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I really hope Jack gets his dues, I can't stand rape so this is very painful for me to read,
At this point I'm almost hoping the bomb will go off in Canterlot, or some major city, just to see the epilogue/reactions.
OOOOHH S@#T!!!!!!!
6695430 It's meant to be painful. No whitewashing.
Goddammit, she spilled the milk-sex-rape everywhere
Ok.
Okay yeah, that cheerful little bag of walking shit Poppy better get what's coming to her - that rape made me a not-so-happy camper.
I don't like the story any less, don't get me wrong, but I will if that rotten piece of desperate filth doesn't bite some kind of bullet...
Anyways, great chapter! Enjoying the story a lot, and I like the rate it's progressing at; fast enough to want to keep going without having to skim for interesting parts but slow enough to really get that fantastic level of immersion I look for in stories. Keep up the good work~
Is Jack from the world of Fallout? If he is then you should really add a crossover tag...
Hooleeshit dat was intense
MOAR I SAY MOAR
A lovely little poem I have written about our dear friend. In my mind, I have given him the name, 'Ragnarok', meaning 'Apocalypse' in Norse.
When numbers count down upon the clock.
When all foundations lose their rock.
When the Earth shakes and its people flock.
Fear the name...
Ragnarok.
I can't believe this only has around 300 likes!
It's fucking awesome!
I imagine Jack just bursting through the doors in slow motion with Carmina Buruna playing in the background.
Cue scared-shitless alicorns in three. . . two. . . one. . .
6695750 He's from a little 'verse of my own design
Let's be clear here: The only reason the this chapter exists, is to get us amped up enough that we get an almost orgasmic high when Jack finally goes apeshit.
IT'S WORKING
Oh Dayum! I can't wait for the next chapter... He's gonna go all Hulk on the ponies...
6696244 Well... yeah! Also people would cry if I skipped over that much story.
6696310 I just read through your entire story, to this point. What can I say? MOAR MOARRRRR!
Really looking forward to this coming back onto fliter's mom.
I want luna/celestia to find out why he wants to murderfuck their faces right before the bomb goes off, then they are just like "luz, we suk, we shuld of nevr been leadrs" *nuclear blast decimates everything*
it does disappoint me that jack didn't explain to luna anymore than he did, being a soldier he would be trained to approach a situation in a less "shoot and and ask later" type of manner, and rather try to talk with the higher ups (even if he was caught and raped).....
and then slaughter all those fucker scientists.
meanwhile, flitter, I wanted to see get the information, then braid glass shards into a rope, twist her mothers wings off, then tie the rope around her neck and "accidentally" drop her over the edge of a rocky cliff, with piranha infested waters at the bottom...
after shooting her kneecaps out.
~surprisingly I didn't fap~
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things like this piss me off.
(that means you did a good job, author)
6697033 Well with Jack's lack of explanation, he's under extreme duress and he sees them as hostile. Basically he just gave her a taste of Armageddon and left her in a panic
6697071 true, not the way I would of done it, but he's not me sooo
Wow that scalated quickly
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She'll get a bullet... In the form of a fist... Going through her skull and coming out her ass c:
At least I hope.
To be honest, I was hoping a different track would have been taken. Mainly with Flitter maybe sneaking to Jack his gear and helping him get out with the others.
So many readers infuriated about the rape scene... Yet it's part of the source material for this particular 'verse. Madmax's Equestria has non-sapient (...sorta...) humans that can and will mate with ponies. There's no real consent other than that the humans do it, and have for so long that it's culturally accepted. It's basically bestiality with the twist of the humans being the beasts. Weird, I grant, but hey I didn't write it. Now, to Jack, hell yes it's rape and deeply messed up. To Poppy... it's Tuesday. Wanting a silly amount of violent vengeance... well the way this story is going that's surely going to happen. I really don't care either way, but maybe it'll be fun. Jack versus Everypony incoming. There's a lot of people wanting it; it's fine that I'm not one of them. To the rest of this, meh. Blaming Luna and Celestia for what's happening in the lab is like blaming a nation's leader for the crimes of its individuals... which is pretty stupid... unless they fund the lab or something. But that seems out of character since they are pretty much true to their canon selves in this verse. Then again, this clearly ain't about whether Jack's the sharpest knife in the drawer, it's whether or not he'll be the biggest.
Is anyone getting the funny parallel? This lab is doing, in montage level high speed, what humans did to horses centuries ago: weaponize them. A trained warhorse is a product of selective breeding and harsh training and is a weapon as much as it is locomotion. We, humans, did that to make our wars easier, our armies more effective, for centuries. This is essentially the same shit, 'cept Equestrian humans are the war machines being bred, and the breeders are more like shapers since they have magic to make the process more extreme. I can't be the only one to catch that. And if you think no human ever acted like Poppy with those horses... I have unfortunate news for you and do not google it to argue with me, for both our sakes.
