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Dimentio


Master of dimensions... Pleaser of crowds... I am... Dimentio

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This is a crossover with Super Paper Mario, I'd like to start by saying that Dimentio is owned by Nintendo, MLP is owned by Hasbro, yadda yadda yadda.

Dimentio-the insane dimension shifting jester- is older than many might believe...Losing the Chaos Heart was not his first failure and will not be his end. Meanwhile on another plane of existence, a strange book found by Trixie leads to a spiraling chain of events that could very well lead to the end of Equestria and all worlds as we know them.

(PS.this is not a rewrite of Master of Dimensions, Pleaser of Crowds, the only true relation between the two is Dimentio)

(PPS.Unfortunately, due to there being only five character tags I couldn't tag Discord)

(PPPS. I'm quite unsure about which tags to use at the moment, but you can be certain that they'll be added as it goes along)
Cover art by: JazzyQ

Preread by: Sky Blue CMC

Edited by: Nobody (would still like to fix that)

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 49 )

Ooh! Let's see where this goes... :pinkiecrazy: If this isn't a one-shot, that is.

4899981 nonono, not a one shot. Probably going to be about six chapters.

4899989 Sweet! I will be looking forward to more! (This will be one of the things that keep me fandomly sane during the school period...)

4899995 don't remind me about school. I get to start college tomorrow.

Dimentio has to be one of my all time favorite villains. Mostly due to how little we know of him and how insanely brilliant he is.

4900291 Insanely brilliant indeed. I'm pretty excited for the chapters to follow.

I think I'll start with the green one! :moustache: The shag upon his lip will make a fine trophy! :trollestia:

Given my past experience with this place, I knew that night time was incredibly dangerous, even for ponies as powerful as myself.

I think that "great and" should be added between the words "as" and "powerful" to make it a better reference to her self-induced nickname. :trixieshiftleft: Otherwise, great and powerful story! :trixieshiftright: also, nighttime is one word.

4905411

It's a hyphenated word, if you wanna get anal.

I'm ready for the next chapter whenever you're ready, Dimentio! :twilightsmile:

Dimentio gets partially turned into a book? Hmm... the Dark Prognosticus, perhaps? Or am I thinking too far ahead?:twilightoops:

Onwards!

The Great and Powerful Unsure approves of this story. :trixieshiftright: Is Minotaur really the plural of itself? Like Drougr and Falmer in Skyrim?

4909786 according to spell check, but it has steered me wrong before.

How far will Trixie and Dimentio make it in Minotauria? :trixieshiftleft:

4909931 Not terribly far. They must get some practice before they "entertain" the ponies.

4910046 Good. What kind of story lacks conflict? (Rhetorical, don't answer.)

:pinkiegasp: I leave for 3 days, i get 338 feed updates, another dimentio story, and 7 PMs!

4909799 I had a prank pulled on me, where someone messed with spellcheck and all the common words were automatically 'corrected' to things like "Penis" or "Mallard".

4921059 Sounds like something I'd do.

About the Author's Note: It's fine, I still got to read it first. It's good, there's just one minor flaw:

"Right...Let's test that theory." Dimentio and I said in unison. I suddenly felt him heavily influencing my magic as the minotaur in front of my was surrounded by a golden box just as the one that we had met near the border.

Instead of my, it should say me or my eyes.

WAAAAAY too short. I expect you to follow through on that promise.

4975294 Fixed, thanks.


4975748 I wouldn't be promising otherwise. :derpytongue2:

4975870 Writing has been hard to do lately though, my schedule isn't exactly open.

4975899 I can sympathize. Stupid schoolwork...:twilightangry2:

The fools that dare delay the story of my master must pay.
Where are they?

5018961 Haven't been able to write this week, I should have a chance this Friday or Saturday.

praise Grambi, a super paper mario fanfic where Dimentio is actually in character! not too crazy, not head over heals for someones stupid OC, not running too much off lines from the game, and with a reasonable-ish origin story headcanon. i applaud you, friend, i did not expect this one. i certainly didn't expect him to be hanging around Trixie, something i myself have been meaning to write for a long while now. this is going to be a treat when it gets longer.

5061776 Well...the headcanon was so I could give Celestia and Luna decent reactions. Something I tend to have plenty of difficulty doing normally. I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far though, I've been meaning to update this, but I've been way too busy lately...I also owe an update to at least one of my other stories.

Finally read the first chapter and it did not disappoint. :twilightsmile:

Well now, it took long enough. Quite worth the wait however.

The music was a nice touch. :pinkiesmile:

5812288 I thought so, what is a performer without his theme?

Damn you. I just got done playing Super Paper Mario, and now I wanna play it again....

5813255 I'm much more of a TTYD fan myself.

5813386 I like em all. Sticker Star....slightly less so.

5813397 Never played Sticker Star, it looked disappointing.

5813462 Really great game, if you can get it on sale. I just disliked the complexity of alot of boss fights.

5812984 So true. So very, very true.

5816749 Gizoogle is amazing for prank chapters.

4900395 "SHAG?! This mustache is all LUIGI!"

The master of dimensions, the pleaser of the crowds.
I. AM. DIMENTIO!!!

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