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7740119 Jack's universe is all homebrew, though it does borrow aspects from a little bit of everything and anything.
Wow, I really want that douche to die painfully.
How does he expect a Human who was beaten and tortured to capture someone as strong as Jack?
Fimfiction has, for reasons of coding, always struggled with gdoc imports. They keep saying every once in a blue moon that they fixed it, but it hasn't ever lasted longer than 12 hours.
I would recommend typing it up there, then copy/pasting over from it directly to the story box. Just make sure you put it in the right one.
I want details of this pricks death. In full, bloody fucking description.
7740509 I've tried that before, it fubars pretty much everything else like my indentation and italics/holds. I'll figure it out.
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Italics and bold need to be manually inserted (either typed out before transfer, or searched out and clicked in afterwards). I believe the indentations can be worked in by simply transferring to .txt format first, but that might be a different site I am remembering that for. If that is the case, then you just need to type it out without it and then punch them in once you have it transferred to the submission box.
Sorry I'm not able to help more. Everyone either has to deal with it in a complicated and time consuming way, or someone has figured out a fast solution and is keeping tight lipped about it and isn't sharing.
7741175 For awhile it wasn't giving me any guff, but now it seems every odd chapter it comes up. It's not too bad, it's just annoying and I need to pay attention to it before I post.
This can only end in horrific bloodshed... excellent....
7742184 Giving an Ork the ability to fly, and fit easily into one of your orifices is not cute. I'd prefer the WAAAGH to stay outside of me.
7742495 Aw come on, haven't you ever had mushrooms? It's just like that, except the mushrooms will rip your teeth out.
I kinda want humans to show up with a reason to support the equestrians, the griffons would get reamed
Not necessarily because we have better stuff, but because our production numbers are so godamn high.
Just imagine, modem missile destroyers flying...
D:
7742664 It'd be more akin to Surgical orbital strikes against production centres and hypersonic strike fighters swatting Imperial naval vessels from the skies. Humanity wouldn't fuck around, and the story would last two chapters after the arrival of the peacekeeper fleet.
In other words, a pack of SBS would kidnap Carolus, waterboard him, and then he'd get to take a long walk out of a short airlock.
7743202 The tradition of smacking royal horsebutt?
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The tradition of the glorious sunbutt and moonbutt interludes.
7743529 and that's probably why we shouldn't include them, the story would be over so quickly
7740413 sex...obviously
How the hell did the griffons manage to not only build a ship bigger than the two equestrian super ships, but also give it gunsx, shields, and armor that outmatch them?
From what I understand the griffons main ship weapons are basically cannons and Gatling guns.... Which would do Jack-all against a steel armored hull, regardless of shields...
As much as I understand the story reasons for giving the equestrians a kick in their rears, this doesn't seem realistic...
Casualties are wounded and dead, Fatalities are just the dead. I'd like to know what the actual ratio is, please.
That said, WTF? Who gave the Op-For cheat codes?
7784651 There, fixed. In the light of that comment, maybe I should have named Jalgromak, Game Shark
When Righteous Justice's prow was described I got a definite 40k feeling
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Earlier, when prince jackass returned from the north, there was a scene were his dear old dad recieved the specs of the shield project. I assume they just took those and upgraded.
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And let that serve a fine warning to any future trading of technology.
Because it can and will be used against you.
Not the best time to say this, but if Toasty dies I will be sad boy.
I think I may have spotted a rather glaring plot hole. Flitter technically cannot have operational command over JSOG once Jack became conscious again simply because of the fact that he is the penultimate individual in JSOG chain of command, which is decoupled from standard military chain of command per the fact that he himself and all other JSOG members are knights. That already makes Flitter relieving him of command to be insubordination alongside the acts of captain Chord since neither she nor Chord are knights, meaning they are jumping the chain of command in doing so. Only a doctor would be able to forcably relieve him of duty. That, or a direct order from any of the princesses, but none of that happened at all, so flitters words carry absolutely no authority and she can't force him to do anything.
It just seemed off that you wrote flitter as ordering that. Even if she DID have operational command, it was over that of the highest ranking NCO's chain of command by acting as their superior officer in that situation, wheras Jack is still operationally higher in his jurisdiction and by default decouples her from his own chain of command by simply being there.
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You're quite right, and even if Flitter was properly cleared for it, she doesn't hold the right rank for it. Of course, while it was technically insubordination, it saved Jack's life in the end, as it held him back from being suicidal. Again.
I know I'm an asshole because of this, but I'm hoping that something happens to Adia so Flitter and Jack can get together.
I've gone full Yandere...
The Griffon Empire will be in about Germany ww2 state if the mad Emperor isnt stopped.