As a side-note: those omakes are seeming increasingly far-fetched as a possible future... unless Jack finds somepony's pot stash and mellows out a lot. Preferably before setting off the nuke... although Celestia moves a pretty big fusion device around at will... I'm not sure a nuke would seriously hurt her (maybe maybe not *shrug*). So many bloodthirsty readers want to see a bunch of innocent ponies (and humans) get vaporized; nukes don't really discriminate. It is the elephant sized Chekov's Gun in the room, so to speak, but as endings go that one's... sad. Just stab 'em, Jack, it's more personal anyway. And on the pot front: seems like Dr. Sable might be holdin' (what's up with that guy... calming aura... riiight)... I do guess the lab should probably get trashed first though. Even if I'm not the 'omg vengeance yay!' type of reader... Equestria will be better off with that place as a smoking crater.
6697680 I always like reading your comments. For people wanting extremely violent vengeance, that's exactly what I want from them. You may realize why later, or if you just gotta know, shoot me a PM. With Jack blaming Luna, he's essentially connecting dots when he doesn't have the whole picture and he's being prodded into one specific direction by Mark. The outcome isn't going to be pretty for anyone.
6697194 As stated before, only titanium is, his happy ass isn't.
Who's Mark?
6697946
But I thought Field (who I could have sworn was a unicorn) said that his entire body was filled with titanium, and that he tried and failed to levitate his arm to prove it.
This was from chapter twelve point 5. and he wasn't wearing his armor at that point in time.
Jack is gonna go Rambo when breaks out.
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6698264 Field is a Baticorn, so yes he has magic. The reason he couldn't lift Jack's arm was because he was wearing his Exo-skeleton, which is made of titanium.
6698216 Mark Volk is Jack's deceased best friend
DAMNIT! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU WITH A FLAMING, IRON CACTUS! WHY DID IT HAVE TO END HERE ON MY READING BINGE?!?! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!
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Umm... when will the next chapter be?
6698779 AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
6698789 YOU THINK THIS IS A JOKE CHUCKLE FUCK?! I'M LIKE A GRANDMA WHEN IT COMES TO MY STORIES! IF I DON'T HAVE THEM, I GET MENTAL AS JEFF FUCKIN' DAHMER!!! MOVE YOUR ASS AND TYPE!!!
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Please?
Flitter and Field are going to show up with Jack's exo-suit and "The fecal matter will make rapid and repetitive contact with the rotary oscillation device".
And I think it would be truly hilarious if after all this Jack shoves Delta-King down Discord's throat for messing with his already tortured mind.
... They trapped a human in a small room and left him with a sheet, a strait jacket, a metal muzzle, and the only warning they gave themselves is an iron door with a lock... Give them a fucking Darwin because they didn't pull his legs off to make it a challenge. I mean really, he shows signs of intelligence so they make sure he hates them and has nothing but time to think. When it goes so very sideways that they finally realize what they did, I am going to get a bag of popcorn to watch the show.
Well that was a thing.
Loving the way how Luna's timing was the worst for her. So many things she is NOT aware of and that just deepens the plot more! Not only are the baddies after you but the officials are too! I was wondering how he would get out cuz there's no logical way to in the situation he's in... Except a deal with the devil. Love it.
The rape scene, and it totally was, was a left field for me and at first I worried it was illplaced hormones in the story, I mean he's just been fucked up, no time for another way! But then, it wasn't treated as porn, it was horrible and gross and insane, in full context, making it well suited for the final push to the dark side.
The flitter scene resolved too easily I think, and there are some points that feel "drama for the sake of drama" but over all? Nuke em.
Ahaha can't wait for the havok he's gunna cause! I don't wanna see suffering on anyone but I love watching people's (ponies) worlds getting a human reminder of how you don't play games with us!
6715143 I'm uhh... not so great with the family conflict resolution, so that is definitely going to be the weakest point.
6717099 Eh. It's something. Honestly the way it played out fits how the show would resolve it so it's not completely unbelievable. I like to think they just act that way, and its not just the pg rating demanding they have peaceful resolutions, as they are suppose to be a happier world while we come from a neutral one. Leads to more interesting interactions between ponies who forgive easily and humans who's hard evolution makes us less inclined to believe an enemies turn of face.
6717798 Yeah, things are going to be very interesting when Jack begins interacting with new ponies in a less violent manner. There'll be issues.
My hype died in a bloody fire when I noticed the next chapter was still to be seen.
I was like "Nooooooouuuuuuuuu!"
6720336 It's a work in progress, gimme a bit
6721522 It's okay. I know how it feels to have a promising story with over... what, over 400 people waiting for the next chapter?
Take your time man. I'm just saying you hooked me with your story like a fly to a supernova.
Poppy, Poppy, Poppy... If you wanted a fuck you should have just found me. Now horrible shit's gonna go down.
My work here, is done.
7114959 What show/movie is that from?
I am totally gonna use that.
7151875 I am become death destroyer of worlds. is a reference.
6695756 That poem is rather nice. However, you should know that Ragnarokkr is in no way shape and form like the Apocalypse (in Revelations). Ragnarokkr is the 'final judgement of the gods', literally the final battle between the Aesir and the forces of 'darkness'. In said battle, the two sides basically wipe each other out with only a few gods surviving. Though Asgard takes heavy damage, the other layers of the world tree come out of it more or less intact - including Midgard. The end of the world doesn't come until later, when Nidhoggr rises from his prison in the roots of the world tree, after gorging on the gore of Ragnarokkr and plunges all of existence into darkness.
God fucking dammit.....
Discord... ya done fucked up bad....