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Out of question: Is Nasty Jack an original character or does he come from another source? Love the character's design either way and was just curious about his source!
~ Meatshield :D
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Jack is indeed an original character as far as I'm aware, though he does draw little tidbits from all over. He's been through a number of iterations, before the one you see now.
Your description of Jack's torture gave me some real heebie-jeebies. I fucking hate needles.
I am angry at Darneil and the Griffons... that is all.
Watch their plan fail because Discord fucks with them
...
... I hate Darneil. I hate Carolus. I don't think I've hated a bunch of antagonists so intensely since frickin' Snad from Drowtales. Smug, crafty motherfuckers.
Flitter is gonna crush Darneil's balls like a pair of Kinder eggs when she finds out.
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Makes me hope Jack gets to go through with his threats
"Jack" fucked up his cover twice times in this chapter, and I don't mean with Flitter. He does a bad job at infiltration...
Does Jack still have that tracker put into him at DRMSI?
Could prove useful...
me
if
past
in... though technically this one might be acceptable as is, it's an awkward phrasing.
...Who?
Eheh… I have no idea. We'll see soon though. Help me cover it up with this bird seed.”
Wow Darnell is an ultra moroon.
Corporal Forth stepped out as I tried to get my bearings, and she struck we with a weapon that destroyed my armour.
Struck me.
I read that scene between ‘Jack’ and Flitter and my knuckles are still white from how hard I was balling my fist up.
Does this story have a happy ending? If not I'm probably gonna stop here
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Everything comes together and it's a little bitter sweet.
Why am I reading this?
This is nothing more than a torture fic. Every character is being tortured over and over in all manner of ways 3/4 of the screen time.
If there ever was any sort of deeper meaning it was pulverized by the rape/torture fixation with a sprinkle of revengewank.
There's a short but expressive word for it - sadism.
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I mean, it has the Dark tag, Sex, Gore, and a warning in the header. You brought this on yourself.
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So it is a [torture fantasy]?
Then it's missing something in the description. There's nothing wrong with adding a [bunch] of [descriptive] [tags] in the head-piece by hand, even if it would cut on the exposure.