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Hivemind


Captain Cutie on duty!

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Canderous Nord was just a simple pilot in the universe of New Eden, doing whatever he can do to get by, yet he soon finds his way into the ranks of the Gallente Federation Navy. But an expedition through an ancient stargate goes awry, sending he and his division into another part of the universe, one filled not with other humans, but with ponies. Now Canderous, with some help from the new-found species, must find a way to return to their home.

Eve Online crossover

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 272 )

I assume it's meant to say "It's about damn TIME he called." Anyway a good read and I look forward to reading more!:pinkiehappy:

>EVE Online / MLP crossover
> sudden urge to restart EVE account

MY LIFE IS RUINED, AGAIN :raritycry:

Tracked! :pinkiehappy:
Looking forward to reading more!

Ho ho! This is a pretty good start to this story. Tracking! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Wow, just...wow. I never thought so many people would track this so quick :pinkiegasp:

Don't worry, I will post more chapters just as soon as Jonsey stops poking me :twilightangry2:

Will i understand this story if i never herd of new Eden?:rainbowhuh:

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It is an Eve Online and MLP "crossover". If you don't play the game, then probably not :P

loved EVE, hold on and let me check... give me a sec...

Yup, still love MLP

THIS IS GOING TO BE EPIC!!!:flutterrage:

SWEET MOTHER OF GOD. YES. ALL OF MY YES.

I see Auto-following and auto-emailing was not in vain. This is the crossover I've been waiting for. Also, it's totally a stargate.

No need to apologize, this chapter seems like it's crucial for the plot... or well, that's what i think.
Not all chapter have to be all about action...

Keep up the good work

cant wait for the next instalment, also, at one point you used thier where you should have used there.

just sayin':scootangel:

I think... or maybe that was something else? :rainbowhuh:

If I don't see a Rifter, you will make me a sad pony.

Or better yet, a T2 Incursus.

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*Gallente Federation Navy*

Do you see any Rifters around? I THINK NOT :flutterrage:

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Well they /are/ allies with the Minmatar. And c'mon man! You gotta have the Hero Rifter!

Let me guess the moon has tech. That would cause all hell to break lose.:pinkiecrazy:

Wow, about time I see an Eve Crossover! I was planning on making one myself =\

"Sometimes a poor soul comes along and forgets that they has a Global Criminal Flag on their head." I think it should be 'they have'

Ahh good old Dodixie, I have some funny memories involving that system involving smart bombs and a kick out station with alot of soft squishy frigs, pods, and haulers flying around, and my security status going to -10 from +5.0 in 10 seconds flat.:derpytongue2:

Oh by the way i am surprised this does not have either dark or tragedy tags to it, this is New Eden we are talking about. Also you should probably add a crossover tag to it because it is a cross over with the eve universe.

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The moon has tech? What do you mean?

Speaking as a EVE Online pilot, this is going quite well so far. Nords final 'farewell' to Malak is probably quite accurate to the sort of message that would be sent in game.

Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to when this story really kicks off.

The description sounds like it's a Metroid crossover.:facehoof:

"Capsuleers are humans who received the necessary training and are surgically enhanced with implants, which allows them to establish a neural link with a spaceship's digital systems."
"In order to control a spaceship, a capsuleer climbs into the liquid chamber of a hydrostatic capsule, which is then filled with ectoplasmic liquids and the capsuleer floats inside this egg-like liquid chamber. This serves two purposes:

the feeling of weightlessness and lack of physical contact relaxes the body and allows for a more effective neural link.
the liquid functions as a cushion both in artificial gravity and zero gravity conditions, prevents external stimuli (such as impacts) from disturbing the capsuleer."
-evelopedia
Players are controlling a capsuleer in EVE, seeing that the main characters name of this fic is the same as a players, I assume it's a capsuleer.
I was a bit annoyed that you got one of the fundamental parts of EVE lore wrong. Otherwise I think it's a good start and I'll read on.
Keep up the good work!

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Very few players know that, not to mention that ALL capsuleers can walk in stations now, so they are not always in their liquid-filled capsules. And yes, the name in this fic is the same name as a player in EVE.

Let me guess, the EVE gate has reopened? Hmm, space ponies perhaps? I look forward to read your future chapters.

A few nitpicks:
-You're switching between tenses quite often. Try to work on that.
-As somebody else already said, capsuleers don't control their ships from cockpits, but from the capsule, as the name implies.
-You said 25 million ISK don't amount to much. A planet-dweller could live his entire life in luxury for 1 million ISK. An ISK is an insane amount of money. While it may be true that for capsuleers it isn't much, this just means an ordinary capsuleer is insanely, obscenely rich.

Otherwise, this is looking quite good so far!

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My response to your nitpicks:

1. Switching tenses? Not happening :moustache:
2. I was aware of this already. But if I put the main character inside of a capsule, it would make this story dry and boring. What the buck do you think was gonna happen when the major pony parts come up? That every capsule-dwelling person was just gonna sit in their bath of antifreeze and wave hello to the ponies?
3. Canderous is a "freelance" pilot, doing whatever he can to get by as the story description tells it, and buying the the larger, more powerful ships, like a Hyperion, can take quite a while for a freelance pilot.

Those nitpicks nitpicked me quite a bit. I knew someone was gonna scream about it sooner or later :facehoof:

:pinkiehappy: Always wanted an EvE Crossover - sudden urge to restart account ;-;

:pinkiehappy: Always wanted an EvE Crossover - sudden urge to restart account ;-;

:pinkiehappy: Always wanted an EvE Crossover - sudden urge to restart account ;-;

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Triple post? Coincidence? I THINK NOT! :twilightangry2:

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Well in EVE Online tech or technetium is a very valuable and pretty rare resource that is located on only on moons, and it is what 0.0 alliances fight over. It is used in T2 production.

Sweet Cynabals Batman! Some unknown viewer of my story actually messaged me in-game :pinkiehappy:

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Better make it good or someone may just blow you up over it.:trollestia:

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The state can kiss my polished, blaster rapping ass

So far, love it, seems very promising :heart:. I wonder what space-travelling technology is available to the ponies :rainbowhuh: Wooden magic-propelled starships maybe ? with pie launchers, apple cannons, and frienship laser beams ? :derpytongue2:

My challenge now will be to NOT reactivate my EVE account :pinkiecrazy:

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This is a Human\Pony first contact situation. Just think of the sheer horror if Celestia got her hands on an Avatar :twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops:

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I can picture it.:trollestia:

This actually made me restart my account.
@Hivemind The Federation can ... I sat here for 4 minutes thinking. Still nothing :x.

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In my EVE story she already have 4 :trollestia:

nice chapter cant wait for the next this story is still quite interesting even without the ponies since i dont play EVE, but once the ponies do come into play it will become even more awesome keep up the great work :pinkiehappy:

Sorry if part 4 has a few nitpicks or errors in it. My brain no work good on holerdays:ajbemused:

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Rifter seriously... the rifter can fly and fuck it self, it got nothing on the Wolf we need some Wolf´s in here asap

well that suck`t... no more pony until chapter 5.5
aside from that this is a good story so far well worth tracking. i don't know what you have planned story wise so far and how the pony's will take part in it but what ever you do im sure it will kick ass.
but Hivemind plz try to hurry up to the pony/human first encounter im relay looking forward to that part, gonna be interesting to see how the pony's react to 2km+ space ship flying over ponyville lol´z

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Fah. If we're rolling Tech Two, then there's no beating a solid Rocket Hawk. If someone brings a dramiel in here, I will beat you.

>>December 24th
>Sins of New Eden update
>Happy Birthday to me!

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