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you call -11 cold? thats summer clothing weather
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Currently working in -30, Seattle doesn't get winter.
Eyyy, featured. I've actually gotten into the habit of looking at the front page... not for featured stories but for bookmarks. Did the site used to have that feature? If so I had missed it pre-update. Anywho ...I remember you saying 16k to me like a week ago. I saw 21k here and had to skim through it. Good the second time, too, but I somehow missed:
I think it was supposed to be 'Don't give up, Jack.' Given the context... but uh.. the italics thing distracted me... let's go with that. Then again, maybe he meant 'Don't get up, your guts will fall out and you'll die faster.' That could make sense, too.
Huge chapter, but so much good shit happening here, you really couldn't split it up without breaking the flow... unless maybe when they board the Halcyon. Still, I personally enjoy more words: more story to read before waiting for the next go round.
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I think that was about 2-3 days ago, I somehow managed to slam 19k on to this chapter in the week I was at work, thanks to the long ass bus rides. I wouldn't expect a repeat of that!
Absolutely awesome!
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natural high resistance to cold weather for me am nt really comfortabl in warmer weather tho
Jack has his face back, his body has been regenerated, he's getting new legs, he's got his arsenal taken care of, and him and Flitty finally are a thing.
And! To top things off, Chapter Sixty-nine is approaching.
That roundabout-part smells like Dukes. Couldn't stop myself from humming 'Shoot to thrill' by AC/DC.
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My favorite damn model year, just like the one Dom drove in F&F, and Jack just had to go and toast it. Goddammit, I'd get that car restored and repainted and bring it back to Equestria with me. Gonna need something for the victory parade after Jack breaks his foot off in Carolus's ass.
Also, copper plasma projectiles in a plastic disk? Powerguns! Hell yeah, Hammer's Slammers!
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One of the reasons why this chapter took so long was because I powered through the first book, I bought the whole trilogy on Amazon! I never thought anyone would catch /that/ reference of all things!
Is that some Humanity, Fuck Yeah! I’m detecting? What are you doing out of /tg/, fatguy?
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You're not my supervisor!
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Start with John Wayne, add in 2 wars of shrapnel damage, drunkmans' "I'm sober and hating it" look (if you know an alcoholic you know this look) a bucket of arrogance, a pinch of elitism and 20 gallons of distilled rage.
One of the best chapters in your story.
You know, i was bitching about wait times, but if this is what i get each time, hell, I'd wait a couple months for something like this. Keep doing what you're doing, I suppose.
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I do my best to deliver, but this one just couldn't be split up into separate chapters (Because I didn't want to.)
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I mean, i really like huge focken chapters, so it's whatevs to me. So long as it's good, im happy.
This is honestly the best fucking story ive ever read, i cant wait for more good sir
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Well I'm glad somebody likes it!
Foxhound
*staaaaaaaaaaaaaaaares*
It's too bad Snake isn't still kicking.
Damn, you sure know how to write one Hell of a chapter :D
I went to go like the chapter and realized i already did some time ago.
I regret reading this all in three days.
Aww, does it hurt? You better learn to love the pain, Jack. There’s a lot more of it to come.
DO I DETECT SPLATTERHOUSE?!
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Somebody finally got the reference! Hah!
This chapter was in my head recently so I went back and re-read it. Great work. Looking forward to more.
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Damn, long time dont ya think?
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Nah, just long enough!
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Okay i can work with that.
I've finally gained entry into the Caught Up club. What a sad achievement this is. I now have wait for updates.
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thx love this fic so far. id love to see what would happened if a military came to the YHAY vers (as in an the entire military of a country)
I wonder what Russia would do or Germany.
MOAR
In all seriousness though, great chapter. Took me was away too long to get around to reading it, I guess I forgot how good your work was
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That makes sense; great story by the way
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Ah, cool
This is one of my all-time favorite MLP fics. Like I said before, it's got a neat David Drake/Robert Heinlein/Keith Laumer vibe to it that I like. It's messy, it's dirty, it's a slog through the trenches, the battles are never one-sided or easy, and the characters are fascinating. Your scenes are filled with vivid detail!
Jack Kessle cannot be easily dismissed as some power-fantasy self-insert character, like so many of his kind; he's too developed, his characterization far too rich. In some ways, he's really damaged and off-kilter. In others, he's protective and fatherly. He doesn't waste time on monologues. He's quick and efficient and leaves the snark for when he's done with the task at hand. One of the coolest portrayals of a super-soldier I've ever seen, really.
8885441 I'm really glad you're liking my work so far, and I hope you'll stick around despite my long break.
Hey writer man, I think there's an error with the epub download. I don't know what it is but I ran it in Sigil (program for editing .epub) and it says it was a formatting error in chap 55, now idk what exactly it was cuz it fixed it automatically just thought you should know.
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I have no idea how I would go about fixing that in the first place
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Despite the break I'm still keeping my eyes on you, waiting for some more. Hope things are well.
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Oof welp just thought I'd say something just in case, cuz I have no idea how you would go about fixing it.
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So, not to be that guy, but in the chapter where Jack drove that car and drifted a bunch, can we talk about how many times you use the word 'feathered'?
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It's a good word! It's also the best word when describing an action where you lightly and repeatedly press upon something.
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No, the problem wasn't the word, don't misunderstand me. Copy and paste that into a Word document and search 'feathered', and tell me what the number is.
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I'm going to assume it's way too many.
Edit: Control F shows Feathered's been used 2 times this chapter. With Feather being 3
I've been drilling through this fic for the past week, and I have to say that you're definitely one of the best when it comes to the action scenes! I love this one, thanks for all the hard work you put into it
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I'm glad that you're enjoying the ride so far! There'll be plenty of action to come, trust me
What's this Flitter got an upgrade Jack got one, and Yuma. Your like Oprah everyone gets an upgrade. Did you also upgrade Jack's shitty cybernetics?
Happy Fuckin' Birthday Jack! Hope you enjoy the new lease on life! Hope that one present you opened to not make it your death day doesn't end up biting you later! Really though, a birthday gift shouldn't have strings attached. Shame!