣd͍̐͑͐̅̽̓ ͕̪͇͕̺ͭg̹͗͗ͪ̃̅e̖̹̺̦̝̙ͣͅt̖̹̝͗̈̐͆̅̓͂ ͇͙͖̟ͅr̤̩͖̝̯͖ͤ̂̅͌͗ͮa̻͖̝̣ͨͥ͋̊̓̂p̫̬̖͙̥̺͉̈̎ͧē̩͙̐̍ͭ͗d̞̲̫̼̹̿̇ͅ ͙̮̮̟ͬͥb̩̆̈͐̍yͨ̃ͪ́ ̬͕͖̱͕͗̂̅̓i̻͉̯͎ṭ̗̬̞̫ ̤̠̘̜̖͉͛u͇̯̯̰ͯͫͮͭ̎̓̃n̺̿̂t̪̟͚̥ͣḯl̦͆ ͓͈̤̣̲̰ͯ̀ͬs̬͙ͨ͆ͭ͂h̩͈̦̠̄ͯ̃̌ͪ̾ͪḛ̲ͭͦ͋ͭͩ̒ ͓̥͚͇̩̭̍͂c͓̹̊ͫa̠̪̮̤̟̱ͦͣ͆n͔͗͂͑ ̥̳̅ͥ̄o͍̙̯͈̞nͧͥ̇͌l̖̞̜͆yͫ͆̑͆͐ͥ̉ ͍̘͇͓͓̲̎͋ͩt̪͖͖̠̻͚̮̍̐̾̊͆a͙ͨ̄̑̾̎͗l̥̰̗̻ͬ̿̃̓̽ͮ̀k̖̳̗̳̖͑́̋ͬ̄̿ ͉̳̺ͫ̿̈́ͮ͒͐ͯi̳̪̬ͫn͙̜̼͕̾̌ ͕̺̞̎d̗̭̟͖ḙ͉͗̊c̦͉̈ͥ̃o͕͚̞͙̠̼̦h̺̳͈͙̘̲͒̉͒̆ͯe̦̝̟̞ͤ͐ͯ͊̃r͔e͎͉̠͎͖̓ͯ͌ͮn̲̟̪̦̦͎ͧ̂̽t̘̮̱̪͚̥͂ͅ,͉̳͖̠̊̏ͯ̀͋ͦ̚ ̦ͣͩͥ͌̋w̝͔̤͎͕̲ͫ̉ͦh̯̯̓i̮͉̣̳̝̒̀ͣͥn͕̲͙ͤ͛ͫ̏̒i̳͔̮̲͋̌̇̂̀̉́n͖̠͇̓͑ͩ͐̂ͅgͥ̾ ̙̩̗̺͈̫̘͒̏b̭̖͈͆̎a̲̙̮b͔̞̯͔̺̍͌͊ͯͪ͗b͔̥l̤̺̗͓̦̞̙e͇͍̰̫̜̠͑s̘̖̲̜̪̿ͅͅ ̝̯͈̝̳͎̖ͫI͇͇̙̬̻ͭ̽̓̚ ͂͂͒͑̍͌ȧ̻̗̫̙͔̮̫̎ḿ̜͕̓̄̓ ̟̻̥̘̫̬̈g̺̞̳̗̀ͨͩ̀ǒ̱͚͉̫͐͐͗ͪ͑i̘̝̱̟ͭ̾̑́ͥn̬͓͉̥g̻̪̦̝̻͕ͬ̋̌͂ ̫̞̹ͧ͋͒̒ͨt̮̯ͭ͋̊̀͂́̋o̟̜͎̠̭ ̳̹̖ͭ̈́͆n̩͙̠̞̱̗̲ͨe̝̦͈̱e͉ͫͨd̘̑ͭ ̏̋ͫͧt̰̤͓̬̀̄̄ͤ͛ͦͦo̫͓̗̦ͨ̃͐ͨ̔̒͋ͅ ̖̙̥͐̐̋̆̿s͓̹̝̃͐̐ͨ̐̃e̟̣͔͉̻̔ͥ̽̚e̻̖̾̆ͧ̄ ̱̻̟͆ͦͮͭ̓̒a̙̻ͥ͑n̄̽ͫ͊ ̤͙͛͐̄̈́͑ͅa̘̐̎ͪn͖̰͇̠̼͂̾͊ͩ̀ͬͣg̻͍̯͔e̗͔͈͙͎̔r̲̯̣ͪ̄͛̂̓̈̈ ̔͐̔̾̋̏m͙̖ͩ̎ͪǎ̼̪̠ͭͯ̓͊ñ̮̼̦̑ͭͯ͑́ͅa̞̻̋g͙̠̜̘̮̹̣͐͑ē͓͈̺͚̫̜̌m͈̣͉̟e̽ṋ̯̹͚̲̲̤͐ͦt͕̺̮̝̣̎ ̹͓̝͚̩̅c͂̑̈͑͗ͥ̿l̼i̤̣̣̒͗͂͛̑nͪ͊̽ͮḭ̗͉͔̳̞ͪ͌̄̈ͫͬc͖̰ͅ,̦͑͛ͬ m̫̺͓ͯͦ̋̓̋͂̚͡ͅaͩ̏̐r̵̭̼̦͈̟̈́ͪͥḵ̸͓͈̏͆̍́̔ ̨̠̼̼ͦ̃m͖̞͈̝̑ͩͮ́y̪̩̯͈ ͙̘̿͐ͅw̡̯̻̺͍ͦ̾̑ͥ̓ͭo̜̫͑̍̎̚r̜̼͍͐d̤̤͖̝̳̥̗̽̑ͥs̻͇̠̞̤͚̋ͣͣͅ.͓͍̼͕͉͓̣͆ͪ̃͘
Either way I'm really getting a kick out of this, and seeing that this is only the end of act one certainly excites me for what you may bring to the table later on. Keep it up!
I f****** love this story . . . so much!
... Mother fucker you cliff hangered me right as I got back into the story. That is not nice. Please update soonish. Any ways, random bit of useless trivia, bt the early Colt .45 pistol was tested on a model by model basis for its ability to founder a horse, as in fatally wound a horse with one shot. Makes you think what it would do to a pony, doesn't it?
Why in the blue blasis is chapter 22 cald bobayaga
6738088 It's a reference to John Wick and Russian Folklore. Baba Yaga, AKA The Boogeyman
I thought baba Yaga was a witch.
Also what does the Russian bits say?
6739628 True, yes. She was a witch that ate children, but Baba yaga is considered to be essentially the boogeyman. I think. Don't quote me.
damn, I wonder how the royal guard will deal with this one.
well, assuming that she saw the titanium mangled, and not punctured, he probably only has a concussion, with minor to no brain damage... hopefully...
