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ITS A CHRISTMAS MIRACLE!
6767373 No, no they did not. She's still alive, and at large.
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Then I await the time when Jack finds her
Ah Captain Jack. A classic. I have many fond memories of that cadence. Memories of having to wake up at 0300H to do a six mile run in 36 degree temperatures, at a 13-min mile pace, in the sleet, uphill and/or stairs (depending on the route), and face-first into the wind while calling out that cadence. Good times...
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F my life...
WAT?! Another?! I shouldn't.. I need a nap, it's a long night ahead... eh buck it.
Well, I've never been a fan of Jack's mood swings, or the almost universal fear of him. Bullying isn't really all that admirable an archetype, nor is it part and parcel of being a Marine. But whatever, there's worse things, and the man has some trauma. The fear part is funny to me though. Ponies will kick manticores, steal from dragons right in front of them, yell at minotaurs... actually, maybe Rarity is just insane... Either way a human's 'fangs' really have no reason to scare ponies. They do fine with much larger, more intimidating predators. And smaller ones... Spike's smile is damn creepy, and that boy can chew gemstones.
The interactions between Jack and the guard were really fun. The cadence thing and then all the stuff in the mess hall... yeah Jack'll be fine once he's out of the hospital. Or at least less often triggered.
It's funny, I mentioned tech development in the last chapter and now it comes up here again. In medical fields it makes sense that ponies would be almost on par with earth. They also have video games (granted, about 30 years ago ones) and synthesizers, but are stuck on muskets. ...Yep, makes perfect sense, actually. With that in mind, sounds like Jack's got some work ahead of him. Shit that this 'verse's Discord would bring to Equestria doesn't seem likely to be as benign as Flitter intimated.
Ooh, the return of doc Sable? Oh I'm sure Jack just can't wait to talk about his childhood while lying on a couch. ...And that very image is my Christmas gift to all. I'd draw it, but that would require a skillset which I lack. Happy upcoming New Year... since I already mentioned Christmas in the other chapter that also just came out today, thanks for that. And to all a good night!
SSgt is also Marines, mate. It's Sergeant First Class that's Army while Gunny is Marines.
6767569 Those moments in life when you actually miss boot, eh.
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"It's either the best worst time of your life, or the worst best time of your life. Good luck figuring out which."
-Unknown
holy shit neu chapter's yay
6767748 He was more talking about his technical rank as PMC Specialist, as it's an Army rank.
6768244 Ah. I was interpreting the words more literally as written.
6767743 With the fangs, I'v always thought of it as a sort of uncanny valley sort of thing, or something along those lines. For the Equestrians, seeing a human with incredibly pronounced canines would be like seeing a cow with shark teeth. Your initial, knee jerk reaction wold probably be to pull away and go 'What the fuck?' I figure it starts with that, and is coupled by the natural aggression his smiles usually carry; again coming to a human doing 'inhuman' things.
Of course, those kinds of reactions are generally for ponies who haven't run into a terran human, or who have only met the peaceful ones. (Max and Petyr) You've got plenty of ponies who don't react at all when his teeth get barred, as they're either used to it or they've seen worse.
I plan on expanding on the revolver next chapter, so I won't be spoiling it here.
6767395 You think the darkness is gone, dear, sweet child? You are so, very, very wrong. :D
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Yeah I can see your point on that fang thing. There's this brand of dog treats that's supposed to clean their teeth. On the front is a picture of a dog with pearly white HUMAN teeth. Aaand it's fucking creepy looking... I think I latched onto it cause I see it bandied about in a lot of HIE stories. It's like 'humans aren't going to look that intimidating, look what else lives there...' but in a 'verse with more docile looking humans (though they do dig through stone somehow) it makes a lot more sense.
I don't mind about the revolver, but that reminded me, did Flitter's wing completely heal? Again, if that's coming later, all good. Eh, all good either way, enjoy your New Year's.
Where is all Jack's gear ... I mean did they find the stuff in his cave or has it been there this whole time.
Also how long should I expect this ride to be... I mean is it going to be another ackt or two or is it going to be another fallout Equestria?
Also has anyone sent in new cover art... Like at all?
6771241 That'll be explained in the upcoming chapters, and I've got another two acts planned. So, around 350K~
As for the cover art, no. My commission has also fallen through as the guy takes days to weeks to get back to me with super rough sketches that aren't exactly what I envisioned.
6772156 wow that sucks . . . can't what's fore the rest of the story though.
Hang in their buddy
6775592 It works out in the google translator, which is what most people probably use.
6777387 We all have our choices to make in life. She made her's, Jack make his, and Flitter did what she had to do.
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I figured it out. Anyway, it sounds odd.
Trust me, i'm russian.
6777488 It's okay, I know my translations are offensive to the eyes.
I fucking love you jack..
Two in one moth, and long chapters at that! You're really coming into the writing here and I love it! Interesting to see its post climactic events, which will be fun to see what you're gunna throw at us.
Can't wait for more!
6783031 We're sitting at about 35K~ words released in December, but if I can get my ass in gear and finish 25 We'll have around 42K~ Expect another chapter either today or tomorrow.
6767515 The first thought after this was are you going to pull a mister garrison (season 19), then I thought that would not fit the MO of the character. Still a good laugh though XD. Great chapter linking finely with what you typed in the past, hope to see more.
TOAST IS SO CUTE! I WANT ONE~
I sorta see why you d&d the time skip, but It was a bit abrupt for me...
“I do apologize to those I offended with my racist remark, I didn't know. So, on its stead, shithead over there will now be known as Private Fuckface. Good day gentlemen. Private Fuckface.”
So in it's stead.
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no, he put it down right, because it's is a contraction between it is and having a sentence that says "...In it is stead..." doesn't read as smoothly as "...In its stead..."
Damn... I got to read the other stuff Im hyped