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As usual, this is some good stuff. Sorry to hear that you are slowing down on the chapter making, but alternatively glad to hear it isn't going on haitus. Keep up the good work.
My only question is ...is the last sexon pertaining to filter ... Did all that hapin or is that what she wants to hapin?
Also ... JACK YOU FU.....no whate ..
ADA YOU FUCKIN WHORE !!!GIT THE FUCK BACK FROM JACK!
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...sary bout that...
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Lost my cool there for a second.
I always imagine Tracer's face when I think of Ada, probably something about fast-talking British ladies...
7351527 I don't see a difference between rape and torture, except that in this case the rape was demonstrably less painful. To put it another way, I don't think rape is bad because it's sex, I think rape is bad because it's a form of torture.
Also remember, he was restrained while the ponies were experimenting on him, too. The loss of control is present in both cases.
7350148 It's held normally via a mouthpiece , but likely has canted sights and a pushing pressure trigger as opposed to a pulling pressure trigger
7350596 That all did happen, I just condensed about a month of time to a single section because I'm lazy.
7350868 I'll be honest, I had the same thoughts when writing her. I'd actually love to hunt down a token for her, but at this point it might just be for the best if I don't.
7352377 OK thanks... Whate how the hell did thay git howitzers up a fucking mountin don't those way like 6 tons or more a pec
7352940 Well, howitzers generally have trailers for travel, and for this case they'd have specially built trailers. Earth Ponies are also OP stronk.
Strangely enough, I like Ada's character a whole lot more than flitter's. Ada seems to know what needs to be done and when to do it, while Flitter just seems to wallow in self-pity when it comes to Jack.
huh.
Everything seems to be going pretty well for everyone, including Flitter, all things considered. I'm excited for more conflict, whether that be relationship drama or actual combat with dead people and high stakes.
I'm also glad that you're skippin over the training stuff. I like it when things blow up, and I have no doubts that explosions are long overdue for Jack.
Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for the eventual reunion! I just eat up this relationship drama stuff. Also, guns are cool. Keep up the good work!
7353966 To be fair, that's a really long walk.
Needs mor DAKA, NEVER ENUF DAKA!
7410896 Well now I'm gonna have to fix that. Glad you're enjoying it so far!
7353529 the problem is that ada is litl more than a distraction from his real problems both mentally and physically.
7353194 thay got that natural 20 strength and the strong back perk.
They gave more ammo for rifles than for the HMG's?!?!?
Someone fucked up.
A dangerous attitude. The real saying is "when good men do nothing." It may sound like subtle difference, but it's an important one. Sometimes, hesitation is the better part of valour - an unaimed shot kills friends as fast as enemies, metaphorically. Well, and literally, I guess.
I wonder if that will come to bite her in the ass.
Someone is part of Barons Brigade.
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Naw man... Do you know how they train solders now days?
They train them to shoot on reflex, and ask questions later... Ever since WW2 we have been shooting to kill...
"We have become good at training people to kill as a reflex and creating cold-blooded killers. The key to this is conditioning through desensitisation in training." - BBC
Anyway, I have never heard the saying "Evil triumphs when good men do nothing" - sounds like your pulling it from your ass
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I’ve heard a kinda similar phrase all my life. “Weak men hesitate, and let bad men take charge.”
Then again, that was an old man who thought being a tunnel rat was “no big deal”...
Got a farm gal that would like to reeducate you on the merits of apples, partner.
Unless they make the mistake selling stuff to the wrong guys like america and others...
Great chapter.