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Hm, so.... George could still be alive.....
I think your storytelling has improved a lot since you started this story. Keep it up!
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Thanks! I've been doing my best to continue improving, while avoiding outside interference.
When does the first sex scene start?
Dude. I seriously cried.
Well done.
I think the most important part of this -- beyond Jack's family itself -- is that the war's last vestiges lasted over 15 months since Jack fucked a nuke into oblivion. He might have been the cause of the war's end, but he didn't end it right there -- and the rest of the family still paid the price along with him. But he's the only one people remember.
There's nothing quite so fucked up as war.
You better hope water.bottle doesn't stop working. Heh.
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Can we have our moment of feels, reflection, and respect for dead fictional characters, ya insensitive bastard.
But, to answer your question, there is a high possibility of a scene coming up. Hollywood movies are my basis for this assumption.
Oh, also, will Jack be getting a few upgrades/new prosthetic parts while he's here? The amount of permanent injuries he accumulated over the course of the story sometimes makes me cringe at what he's going through. He seriously needs some fixing up, almost to the point of becoming more cyborg than man.
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You'll be getting your answer very soon.
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Nice. I'm looking forward to the rise of Terminator Jack.
Da feelings
God I love this story.
Oh drat I caught up
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I told you it got better!
Fuck man, I've been watching this story since it started and I've been a fan even when you killed off so many characters I liked ;w;
What are your plans for George? Will we ever find out what happened to him, or was his fate put in to add a touch of realism to the family? You know, there are a lot of people out there who have disappeared without a trace, with no hope of finding them.
Was George one of those people, or is it some open plot point that's going to come up later?
(I'm kind of hoping that it's the former; not everything that happens has to be connected to the main character in a story, a thing a lot of writers tend to forget. Jack's a badass, but he's not the center of the world, as his 80-year time trip showed. They all moved on.)
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George's disappearance is actually a nod to something else. I've used him in a Pen and Paper Fallout Equestria, where he was sucked up and tossed down into that universe. He won't be reappearing, as he never makes it back to Earth. However, in that universe, he becomes a badass of his own rights, and starts a family. That is of course, non-canon for Ballad.
All caught up! Glad to make it here just before the real fun begins. But man those were some heavy feels. This is probably my favorite story now. Wonder if you're going to give Jack a easy or hard way to get better. Earth should prove to be a interesting obstacle for this little group to overcome. Delta King is still in play but that means others will start noticing the pre-invasion tags. I'm wracking my brain here trying to figure out just what you're going to decide to have them find that will not only turn the tide of the war but be feasibly possible to take without a bloody army coming down on them. Anyways until next time.
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Im glad you've enjoyed the story so far, and hope the rest meets your expectations. As for how difficult things will be for the team, just remember, 'Anything worth doing isn't easy to do.'
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True that, I look forward to the rest of the story.
Well dammit... caught up, for now. This chapter was something, though the poignancy surrounding the losses here clashes for me internally with the issues I have with particular, previous chapters. Ah well.
Well... it was actually probably easier... given that Rarity's boutique burned to the ground along with the rest of Ponyville and Rarity is either still mind-controlled or just dead. Not that anyone seems to really care. I'm sure Flitter is eager to shoot her at the first opportunity since Simoh missed his chance. /sarcasm
BUT! This chapter... was really good. I feel I should thank you for not going into a more... er... intimate scene there between these two. At the same time I feel I don't need to. That wasn't going to happen and I knew it, and I'm glad. The way it went here was amazing.
Of course, you just had to mention Tim Horton's. I lived in Blaine, WA a few years back while seeing a girl living just across the border after we met in college. The relationship ended up not working out and I moved back to the Midwest for some stupid reason. Frankly, I miss Tim Horton's more than the girl. Ohio has em... but I'm really not close enough to any for that to help.
EDIT... holy shit there's some in Indiana now. Forty minute drive one way, well damn, that's not bad.
Caught up
Everyone died so close together...
All of the children died within about 3 months of each other, with exception to George...
Especially the parents. The day after Guy died, Sandy died... Did she commit suicide after losing her whole family?
This is depressing.
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It's fairly common that when people are together for a long time, when one dies, the other dies very quickly after due to natural causes.
In find it cool that Jack is only a year older than I am.
Ah, I remember when I was but a wee naive reader about 250k words ago thinking Flitter was about to confess. The journey was a long one, but it seems we've finally made it!
WOOOOO Fucking FINALLYYY!
We have had to go through SO much to get here, but it has all paied off!
Well damn I dont know what to say I mean the story ain't even done yet and its probably the most emotional one I have read yet and boy have I read a lot of heart wrenchers. Man this has got to be the most misty eyed I have ever been over a story scene Read dead redemption 2 and that game ruined me for a bit so I must say this.
You have my respect you are a damn goodass writer
Keep up the great work and keep making me feel sad. Only the best stories can.
Husband and wife, dying a day apart from one another. Shows that they truly were one and loved each other. Where one went, the other was not long before following. A somber chapter...a good one. Stupid onions must be everywhere or something.
Incredible chapter, very many emotions happening.