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You know you were asking for it. TL comic strike inbound:
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Man I love TL, how did you know?
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You wrote a story about a Marine
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Well you're... you're not wrong.
gotcha
Damn there is no Lunas icon!
This story is great, and I find myself anticipating to read it more so every time I finish with another chapter, as it appeals to my love of war and HiE fics as well. I had an entire review planned before the start of this chapter, but it is late, I am cold, and bored... so I forgot it. I will say however that I enjoyed this chapter tremendously (though not as much as the last one), and I look forward to more chapters.
The way he reacts to Flitter, the way he treats her, and the way she reacts. This is almost how it starts out for really good friends, though with less of the attacking/training situations. it is sweet though, even with how he chased her to get her to run, her training of how to fight, along with the training camp. It is good overall though.
I am really looking forward to reading more on how he reacts to Princess Luna, furthering Flitters training, what will eventually happen in the town, as I know he will eventually return if he has already made contact with a princess, and then there is the rogue band of humans. This is what interests me the most after everything that is happening with Flitter. I wish to see how Jack reacts to that group, as one, I can see something dramatic happening after his first full observation, or even him interacting with the humans. Whatever happens, there will be that 11th blimp on his radar... the pony, who will be able to silently observe Jack. And that there, that is an unknown variable to Jack, with unknown reactions to us the readers.
Either way, I look forward to reading more...
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It always gives me warm, fuzzy feelings reading how much people enjoy my work. Chapters 10 and 10.5 are already in progress, and I think that you'll like them as well.
I've got plans for everything that's being introduced. No matter how small it may seem, it does have a position in the grand scheme of things.
Also have a few more Omake chapters in mind, so I can write Jack being a gigantic pain in the ass and a huge trouble-maker without breaking the real story's flow and feeling. One hint for the next one: Drunken shenanigans and property destruction.
Luna x Jack?
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Luna X Jack? Now that would be off kilter
5954722 JUST DO IT
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A luna x jack ship might have some interesting elements. Namely how luna fares dealing with an actual soldier, compared to her former 'rebellion' that she did; not to mention jack having someone that can actually help him deal with the shit in his head.
...But ear cells regenerate. And that's not how tinnitus works—the lack of ringing means there is no sound in that frequency to hear, not the inability to hear it. First of all, the "ringing" is your brain compensating for the damage by dialing up the volume on the damaged part.
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I learned things today.
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Yep, there is no need to fear the ringing.
—Well, that's not entirely true. If your ears are ringing nearly all the time, that's a sign of serious, potentially permanent damage to your hearing, the truth behind the myth of losing the ability to hear certain sounds. Thankfully, modern medical research suggests that the tissues of the cochlea (the part of the ear that actually "hears" sound entering your ear) are more adaptable and recoverable than previously thought, meaning that even people who have lost hearing can potentially recover at least some of it through advancements in medical hearing therapies.
If you start having issues with ringing, especially after listening to something loud for prolonged periods and/or regular intervals, make sure to take "quiet breaks" to let them recover. Light exercise (to promote the cycle of nutrient-carrying fluids to damaged parts) and general rest are also suggested to help speed up recovery and eliminate temporary ringing.
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I've taken that section out, thank you for pointing out my mistake.
To be honest, I stole that little segment from Children of Men. Knew I shouldn't have trusted Hollywood!
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Well, it's not necessarily bad. Technically incorrect, but not a bad addition to the story. After all, that's a myth most people don't know the truth about, so it stands to reason the main character might believe it was true, or at least be unsure of its veracity. He's a flawed being, so he's not always correct or certain of himself.
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True enough, but I don't enjoy spreading misinformation, unless I can state nearby that the character may not be right.
Ok just a couple of things, you have two ranks switched around here. You said that Jack is a Marine, You allso said that he is a Specialist, Specialist is the U.S. ARMY E-4 rank. The Marines E4 is Corporal (the Army's is too but the promotion from Specialist to Corporal is lateral, and does not include a pay raise. It just means that you are an NCO now.) You also said that one of the Army NCO's is a E7 Gunnery Sergeant. This is a MARINE rank, the Army Equivalent is the E-7 Sergeant First Class. FOR REFERENCE: http://www.militaryfactory.com/ranks/marine_ranks.asp http://www.army.mil/symbols/armyranks.html
What, why was Luna in a human guise? If she was to better speak to Jack then sure but, is this the first time she done something like this? I need to read the main story...
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In my mind, that's just how his mind had her appearing, in the most appealing form possible. Add in her wanting people to be comfortable when she invades their minds, and you get that.
You wanted help with spelling errors.
1) "just black will be fine." I think you meant jack.
2) “Sounds hinky. Like one of those threads on tulpas and other bullshit.” I think it's supposed to be kinky.
Other than that good chapter.
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Thanks for the vigilance, but neither of those are wrong. 1 is referring to his dreams, and how he'd prefer nothing over what he has. 2 is actually a real word, referring to something as suspect, or unreliable.
O yeah! Luna made contact! He get his needed meds soon