I hate stories that are dark, I read them, get addicted, then dark stuff happens, then there's no way I can stop. DAMN YOU!
...
please hurry up and post more chapters
Да! Мстить, что по праву твое!
6739628 I skimmed over the second portion of your question, my bad. The first line, spoken by 3901 translates out to "Martyr Kessel why must you wage war on one mare? What if she is in the right? "
Jack's response is "War does not determine who is right, only who is left. And I intend to be the only one left."
Keep in mind that I don't speak a lick of russian, so I used Google Translate. For any language other than English, I will always use translate.
6739740 Hey, you were warned well ahead of time! It's not my fault I put lovable character building bits in before shit got horribly dark. Well, okay. it is my fault, but regardless!
6740308 Месть это только начало. Наказание приходит.
6740653 It's really his own fault. Blinded by rage he didn't focus on anything but his primary objective. He lost sight of everything else, even his own allies. I probably should have expanded the raid a bit more however. Maybe had some more intervening bits with random gratuitous violence. Should I?
6740654 ehh, just makes it more suspenseful
U don't live in the states do you iornwolvs
6740770 Nope, I live up north in an igloo. I get my wifi's when the router moose circles back around.
6740808 which explains why you're applying to me at 3 in the morning pS Im from Kentucky the moonshine state. I lose my power and internet every time the Mind Blast which is every other hour it seems like and last week I got my first pair of shoes
Okay that's a buntch of bull s*** but i do live in Kentucky.
Dude, YES!
I was blaring GWAR while the whole thing took place, and its so damn good! I can't WAIT for more!
I'm not sure where baba yaga comes into this, but I'm not the best for her lore, still a great end to it. But poppy needs her comeuppance in the WORST way.
6737222 I saw exactly what you put in that corrupted text... that's both admirable and disgusting.
6742886
Heh, it's meant to be!
:D
6746596 Essentially, but I'd thought it up long before Fallout 4 was even announced.
6747215 Hey not to be that guy but... When should we expect part 2