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7138341 I'm not trying to downplay when men get raped, I know it's a big deal that doesn't get the attention it deserves. However, I think at the least torture is its equal, but no one in the story is giving Forge's actions the same weight. Maybe I'm a fucking weirdo, but I'd prefer the relatively peaceful rape over the violent torture.
7136695 I might be wrong, I'm no psychologist, but that sounds like a load of over-dramatized horseshit. There's no way torture wouldn't take at least as much from a person as rape.
Awesome action scene!
7138613 I'll admit that I haven't given it it's proper due as of now, but I will be getting to it. jack's issues don't stop at a little dab of forced dickery.
Off with her head !
But who was Mr.lanky-shark toothed human helping her out that got away ...? Will we be seeing more of him In the future ?
A great chapter, as always
Ok, burning question in my head that must be answered!
...Did he give his anti-tank missiles nicknames, or is Dum-Dum code for dumb-fire?
Hehe, bet'cha thought i had some major world-changing question, didn't ya?
.......Actually, i guess that could be considered atleast somewhat world changing, as it would show that Jack follows tradition of giving weapons pet-names.
Actually, Dum-Dum is a phrase coined for Depleted Uranium Munitions, which are commonly used for Anti-armour purposes. Chrysalis was deemed a big enough threat to warrant one of his six AT rockets.
(Edit) So after doing some more research, it seems that it's also a term for Expanding bullets. At this point, I don't know if I'm right, but I'm close enough to being right that It's bothering me.
I imagined the fight scene like this (skip to 0:55)
with this song playing in the background from when he started fighting solo, to when he fought the swarm.
FUUUUUUCK! YAAAAAAAA! JACK! IS BACK BITCHES!
Obvious alien reference is obvious.
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But ...Still A little bit unsettling.
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I don't recall reading him commenting on that, but my memory isn't flawless; I may have missed it. Anyway it was a joking gripe; in general he's been getting along better with those around him. I was worried he was going full racist, between his actions there for awhile and a comment you made, but that doesn't seem to be the case. A smidge condescending... me: 'did he just scratch Luna's ears.... HAHAHA WAT?' but that's in character, no big deal. Ponies are pretty touchy feely anyway.
Like I say, I think you're handling the balance with ole Sunbutt pretty well. Celestia, through raw power, moves a star around. Obviously, translating that into letting her solve everything can't work for the show or most fics since then there's no story. (I say raw power because it's more than just special talent towards the sun, she handled the moon for 1000 years while Luna was... in time out... plus when the alicorns gave their power to Twilight she moved both the sun and moon, albeit a bit awkwardly). She can't just burn through every problem though; she has the balancing act of not wiping out everything around her by just letting go. Think every overpowered mage ever trying not to just purge every lesser annoyance with fire. Her patience has got to be staggering. And yet, all that doesn't mean she's a genius. More experience than most other beings around? Sure. But that doesn't mean she can handle a totally new situation easily, especially one involving another very old being in Discord. It's going fine here... well I mean I believe the portrayal I'm seeing. In story... things ain't fine because her world is pretty tilted. I'm glad she asked for Jack to drop his informal tone, at least in public. If he's going to whip a new squad into shape he needs to set an example which includes respecting the chain of command. Ponies are going to follow his lead; discipline is key. In casual settings, hopefully they can move past the awkward events and stay on task. Seems like it but I'm still a chapter behind.
Interesting take on Poppy there. That means not only did she see nothing wrong with her assault on Jack (which I can accept since that sort of activity was long an accepted norm in this 'verse, for all that it's a bit odd), but also in what her lab was doing. I can't recall off the top of my head if she knew the specifics of the experiments, but she certainly knew they were killing off the 'specimens' at a fast rate. Well, we have animal testing here, too, I suppose. Anyway, I'd have to go read that again to get a better opinion of her culpability. As to her final denouement... write what you want the characters to do, not what the readers want them to do... including me, obviously. That said, I liked Flitter's plan of destroying her socially. In a herd race even more so than humans, that's no small threat. Taking her livelihood is only the beginning. No need to publicize Jack's assault, but the rest of what happened in that lab needs to come out... including her role there. That's justice over revenge, not always as viscerally satisfying, but better for the world. I look forward to seeing how it turns out, regardless of where it goes.
Ah, last little thing until I'm caught up... nice touch with Rarity designing uniforms (with Jack's input... I've mixed feelings about missing out on that interaction hehe). I know you haven't watched the show in awhile, but she was making military uniforms, mass production no nonsense style, in an alternate reality in the season 5 finale. Funny coincidence there.
While I don't really like first that paint Queen C as a insane ruler who lacks any tactical ability you have yet to alienate me... yet.
I will continue on regardless
Regarding the Queen...
(11:40 if the video doesn't cue it up.)
Amazing story so far, only thing that bothered me in this entire story so far was when he said "repeat" in the radio when addressing the helicopter-thing. Repeat specifically means to repeat last fire mission for artillery. Other than that, no complaints!
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The tunnel went longer than they'd expected, and by the time they entered the next store room Jack had nearly run out of detcord on the small reel had had brought.
The small reel he had.
"So... they've got us surrounded... well... Joke's on them then, THEY'VE GIVEN US A TARGET-RICH ENVIRONMENT, THE FOOLS!"
"You think I'm trapped in here with you? Think again! You're trapped in here with me!"
Always a good day to go bug hunting. Wonder how many he got to his name? And if the eggs and...other finds count. Those awful things in the breeding chambers and below.
That reminds me of Matrix when the Sentinels breach the dock... Badass one mech army!
I’m probably wrong but I thought Jack’s armor was immune to magic from it being made of titanium. If that’s so, how did Chrysalis’s magic affect him?
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His armour is covered in ballistic rated ceramics and alloys, the frame and his exo is titanium. As magic needs to touch it to be dispelled, he can still be slapped around a little.