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The idea of the Tooth Breezies came from The Rise of Darth Vulcan, which was taken off the site by its author, RHJunior, when he rage quit from this site. He migrated the story to Archive of Our Own, and has added a new chapter since, in case you were wondering.
Those are the orkiest Breezies I have ever did seen.
The idea of Tooth Breezies came from fic: "The Rise of Darth Vulcan" writen by RealityCheck. Unfortunately he left fimfiction completly and deleted all his stories and blogs. He tells that moderators told him to leave or harrased him so bad, that he left on his own. You can read his fic of Darth Vulcan here: http://archiveofourown.org/works/5553836/chapters/12811085
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Ah, ya gotta love that Breezie dialect. Long live the Nac Mac Feegle!
Cripes, I hate road trips like that. At least you had the laptop with you, so you could make some use of it. Looking forward to seeing just how bad things go from here: it's gonna be a slippery slide down into Hell for ol' Jackie. Thanks again for a great fic!
God I hated Twilight in this chapter. She believes everything can be solved with non-violence.
I wished while she wasn't looking when he distracted her, I was hoping he would punt her deeper into the forest, and I'm talking about American Football punt.
Had you not explained it, I'd have thought they were based on the Orks of Warhammer 40,000.... Which, given the general theme of this story, would have fit the theme rather well.
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7720794 Thanks for the name and link guys, It was driving me crazy! Shame about the doc though, I was really enjoying it.
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7720753 When I couldn't think of how to write the dialect, I drew heavy inspiration from Orks. I mean, come on! What's cooler than a bunch of tooth fairy orcs fighting giant spiders with twigs and pyromancy?
And so the crazy fuck makes his move. Please tell me we're going to get some KFG in Act III?
* That's Kentucky Fried Gryphon for the record.
Oh, look. A griffon Hitler.
I wonder if he'll shoot himself in the mouth to escape capture when his end comes.
7722074 I hope not.
I want Jack to get a hold of him and make his death niiiiiice and sloooowwwwww.
Rip and Tear? Reminds me of a certain song..
I think Jack would love this comparison of characters, as it now fits XD
Though, i think Carolus would prefer Doom Guy over Jack as he'd probably be more merciful.
7722899 Perhaps it reminds you of this?
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Wow! Impressive chapter! Very funny the breezies, the remember me to the wee free men xD
7723402 Glad you liked it!
You have fucked up. You have fucked up now.
Oh that's cute, they're like tiny flying Orks. That's not cute.
...I would say "Kill it with fire" but it's too late for that...
Also, using Hindu gods for monster names now I see~
7741581 what are you talking about? they sound adorable.
7742184 if you ask me I think Jack has found his people.
7721394 as an answer to your question
A bunch of toth fary orks fighting giant spiders with twigs and piromancy along side Jack ......with lazers
Speaking of which y is he not using his cool as shit lazer gun....I mean what the fuck u have infanit amo that can kill dam near anything and ui don't use it?
Lastly ...Jacks way of dealing with the brezyx cheef is simply hilarious. #clasic jack
Hmm... While writing Twilight as a petulant, bossy moron probably wasn't the most accurate choice, it didn't mar the chapter too much. In her defense, diplomats aren't supposed to seek violence and we only have the word of the ork fairies that Pomer was in the wrong. We believe em, cause we were there.. but Twi wasn't so I don't blame her for attempting to stop a summary execution. That said, I wasn't too bothered by it. Hey, the guy was a dick that got a lot of his people killed. Fuck him.
The whole nonviolence thing... Yeah I dunno how well that reflects either. They went unarmed against a changeling army, 0 fucks given, in canon, let alone the darker canon of this verse. But stopping Jack from blowing up forests is a good move. Animals in this world are basically sapient... They understand speech and act practically human most of the time... even insects.
The Rainbow Dash development is interesting. In canon she's a 'bolt now. Frankly I like this better. The Wonderbolts are exactly what Jack described. They're all flash no substance. Hell, half the time their behavior is downright shady. This is a much better pursuit for the bearer of Loyalty.
Love Jack's new knife.... Snicker snack indeed. Onward.
I wanna stomp that fucking Carolus bitch!
I hate it when people assume Chitin is some wondermaterial that's bulletproof. It really isn't. If you have a round that can break through a foot of wood it can penetrate a food of Chitin. Cellulose and Chitin are both polysaccharides, with Cellulose technically having the edge in toughness. But this is magic, in which case f*ck it: Magic.
Twilight should not have the authority to command jack. She has had no formal training on anything but magic. All the books she reads are ones that interests her, not the ones that are useful.
I like the idea that Celly kept them all and threw them at his head when he come back, with a resounding thwock-ock-ock-ock-ock.
So when did Jack suddenly turn into a pussy, anyway? Is this some kind of "Mane Six Bonus" thing?
I have to give him that one. We do.
On the upside, we know how to cook shit that isn't deep-fried Snickers bars.
Jesus fuck. I thought they were talking about regular sized spiders, which is plenty creepy enough already when you're the size of my balls. I didn't expect them to be attacked by giant spiders. That's just unfair.
You totally stole those little fuckers from Darth Vulcan, didn't you?
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fuckingfookin' dying over here.This is my favourite chapter of the story yet. It has all the things I like and none of the ones I don't.
I like these breezys. Can we have try and visit jack, only one chapter and they have jumped up to top 10 favorite characters.
welp, I already know that Carolus will die in the worst possible way. Gonna make a guess that Ada will break free, or barring that Jack will be forced to kill her. Either way, I'm looking forward to catching up to the newer chapters eventually.
It must have been a blast to write that Breezie dialouge lol
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It took a pretty specific headspace to be in to write it right, but it was pretty fun!
Wow, this chapter was hilarious.
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Well if she dies than Flitter will be the only alternative love interest... just saying
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All I could think of were the Orks from WarHammer when reading about the Tooth Breezies. Great chapter!
https://youtu.be/9IiHRSBAMwU
So everything was done by the Griffon. Chrysalis mind controlled or simply promised the same as the Griffon i guess. This will be bloody. More than any before
And that's act two eh? This story is🔥I can't help but binge read this and I know I'm going to regret it when it's over.