• Member Since 15th Nov, 2012
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Silent Ghost


Short person who probably has an unhealthy obsession with technology

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Her name is Ilik, controller of the Zephyr Warframe.

Taking a key as a reward, it's what started all this, a tampered key. The key is glowing, and the Corpus have found her. It all happened too quick to remember, a bright flash and suddenly the heat of the upper atmosphere is breaking the glass, Ordis is offline and the ground's getting close.


Note: Tags are subject to change over the course, because I have no idea what i'm doing with my life anymore.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 23 )

Sweet, a warframe story added to the warframe group on my birthday. Hope it goes well, shame because of my extreamly slow update speed.

Great work, really. But seriously, i can't wait to find out what happened with our little Zephyr. So, let's celebrate this new glorious Warframe story.
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Oh, and may the Lotus be with you. :trollestia:

5034641 oh well Happy Birthday, glad i could make you day a little better.

5035964 Thanks so much, I'm gonna need all the luck I can get.

This is a pretty good start,eager for more.

Are – You trying to kill us?! – you sure this is safe, Operator?” Ilik questioned as his alter-ego cut in.

I think you meant Ordis here.

Good job, I think this may be fairly interesting :twilightsmile:

5048333 Whoops! My bad! :twilightsheepish:

There, corrected. :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I see someone else made a Warframe fic, let us see if it is worthy enough to join the rest.

5221120 there is another warframe fic? What's it called?

5221158 He made the story Endure of Eternity, its really great.

5221158 The one I have. Currently only Warframe fic that is higher then the others here.

5221921 Two chapters are in the process.

Now this is getting interesting....

About time for ponies to meet the Tenno :pinkiehappy:

Warframe fics are always welcome here! We don't have enough of this crossover!

If I were to point out some flaws in your fic, though, it would be your tendency to forget about the existence of synonyms. Seeing something being described as a crevice three times in a row really breaks the flow.
Of course there were many, many more situations like that, but now I could recall only that.

I highly recommend you writing with a thesaurus, or using WriteMonkey as your text editor - all you have to do there is ctrl+RMB pn a word, and it displays you the synonyms, antonyms and other stuff.

Try to have at least three names for each thing, and just shuffle through them, that's the basic way of avoiding repeating names.

Other than that, good job so far, keep it up :twilightsmile:

5465707 Yes, i do agree with you, I am repetitive on certain words when I should use synonyms. As a beginner writer, I have plenty to learn and i know I'll get better in time if I learn from my mistakes. Thank you for bringing that to my attention, i greatly appreciate it and will try to improve in the future.

I'm glad you enjoy the story. Stick around, I'm planning on keeping it interesting for a good, long while.

S.G.

Im really loving this story so far, please do keep writing!

Comment posted by CryHavoc21 deleted May 26th, 2015

Lotus still sings to you Tenno.......

i have a question. What are you going to do with the warframe's lore about " the second dream questline?

6903570 Well, mainly I plan to use it to my advantage, to be short. But, are there any specifics that you're talking about?

6903570 A good question indeed, and after a few days of thinking this over, I believe I have a suitable answer.

First of all, without giving too much away, Transference will play a role within the story. As will the operator, as Ilik will be up and about a good portion of the time rather than just sitting in the Somatic Link and interacting through her warframe. That's not saying that her warframe will be in the Liset collecting dust, they will also be up and about.

That's about as specific as I can get with this question. If you want me to be a little more, feel free to reply or message me.

Cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Is this story still going? Would love to read more! :pinkiehappy:

I'm a bit confused are working with the tenno in pod controlling the warframe or tenno in warframe it almost seems like a combination of the two. Good story btw.

Sees the word Tenno, ignores context, runs to it faster than a poor warframe player to an ayatin sculpture

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