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That ending is 100% perfect
rofl. that ending lol
I ship it.
Whoa DAT ending O.O
Oh yeah, they're gonna meet.
That ending was fantastic. Love the accent she has.
A NEW Challenger approaches! Ada! A similar character to Jack, Oh the hell they'll raise. Poor Flitter tho. Another fun chapter!
that was beautiful
Why do I feel like Order is going go be Jyggalag from Elder Scrolls? The title would fit him.
Oh fuck hahahaha!
I love it. Totally forgot about vynil being a leech. Also, eeyyyy! You got that art thing, and it looks rad as fuck! The story is totally quality work now! Good packaging and great insides.
Love the story! Keep up the good work!
Well, that was certainly better than 27... and hit some good touches. A bit boring, and frankly bespeaking of poor observation, that Jack and this other human apparently wreck locals effortlessly. Rainbow generally walks away from crashes that would reduce a human to paste, further she can demolish buildings by running into them really hard. The less said about Maud Pie the better... that mare is nonsense. Point being, I feel like you're portraying the entire race as too weak. It's a waste, cause Jack could easily handle a better fight without it having to come from another human. This is a very black and white fic, one of my major issues with it. Almost every scenario is a curb stomp for one side or the other. Ah well, at least it's a fun human that he met.
It's a pity that Jack's coming across a bit racist, though it's somewhat understandable. I feel like anytime a pony does anything he doesn't like he's all threats and physical violence, or occasionally just deep condescension. This human woman breaks his nose, among other injuries, and he's all smiles. Unfortunate implications, there... BUT... the 'go to sleep' thing made me laugh more than it should have. Well played.
Sooo... which Gilda will we get here? Post season five, complete with at least a partial redemption, or pre that and still the obnoxious ass? Meh, after Vinyl's 'portrayal' I guess I don't really care. Whatever works.
6932394 I was somewhat surprised by Vinyl's portrayal in this chapter, it just wasn't what I was expecting.
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Something I just thought about. Titanium is magically resistant, like nullstone.... And yet back in the facility the wranglers were able to hold him down with magic... How?
uh oh, I have a bad feeling this is the order that discord was warning about. A world without equal amounts chaos and order is a world without harmony.
For the benefit of mobile users.
Hmm?
Maybe? Idk.
BURN THE SOLAR HERETICS OF THE SOLAR EMPIRE
FOR THE NEW LUNAR REPUBLIC
Does anyone know if the SAS girl Ada is from another story?
Im kind of curious.
The Monk
“On her doorstep was Twilight Sparkle. While Derpy deeply respected the mare, like most in Ponyville, they wished she'd either switch to decaf, or start hitting the harder stuff.” -Dan_s Comments
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Any similarities to other characters are not intended. She was a unique character I came up with on the spot, as with most others.
Glorious humor xD
Nice chapter. As broken as Jack is i wonder if he can be fixed in his lifetime... I hope Flitter get lucky